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MaryRen

April 18, 2024

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I tried to learn English in a fun way

I like listening to English-dubbed anime(my favourite anime is Saint Tail).Thanks to the advancement of technology,I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors.Though there are some mistakes,most of them are correct.I can look them up in the electronic dictionary and needn't guess how they are spelt(very difficult to guess).And there are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching.My eyesight is poor so I prefer listening to them rather than watching.I was used to paying much money for off-line English and Japanese courses and bought plenty of online Japanese courses.Nowadays,I decided to pay no more money for language learning and try to make the most of free online resources.As for speaking skills,I like chatting with AI in English.

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I tried tTo lLearn English in a fFun wWay

Don't forget to capitalize important words in the title

I like listening to English-dubbed anime(, with my favourite anime isbeing Saint Tail). Thanks to the advancement ofs in technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some programs makes mistakes, most of them are correct.I can look them up inwhat it does is quite accurate. I can look up words with the electronic dictionary, removing andy needn't to guess how they are spelt( (which very difficult to guess).And t There are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching.M Since my eyesight is poor so, I prefer listening to them rather thanover watching. them. I was used to paying mucha lot of money for off-line English and Japanese courses and bought plenty of online Japanese courses. Nowadays,I decided to pay no more money for language learning and try to make the most of free online resources. As for practicing my speaking skills, I likeenjoy chatting with AI in English.

I notice that you don't really put spaces after your periods. If you don't do that, they come off as one though, *despite* the fact that a period is technically there.

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MaryRen

April 19, 2024

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Thank you so much💐My plain sentences have become quite sophisticated now due to your help😄

I like listening to English-dubbed animeanime dubbed in English (my favourite anime is "Saint Tail"). Thanks to the advancement oflatest technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some mistakes, most of them are correct. I can look them up in theup words I don't know in my electronic dictionary and needn'tdon't have to guess how they are spelt(veryled, which is great because it's difficult to guess). And there are many free online coursetutorials taught in English whichthat I enjoy watching. My eyesight is poor, so I prefer listening to them rather thanover watching. I was used to paying mucha lot of money for off-line English and Japanese courses and boughtoked plenty of online Japanese courses. Nowadays, I decided to pay no morestop paying money for language learningcourses and try to make the most of free online resources. As for speaking skills, I like chatting with AI in English.

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I like listening to original Japanese anime xD
Same language resource, different languages!

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MaryRen

April 19, 2024

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Thank you so much💐 I enjoy Japanese version too. However, whether I can understand the lines or not really depends on the words they spoke. I can understand most of the lines in the 17th episode of Saint Tail, but I can hardly understand the 16th episode

I like listening to English-dubbed anime (my favourite anime is Saint Tail). Thanks to therecent advancement ofs in technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some mistakes, most of them areit is correct. I can look them words up in thean electronic dictionary and needn't guess how they are spelt (very difficult to guess).And Also, there are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching. My eyesight is poor, so I prefer listening to them rather than watching. I was used to paying mucha lot of money for off-line English and Japanese courses, and bought plenty of online Japanese courses.Nowadays, Recently, however, I decided not to pay noany more money for language learning and to try to make the most of free online resources. As for speaking skills, I like chatting with AI in English.

"Thanks to the advancement of technology" is correct, but sounds too formal here. "Thanks to new technologies" would also be an appropriate wording.

"most of them are correct" would be okay if you mentioned what "them" is previously - i.e. the associated noun - for example "automatically generated subtitles".

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Nice! It's cool that you use so much tech for language learning.

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MaryRen

April 18, 2024

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Thank you so much💐In my opinion,language learning will be more and more convenient in the future.

I like listening to English-dubbed anime(my favourite anime is Saint Tail). Thanks to the advancement of technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some mistakes, most of them are correct. I can look them up in the electronic dictionary and needn't guess how they are spelt(very difficult to guess).And t There are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching. My eyesight is poor so I prefer listening to them rather than watching. I was used to paying muchlots of money for off-line English and Japanese courses and bought plenty of online Japanese courses., some of which were offline. Nowadays, I decided to pay no morehat I no longer wanted to pay money for language learning and try to make the most of free online resources. As for speaking skills, I like chatting with AI in English.

No glaring issues, very good! I just have a couple of small technical corrections. 'Offline' is one word. Also, make sure to put a space after your punctuation marks. e.g '...advancement of technology, I can use...' Generally, it's bad practice to start sentences with 'and.' It can be done, but if in doubt, drop it! I changed a few of your phrasings to make them sound more natural, but they weren't incorrect, as such, before.

