June 28, 2022
I was thinking a while about my answer, and thinking in people who I am interested in, I surprisingly found Lady Gaga.
She is a really particular person who I would like to ask about her life, feelings and how has she manage all the critics she had recieved because of her originality.
Who Im would I like to talk to in english?
I was thinking a while about my answer for a while, and thinking inabout people whom I am interested in, I surprisingly foundinding Lady Gaga.
She is a really particular person, a person who I would like to ask about her life, feelings and how has she manage all the critics she had recieived because of her originalityuniqueness.
Who I would I like to talk to in english?
I was thinking a while about my answer for a while, and thinking in about the people who I am interested in,. I surprisingly foundrealized that it's Lady Gaga.
She is a really particularspecial person who I would like to ask about her life, feelings and how has she managed all the critics that she hads recieived because of her originality.
Who I would like to talk to in english?
I was thinking a while about my answer, and thinking inabout people who I am interested in, I surprisingly found Lady Gaga.
The correction above ("about" instead of "in") is for your only actual grammatical error. However, the sentence is still awkward. If I were to edit it for style, I would rewrite it to something like "I considered the question for a while, thinking about people who interest me. To my surprise, the answer I came up with was Lady Gaga."
She is a reallyone person in particular person who I would like to ask about her life, her feelings and how has she manageshe has handled all the criticsism she hads recieived because of her originality.
"Particular" has multiple meanings. In this case, I think you mean "specific." However, it can also mean "picky" or "fussy". If you say "she is a really particular person", it would mean something like "she is a very fussy person who insists that everything be exactly correct." If you say "She is a particular person", it could have either meaning. But if you say "She is one person in particular" then it is clear that you mean "specific."
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Your meaning is clear. I just corrected some minor grammatical and spelling mistakes and suggested some stylistic edits to make it sound more natural.
Who I would I like to talk to in eEnglish?
If you want a statement, then the original title "Who I would like to talk to in English." is correct, but if you want a question, then the structure is “Who would I like to talk to in English?"
I was thinking for a while about my answer, and while thinking inof people who I am interested in, I surprisingly foundthought of Lady Gaga.
Change preposition 'in' to 'of.' Also, I changed 'found' to 'thought of' simply because of stylistic reasons. 'Found' is correct, but it sounds a bit awkward because you started the sentence with 'thinking of people...', so 'thought' makes more sense. If the sentence was 'and while searching for people...' then 'found' would sound better, since 'found' means you have successfully searched. Simply stylistic though, nothing really wrong with the original there :)
She is a really particularunique person who I would like to ask about her life, feelings and how has sheshe has managed all the criticsism she had recieived because of her originality.
1. 'particular' means a single or individual thing, but it doesn't really make sense here. Do you mean unique? 2. 'how has she...' is a question sentence structure, so since this is a statement it would be 'how she has...' 3. 'Managed' since you are talking about the past 4. A critic is a person who gives criticism, criticism is negative judgment/disapproval. 5. Small smelling error: recieved --> received
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Great job overall, I think Lady Gaga would be a really interesting person to talk to as well :)
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I was thinking a while about my answer, and thinking in people who I am interested in, I surprisingly found Lady Gaga. I was thinking for a while about my answer, and while thinking Change preposition 'in' to 'of.' Also, I changed 'found' to 'thought of' simply because of stylistic reasons. 'Found' is correct, but it sounds a bit awkward because you started the sentence with 'thinking of people...', so 'thought' makes more sense. If the sentence was 'and while searching for people...' then 'found' would sound better, since 'found' means you have successfully searched. Simply stylistic though, nothing really wrong with the original there :) I was thinking a while about my answer, and thinking The correction above ("about" instead of "in") is for your only actual grammatical error. However, the sentence is still awkward. If I were to edit it for style, I would rewrite it to something like "I considered the question for a while, thinking about people who interest me. To my surprise, the answer I came up with was Lady Gaga." I was thinking I was thinking |
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Who I would like to talk to in english? Who If you want a statement, then the original title "Who I would like to talk to in English." is correct, but if you want a question, then the structure is “Who would I like to talk to in English?" This sentence has been marked as perfect! Who Who |
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