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I Thought It Would Be Easy

Recently, I don’t sleep well.
Because my new baby cries every middle of the nights.
I usually give some milk and change diapers.
In addition, I also work in weekdays.
Paternity leave is becoming more popular in Japan than when I was a child, but many people still can’t take it.

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I Thought It Would Be Easy

Recently, I don’thaven't been sleeping well.

Because my new baby cries everyin the middle of the nights every night.

If you really want to emphasise that it's every night, this is how I'd phrase it.

I usually give (him/her/them) some milk and change diapers.

Generally we'd use a pronoun here. You might use "them" if you don't want to share the gender etc

In addition, I also work ion weekdays.

Paternity leave is becoming more popular in Japan than when I was a child, but many people still can’t take it.

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Good job with the writing! It sounds like you've got your hands full with your baby. Hopefully it eases up a little soon

I Thought It Would Be Easy

Recently, I don’t (or Lately), I have not been sleeping well.

Because my new baby cries every middle ofduring the nights.

I usually give her (or him) some milk and change her/his diapers.

In addition, I also work ion weekdays.

Paternity leave is becoming more popular in Japan than when I was a child, but many people still can’t take it.

I Thought It Would Be Easy

Recently, I don’thaven't been sleeping well.

Because my new baby cries every day in the middle of the nights.

I usually give her (or him) some milk and change her (or his) diapers.

In addition, I also work ion weekdays.

Paternity leave is becoming more popular in Japan than when I was a child, but many people still can’t take it.

I Thought It Would Be Easy


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Recently, I don’t sleep well.


Recently, I don’thaven't been sleeping well.

Recently, I don’t (or Lately), I have not been sleeping well.

Recently, I don’thaven't been sleeping well.

Because my new baby cries every middle of the nights.


Because my new baby cries every day in the middle of the nights.

Because my new baby cries every middle ofduring the nights.

Because my new baby cries everyin the middle of the nights every night.

If you really want to emphasise that it's every night, this is how I'd phrase it.

I usually give some milk and change diapers.


I usually give her (or him) some milk and change her (or his) diapers.

I usually give her (or him) some milk and change her/his diapers.

I usually give (him/her/them) some milk and change diapers.

Generally we'd use a pronoun here. You might use "them" if you don't want to share the gender etc

In addition, I also work in weekdays.


In addition, I also work ion weekdays.

In addition, I also work ion weekdays.

In addition, I also work ion weekdays.

Paternity leave is more popular in Japan than when I was a child, but many people still can’t take it.


Paternity leave is becoming more popular in Japan than when I was a child, but many people still can’t take it.


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