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b230tri

Sept. 22, 2021

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I sold my electric grill.

I sold my electric grill.
I also sold my hiking shoes.
There is a famous application for selling used items.
You can upload your items on it to sell them.
I have been selling many of my items which I won't use anymore.
I 've got a bit of money from that.
I thought I have to reduce my properties for my mental health and it worked.
Items that wasn't organized distracted me a lot.


I have to clean our home before my girlfriend coming.
I have never cleaned home during this holidays.
I feel like it was a heaven.
I have been in laziness as possible as I can.
I have been lying back and reading books all the time.
I went for a run just once in a day.


Now autumn has come and the weather is so so beautiful and I think I should go travel to enjoy the weather.

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I sold my electric grill.

I sold my electric grill.

I also sold my hiking shoes.

There is a famous application for selling used items.

You can upload your items on itthere to sell them.

I have been selling many of mythe items which I wdon't use anymore.

I 've gotearned a bit of money from that.

I thought I have'd try to reduce my properties forossessions/stuff to improve my mental health and it worked.

IThe items that waseren't disorganized distracted me a lot.

clutter is like mess!

I have to clean our hometidy up (my house) before my girlfriend cominges.

clean our home sounds too formal!

I have never cleaned homedone so during this holidays.

It isn't necessary to repeat what you did bc you know from context :)

It feelt like it was a heaven.

I have been in laziness as possible as I canreally lazy lately.

I ha've been lying back and reading books all the time.

I have been sounds too formal, so it's better to say "I've been" :) also, although this is grammatically correct, it's not truly natural :) It'd be better if you said "I've been really lazy lately, lying in bed and reading books all the time" or something like that :)

I went for a run just once in a day.later on/earlier that day/I always go for a run

When using "went" you are talking about something you did in the past. Be it a little earlier today or yesterdar, etc :) So you can't say "just once in a day" bc then you're talking about routine. So if you wanna say that you went for a run earlier that day, you just say "I went for a run earlier/later that day" but if you're trying to say that you always go for a run at least once a day, you say "I always go for a run"

Now autumn has come and the weather is so so beautiful and I think I should go travel to enjoy the weather.

This is correct! Although it doesn't sound as natural, you did a good job :)

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Good job!! Keep it up! :)

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b230tri

Sept. 24, 2021

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thank you so much

I sold my electric grill.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I sold my electric grill.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also sold my hiking shoes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is a famous application for selling used items.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can upload your items on it to sell them.


You can upload your items on itthere to sell them.

I have been selling many of my items which I won't use anymore.


I have been selling many of mythe items which I wdon't use anymore.

I 've got a bit of money from that.


I 've gotearned a bit of money from that.

I thought I have to reduce my properties for my mental health and it worked.


I thought I have'd try to reduce my properties forossessions/stuff to improve my mental health and it worked.

Items that wasn't organized distracted me a lot.


IThe items that waseren't disorganized distracted me a lot.

clutter is like mess!

I have to clean our home before my girlfriend coming.


I have to clean our hometidy up (my house) before my girlfriend cominges.

clean our home sounds too formal!

I have never cleaned home during this holidays.


I have never cleaned homedone so during this holidays.

It isn't necessary to repeat what you did bc you know from context :)

I feel like it was a heaven.


It feelt like it was a heaven.

I have been in laziness as possible as I can.


I have been in laziness as possible as I canreally lazy lately.

I have been lying back and reading books all the time.


I ha've been lying back and reading books all the time.

I have been sounds too formal, so it's better to say "I've been" :) also, although this is grammatically correct, it's not truly natural :) It'd be better if you said "I've been really lazy lately, lying in bed and reading books all the time" or something like that :)

I went for a run just once in a day.


I went for a run just once in a day.later on/earlier that day/I always go for a run

When using "went" you are talking about something you did in the past. Be it a little earlier today or yesterdar, etc :) So you can't say "just once in a day" bc then you're talking about routine. So if you wanna say that you went for a run earlier that day, you just say "I went for a run earlier/later that day" but if you're trying to say that you always go for a run at least once a day, you say "I always go for a run"

Now autumn has come and the weather is so so beautiful and I think I should go travel to enjoy the weather.


Now autumn has come and the weather is so so beautiful and I think I should go travel to enjoy the weather.

This is correct! Although it doesn't sound as natural, you did a good job :)

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