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Overall, very good! There were a few issues of word choice and minor syntactical errors. But nothing that obscured understanding. You should be proud of the command you are gaining over the language. Just make sure to put spaces after commas!

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MaryRen

April 18, 2024

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Oh,thank you so much💐It's a little more convenient to put spaces after commas on computer than mobile but I will keep in mind.I'm a little curious to know if you keep spaces after commas only in articles or in short messages like chatting with others.

I tried to learn English in a fun way


I tried tTo lLearn English in a fFun wWay

Don't forget to capitalize important words in the title

I like listening to English-dubbed anime(my favourite anime is Saint Tail).Thanks to the advancement of technology,I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors.Though there are some mistakes,most of them are correct.I can look them up in the electronic dictionary and needn't guess how they are spelt(very difficult to guess).And there are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching.My eyesight is poor so I prefer listening to them rather than watching.I was used to paying much money for off-line English and Japanese courses and bought plenty of online Japanese courses.Nowadays,I decided to pay no more money for language learning and try to make the most of free online resources.As for speaking skills,I like chatting with AI in English.


I like listening to English-dubbed anime(my favourite anime is Saint Tail). Thanks to the advancement of technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some mistakes, most of them are correct. I can look them up in the electronic dictionary and needn't guess how they are spelt(very difficult to guess).And t There are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching. My eyesight is poor so I prefer listening to them rather than watching. I was used to paying muchlots of money for off-line English and Japanese courses and bought plenty of online Japanese courses., some of which were offline. Nowadays, I decided to pay no morehat I no longer wanted to pay money for language learning and try to make the most of free online resources. As for speaking skills, I like chatting with AI in English.

No glaring issues, very good! I just have a couple of small technical corrections. 'Offline' is one word. Also, make sure to put a space after your punctuation marks. e.g '...advancement of technology, I can use...' Generally, it's bad practice to start sentences with 'and.' It can be done, but if in doubt, drop it! I changed a few of your phrasings to make them sound more natural, but they weren't incorrect, as such, before.

I like listening to English-dubbed anime (my favourite anime is Saint Tail). Thanks to therecent advancement ofs in technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some mistakes, most of them areit is correct. I can look them words up in thean electronic dictionary and needn't guess how they are spelt (very difficult to guess).And Also, there are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching. My eyesight is poor, so I prefer listening to them rather than watching. I was used to paying mucha lot of money for off-line English and Japanese courses, and bought plenty of online Japanese courses.Nowadays, Recently, however, I decided not to pay noany more money for language learning and to try to make the most of free online resources. As for speaking skills, I like chatting with AI in English.

"Thanks to the advancement of technology" is correct, but sounds too formal here. "Thanks to new technologies" would also be an appropriate wording. "most of them are correct" would be okay if you mentioned what "them" is previously - i.e. the associated noun - for example "automatically generated subtitles".

I like listening to English-dubbed animeanime dubbed in English (my favourite anime is "Saint Tail"). Thanks to the advancement oflatest technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some mistakes, most of them are correct. I can look them up in theup words I don't know in my electronic dictionary and needn'tdon't have to guess how they are spelt(veryled, which is great because it's difficult to guess). And there are many free online coursetutorials taught in English whichthat I enjoy watching. My eyesight is poor, so I prefer listening to them rather thanover watching. I was used to paying mucha lot of money for off-line English and Japanese courses and boughtoked plenty of online Japanese courses. Nowadays, I decided to pay no morestop paying money for language learningcourses and try to make the most of free online resources. As for speaking skills, I like chatting with AI in English.

I like listening to English-dubbed anime(, with my favourite anime isbeing Saint Tail). Thanks to the advancement ofs in technology, I can use software to recognize the words spoken by actors. Though there are some programs makes mistakes, most of them are correct.I can look them up inwhat it does is quite accurate. I can look up words with the electronic dictionary, removing andy needn't to guess how they are spelt( (which very difficult to guess).And t There are many free online courses taught in English which I enjoy watching.M Since my eyesight is poor so, I prefer listening to them rather thanover watching. them. I was used to paying mucha lot of money for off-line English and Japanese courses and bought plenty of online Japanese courses. Nowadays,I decided to pay no more money for language learning and try to make the most of free online resources. As for practicing my speaking skills, I likeenjoy chatting with AI in English.

I notice that you don't really put spaces after your periods. If you don't do that, they come off as one though, *despite* the fact that a period is technically there.

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