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SonDepTrai21st

June 26, 2025

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I tried but procrastination keeps me down.

Every day, I wake up, feeling tired, miserable, then go back in bed.

Wake up again at 1pm, open my eyes, reach on my iPad.

Play youtube, anime, movies etc. No learn English, learn a high-income skill, piano, or do something.

My life is just keeps repeating, everyday is the same.

I tried to be discipline, but it didn't work.

I tired so many methods, but yeah life goes on, nothing changed.

I hate myself, I was scared of being like this for lifetime, forever.

I have dreams, I have so many thing to do.

Here's my 2nd day of writing daily diary, journal.

I still failed, afraid of being stuck, have a lot of things that I don't know how to solve, to keep going.

Life's hard...

But I know that if I keep going, keep grinding, nothing can stop me, there's no more to be regret.

Because we only live once.

Corrections

I tried, but procrastination keeps me down.

Every day, I wake up, feeling tired, miserable, then go back in bed.

WI wake up again at 1pm, open my eyes, and reach onfor my iPad.

PI play yYoutTube, anime, movies, etc.

No learnI don't study English, learn a high-income skill, piano, or do someanything.

Since this is in the negative, anything fits better than something

My life is just keeps repeating,; every day is the same.

I tried to be disciplined, but it didn't work.

I tiried so many methods, but yeah, life goes on, nothing has changed.

I hate myself, I was scared of being like this for a lifetime, forever.

Here's my 2nd day of writing a daily diary, a journal.

This is fine but you could also just select one, diary or journal

I still failed, am still afraid of being stuck, have a lot of things that I don't know how to solve, in order to keep going.

But I know that if I keep going, keep grinding, nothing can stop me, there's no more to be regret.

Because we only live once.

Feedback

Sorry that you have been feeling depressed. Depression can trick us into feeling that things will stay like that forever, as you wrote here. As you said, life goes on, and things do change. Don't let a couple of set-backs trick you. Wishing you well.

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SonDepTrai21st

June 28, 2025

20

haha don't worry, I do failed but I'm keep going. Thank you for that!

Every day, I wake up, feeling tired, miserable, then go back into bed.

"in bed" would mean that you got out of bed to go somewhere and came back

"to bed" can also mean that you go back to laying down or sleeping, even if you didn't get out of bed

Wake up again at 1pm, open my eyes, reach onfor my iPad and play youtube, anime, movies etc.

it is usually "reach for" or also "get on"

also I combined the next sentence with this one because they are so closely related and the next sentence needed a subject.

Play youtube, anime, movies etc.

Not learning English, learn a high-income skill, how to play piano, or doing something. else.

this is technically an incomplete sentence, but that could be okay if the tone is what you are trying to say.

A more technically correct version would be:

I'm not learning English, a high-income skill, how to play piano, or doing something else.

My life is just keeps repeating, every day is the same.

technically, it should say "and every day is the same" or "like every day is the same"

Every day is two words when it means "each day". I go to work every day.

Everyday is one word when it means "normal" . I work an everyday job.

I tried to be disciplined, but it didn't work.

or "I tried to have discipline"

I tiried so many methods, but yeah life goes on, nothing changed.

I hate myself, I was scared of being like this for lifetime, forever.

I have dreams, I have so many thing to do.

Here's my 2nd day of writing my daily diary, journal.

diary and journal are repetitive

I still have failed, I am afraid of being stuck, and I have a lot of things that I don't know how to solve, to keep going.

adding the subject "I" helps readability here

Life's hard...

But I know that if I keep going, keep grinding, nothing can stop me, there's no more to be regret.

you can sometimes try phrase constructions with different verbs to see what looks best:

1. there's no more to be eat
versus
1. there's no more to eat

2. there's no more to be buy
versus
2. there's no more to buy

technically, the sentence is a fragment, but people do talk like this naturally

Because we only live once.

this is also a fragment, but people do talk like this

A technically correct version would be:

We only live once.

or

Nothing can stop me and I won't regret grinding because we only live once.

