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Jan. 30, 2023

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I think I am an honest,diligent,persevering person.

I think I am an honest ,diligent ,persevering person. I will not give up easily once I have a target. During the preparation for postgraduate examination, I always got up at 6:30 o’clock and study for an average of ten hours a day. I believe hard work can make up for the lake of intelligence and I think I think these advantages can help me to better complete my future study tasks.


我认为我是一个诚恳,勤奋,有毅力的人。如果我决定了做一件事,我不会轻易的放弃。比如在备考研究生期间,我坚持每天6:30起床,每天平均学习十个小时。我相信勤能补拙,并且我觉得这些优点能够促使我更好的完成未来的研究任务。

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I think I am an honest, diligent, and persevering person.

I think I am an honest , diligent , and persevering person.

I will not give up easily once I have a targetgoal.

During the preparation forWhile preparing for the postgraduate examination, I always got up at 6:30 o’clockAM and studyied for an average of ten hours a day.

"While preparing for the postgraduate examination" sounds more natural. "o' clock" is only used for times that end in 00, so I recommend saying "6:30 AM" instead.

I believe hard work can make up for thea lacke of intelligence and I think I think these advantagethese methods can help me to better complete my future study tasks.

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I like the write-up! I admire your efforts to study for exams, I'm definitely not as hardworking as you.

I think I am an honest, diligent, persevering person.

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I think I am an honest , diligent , persevering person.

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I will not give up easily once I have a targetgoal.

During the preparation for postgraduate examination, I always got up at 6:30 o’clockam and studyied for an average of ten hours a day.

"o'clock" is only used for a whole hour, i.e. 6 o'clock. Since "got up" is past tense, "studied" also needs to be past tense.

I believe hard work can make up for the lacke of intelligence and I think I think these advantages can help me to better complete my future study tasks.

I think I am an honest,diligent,persevering person.


I think I am an honest, diligent, persevering person.

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I think I am an honest, diligent, and persevering person.

I think I am an honest ,diligent ,persevering person.


I think I am an honest , diligent , persevering person.

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I think I am an honest , diligent , and persevering person.

I will not give up easily once I have a target.


I will not give up easily once I have a targetgoal.

I will not give up easily once I have a targetgoal.

During the preparation for postgraduate examination, I always got up at 6:30 o’clock and study for an average of ten hours a day.


During the preparation for postgraduate examination, I always got up at 6:30 o’clockam and studyied for an average of ten hours a day.

"o'clock" is only used for a whole hour, i.e. 6 o'clock. Since "got up" is past tense, "studied" also needs to be past tense.

During the preparation forWhile preparing for the postgraduate examination, I always got up at 6:30 o’clockAM and studyied for an average of ten hours a day.

"While preparing for the postgraduate examination" sounds more natural. "o' clock" is only used for times that end in 00, so I recommend saying "6:30 AM" instead.

I believe hard work can make up for the lake of intelligence and I think I think these advantages can help me to better complete my future study tasks.


I believe hard work can make up for the lacke of intelligence and I think I think these advantages can help me to better complete my future study tasks.

I believe hard work can make up for thea lacke of intelligence and I think I think these advantagethese methods can help me to better complete my future study tasks.

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