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I drive to work.
When I feel good in the morning, I drive while singing loudly along to the songs in the car.
My favorite recent song is “ハレノヒ” by あいみょん.
This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for “クレヨンしんちゃん”.
I play the guitar while singing this song at home.
This guitar chord is simple and easy to play.
私は時々、大声で歌いながら運転して仕事に行きます。
私はいつも車を運転して仕事に行きます。
朝、気分が良かったら、車の中で歌に合わせて大声で歌いながら運転します。
最近のお気に入りの曲はあいみょんの「ハレノヒ」です。
この曲は2019年にリリースされ、映画「クレヨンしんちゃん」の主題歌でした。
私は家でこの歌を歌いながらギターを弾きます。
このギターのコードはシンプルで弾きやすいです。
I dDrive tTo wWork.
Proper capitalization in your title.
When I feel good in the morning, I drive while singing loudly along towith the songs in the car.
Use “along with” instead of “along to” for natural phrasing.
This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for “クレヨンしんちゃん”.”
Move the period inside the quotation marks for proper punctuation.
Thise guitar chord iss are simple and easy to play.
Use plural “chords” since songs usually involve more than one chord.
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The corrections are mostly about small phrasing adjustments and punctuation. Good job, keep writing!
I drive to work. (or My drive to work)
Your version is okay too, just not as common as a title. (Like you are simply stating what you are doing as oppose to telling a story about what you are doing.)
When I feel good in the morning, I drive while singsing loudly along to the songs in the carwhile driving.
1. While your original sentence is closer to the Japanese version of "歌いながら運転します", it sounded like you chose driving as the secondary activity in the middle of singing.
2. "In the car" can be omitted as it is implied by "driving", though it is not wrong to keep it.
My favorite recent song is “ハレノヒ” by あいみょん.
This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for “クレヨンしんちゃん”.
I play the guitar while singing this song at home.
This guitar chord is simple and easy to play.
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This reminds me of my commute to work back in Canada. I too used to sing along loudly to the radio while driving because I know no one could hear me XD. I haven't been listening to j-pop though, maybe I really should listen to them since I am learning Japanese anyway. And Crayon Shin! It was quite popular in Hong Kong too, I used to have some Cantonese translated version of the manga, but I didn't bring them with me back to HK.
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When we sing along loudly while driving, We feel so good, right?
I’ll keep singing loudly while driving.😆
If you have a chance, please watch " Crayon Shin! “ listen to "J-pop" again.
Thank you for correcting me.😊
I drive to work.
When I feel good in the morning, I drive while singing loudly along to the songs in the car.
It may be more natural to omit the "the" here. "The songs" would refer perhaps to a set list of songs, while "songs" would just refer to any song you decide to listen to in the car.
My favorite song recent song isly has been “ハレノヒ” by あいみょん.
(1) I edited your sentence slightly because "recent song" may imply that the song was released recently, which is not the case.
(2) The word "recent" actually refers to a time in the PAST that is very close to the present. Hence, we do not use the simple past tense ("is") here.
(3) Instead of "recently", you can also use "of late": "My favorite song of late has been ...".
This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for (the show) “クレヨンしんちゃん”.
You can choose to explain that クレヨンしんちゃん is a TV show.
I play the guitar while singing this song at home.
Thise guitar chord iss are simple and easy to play.
I think the plural "guitar chords" makes more sense here, since the song contains more than one chord.
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I checked online and it said its mainly used “past tense “ and “present perfect tense”.
* Thank you for correcting me.😊
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My favorite recent song is “ハレノヒ” by あいみょん. My favorite song recent (1) I edited your sentence slightly because "recent song" may imply that the song was released recently, which is not the case. (2) The word "recent" actually refers to a time in the PAST that is very close to the present. Hence, we do not use the simple past tense ("is") here. (3) Instead of "recently", you can also use "of late": "My favorite song of late has been ...". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for “クレヨンしんちゃん”. This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for (the show) “クレヨンしんちゃん”. You can choose to explain that クレヨンしんちゃん is a TV show. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This song was released in 2019 and was a theme song for “クレヨンしんちゃん Move the period inside the quotation marks for proper punctuation. |
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I drive to work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I drive to work. (or My drive to work) Your version is okay too, just not as common as a title. (Like you are simply stating what you are doing as oppose to telling a story about what you are doing.) I Proper capitalization in your title. |
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