Feedback

You're expressing yourself clearly! It stinks that you hate yourself. Maybe it's like a sports team where teammates learn to work together. I hope you have someone you can talk to offline. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

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SonDepTrai21st

June 26, 2025

20

Thank you for listening. It really helped.

To be honest, I'm OK, so don't worry.

I saw you followed me on notifications.

You don't have to do that, since you've learned Spanish, cause there's nothing I can help you.

I write a wide rage of topics, and sometimes .. weird stuffs

You definitely don't want to see it XD

Anyway, it is a very detailed correction. Thanks a lot!

I tried but procrastination keeps me down.


I tried, but procrastination keeps me down.

Every day, I wake up, feeling tired, miserable, then go back in bed.


Every day, I wake up, feeling tired, miserable, then go back into bed.

"in bed" would mean that you got out of bed to go somewhere and came back "to bed" can also mean that you go back to laying down or sleeping, even if you didn't get out of bed

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Wake up again at 1pm, open my eyes, reach on my iPad.


Wake up again at 1pm, open my eyes, reach onfor my iPad and play youtube, anime, movies etc.

it is usually "reach for" or also "get on" also I combined the next sentence with this one because they are so closely related and the next sentence needed a subject.

WI wake up again at 1pm, open my eyes, and reach onfor my iPad.

Play youtube, anime, movies etc.


Play youtube, anime, movies etc.

PI play yYoutTube, anime, movies, etc.

No learn English, learn a high-income skill, piano, or do something.


Not learning English, learn a high-income skill, how to play piano, or doing something. else.

this is technically an incomplete sentence, but that could be okay if the tone is what you are trying to say. A more technically correct version would be: I'm not learning English, a high-income skill, how to play piano, or doing something else.

No learnI don't study English, learn a high-income skill, piano, or do someanything.

Since this is in the negative, anything fits better than something

My life is just keeps repeating, everyday is the same.


My life is just keeps repeating, every day is the same.

technically, it should say "and every day is the same" or "like every day is the same" Every day is two words when it means "each day". I go to work every day. Everyday is one word when it means "normal" . I work an everyday job.

My life is just keeps repeating,; every day is the same.

I tried to be discipline, but it didn't work.


I tried to be disciplined, but it didn't work.

or "I tried to have discipline"

I tried to be disciplined, but it didn't work.

I tired so many methods, but yeah life goes on, nothing changed.


I tiried so many methods, but yeah life goes on, nothing changed.

I tiried so many methods, but yeah, life goes on, nothing has changed.

I hate myself, I was scared of being like this for lifetime, forever.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hate myself, I was scared of being like this for a lifetime, forever.

I have dreams, I have so many thing to do.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here's my 2nd day of writing daily diary, journal.


Here's my 2nd day of writing my daily diary, journal.

diary and journal are repetitive

Here's my 2nd day of writing a daily diary, a journal.

This is fine but you could also just select one, diary or journal

I still failed, afraid of being stuck, have a lot of things that I don't know how to solve, to keep going.


I still have failed, I am afraid of being stuck, and I have a lot of things that I don't know how to solve, to keep going.

adding the subject "I" helps readability here

I still failed, am still afraid of being stuck, have a lot of things that I don't know how to solve, in order to keep going.

Life's hard...


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I know that if I keep going, keep grinding, nothing can stop me, there's no more to be regret.


But I know that if I keep going, keep grinding, nothing can stop me, there's no more to be regret.

you can sometimes try phrase constructions with different verbs to see what looks best: 1. there's no more to be eat versus 1. there's no more to eat 2. there's no more to be buy versus 2. there's no more to buy technically, the sentence is a fragment, but people do talk like this naturally

But I know that if I keep going, keep grinding, nothing can stop me, there's no more to be regret.

Because we only live once.


Because we only live once.

this is also a fragment, but people do talk like this A technically correct version would be: We only live once. or Nothing can stop me and I won't regret grinding because we only live once.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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