Nov. 8, 2021
I Try To Have Fun in my Free Time
Usually I go to gim three times a week. In really is not a gim, is a dojo, where I can practice aikido. The atmostphere at dojo with mates is very good. But while you are training, you must have very carefullness and concentration in the several techniques for not damage your mate. Is a good sport, but unfortunately, I have four week without practice due to an injury in a bad fall. I also like to go to library to see some journals, or to go to take a milk coffee to a granja close house. A granja is like a bar, but don't sell alcoholic drinks. The rest of my free time, I'm drawing and painting.
Usually I go to githe gym three times a week.
In really it is not a giym, isbut a dojo, where I can practice aikido.
The atmostphere at the dojo with my mates is very good.
But while you are training, you must have be very carefullness and concentration in the severale with the various techniques forso you do not damage your mate.
It is a good sport, but unfortunately, I have four weeks without practice due to an injury in a bad fall.
This is grammatically fine, but 'It is a good sport, but unfortunately, I won't be able to practice for the next four weeks because I injured myself in a bad fall.' sounds more natural to me.
I also like to ggoing to tohe library to seeread some journals, or to go to takegoing to get a milk coffee ato a granja close to my house.
A granja is like a bar, but they don't sell alcoholic drinks.
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Good job! Just be careful not to forget words like 'the' and 'it' in sentences.
Nov. 9, 2021
Thanks a lot Levi for the corrections.
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I Try To Have Fun in my Free Time |
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Usually I go to gim three times a week. Usually I go to |
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In really is not a gim, is a dojo, where I can practice aikido. In really it is not a g |
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The atmostphere at dojo with mates is very good. The atmostphere at the dojo with my mates is very good. |
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But while you are training, you must have very carefullness and concentration in the several techniques for not damage your mate. But while you are training, you must have be very careful |
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Is a good sport, but unfortunately, I have four week without practice due to an injury in a bad fall. It is a good sport, but unfortunately, I have four weeks without practice due to an injury in a bad fall. This is grammatically fine, but 'It is a good sport, but unfortunately, I won't be able to practice for the next four weeks because I injured myself in a bad fall.' sounds more natural to me. |
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I also like to go to library to see some journals, or to go to take a milk coffee to a granja close house. I also like |
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A granja is like a bar, but don't sell alcoholic drinks. A granja is like a bar, but they don't sell alcoholic drinks. |
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The rest of my free time, I'm drawing and painting. |
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