May 14, 2025
I start to practice my English
Hi! I want to tell you about my day. Today I had an appointment with my psychologist. She told me one very nice idea - there are two types of people. The first one has just one or two interests or hobbies, and they have a lot of skills in these subjects. The second one has a lot of interest and lighting knowledge in these areas. So I'm the second type. My psychologist gave me homework - make a list of all my interests. Now I'm feeling very strong motivation. I want to start exploring a new interest. In the next message, I'll tell you about this interest. Have a good day! Bye-bye! 😘
Привет! Я хочу рассказать вам о моем дне. Сегодня у меня была консультация с моим психологом. Она рассказала мне об одной интересной идее - есть два типа людей. Первый тип - имеет только одно или два увлечения и его знаниях в этих сферах глубокие. Второй тип - имеет много интересов и поверхностные знаниях в них. Итак, я отношусь ко второму типу. Мой психолог дала мне домашнее задание: составить список всех моих интересов. Сейчас я чувствую сильную мотивацию. Я хочу начать изучать новые интересы. В следующем сообщении я расскажу вам об этих интересах. Хорошего вам дня! Пока-пока! 😘
I'm starting to practice my English
The form of present continuous (which is the case that should be used here) is "I am [verb]ing"
Hi!
I want to tell you about my day.
Today, I had an appointment with my psychologist.
When a time indicator starts a sentence a comma is after it
She told me one very nice idea - there are two types of people.
The first one has just one or two interests or hobbies, and they have a lot of skills in these subjects.
The second one has a lot of interest and lightingminimal knowledge in these areas.
"Lighting" is a noun and wouldn't be used here, "minimal" means a little amount
So, I'm the second type.
My psychologist gave me homework -: make a list of all my interests.
You're introducing your homework, which requires a colon
Now, I'm feeling very strong motivationed.
"Have motivation" and "feel motivated" are the correct phrases
I want to start exploring a new interest.
In the next message/post, I'll tell you about this interest.
I guess "message" isn't really incorrect, so I kept it, but it's not the correct word to use
Have a good day!
Bye-bye!
😘
I start to practice my English
Hi!
I want to tell you about my day.
Today I had an appointment with my psychologist.
She told me one very nice ideasomething very interesting - there are two types of people.
The first onegroup has just one or two interests or hobbies, and they have a lot of skills in these subjects.
The second onegroup has a lot of interests and lighting knowledge in these areas.
So I'm the second type.
My psychologist gave me some homework - make a list of all my interests.
Now I'm feeling very strong motivationed.
I want to start exploring a new interest.
In the next message, I'll tell you about this interest.
Have a good day!
Bye-bye!
😘
I'm starting to practice my English
I want to tell you about my day.
Today, I had an appointment with my psychologist.
She told me onea very nice idea - there are two types of people.
this sounds more natural
The first one has just one or two interests or hobbies, and they have a lot of skills in these subjects.
You could translate "его знаниях в этих сферах глубокие" more directly - "they have a great depth of knowledge in these subjects"
The second one has a lot of interests and lighting/surface-level/shallow knowledge in these areas.
So I'm the second type.
The "So" is a little conversational
My psychologist gave me homework - make a list of all my interests.
Now I'm feeling very strong motivation.
I want to start exploring a new interest.
In the next message/post, I'll tell you about this interest.
I think "message" suggests you're reaching out personally, "post" might fit better
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Nicely written, good job! You only had very small mistakes. I hope you enjoy your new interest :)
May 14, 2025
Thanks!🙌
I'm starting to practice my English
Hi!
I want to tell you about my day.
Today I had an appointment with my psychologist.
She told me oneshared a very nice idea -with me - that there are two types of people.
The first ontype has just one or two interests or hobbies, and they have a lot of skills in these subjectareas.
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I think this is what you meant by lighting?
SoAnd I'm the second type.
My psychologist gave me homework - to make a list of all my interests.
Now I'm feeling very strong motivationed.
In themy next message, I'll tell you about this interest.
Have a good day!
Bye-bye!
😘
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Great job, your mistakes are very minor.
May 14, 2025
Thank you! 😀
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