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adichira

yesterday

9
I Really Need a Friend

I've been trying to speak with people on internet. It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship and only want a friend. I miss to speak with someone! I'm almost crying.

My husband is the unique person I can't talk... but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can speak free because we don't have the same native language... Today I visited my mom, it was like speaking with a wall. She only told me her problems.

I'm sorry if I share this here, but writing is the unique way I have to vent my feelings.

Have a good day! I'll go to my bed.

Corrections

I've been trying to speak with people on the internet.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship and I only want a friend.

I miss having someone to speak with someone!

I'm almostfeel like crying.

Phrased it to be more natural.

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can't talk.. to. bBut he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can't speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

In Spanish you say "unica" which can mean unique but it also means only, in this instance it would be lonely.

Today I visited my mom, and it was like speaking with a wall.

I'm sorry if Ito share this here, but writing is the uniqueonly way I have to vent my feelings.

I'll go to my bed.

Feedback

Thank you so much for all of the corrections you have made on my writing, I really appreciate it!

I hate when you try and connect with people online and they don't seem to want friendship and end up flirting with you. That must be uncomfortable if you're married and happy with your husband.

I'm sorry you feel like you don't have anyone to talk to, it sounds like you feel really isolated by the language barrier between you and your partner. Sometimes you just need someone to listen to you and it's hard, especially when someone is part of your family, when they don't recognise that and place more on your shoulders.

I'd listen to you if I could, but I'm glad you have writing as an outlet!

I hope by the time you read this, you're feeling better.

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adichira

yesterday

9

I make all my corrections with love and respect, too. Thank you so much for your kind words; they are a balm for my heart. I have found people to be so friendly here.

It's hard to find what I want on the internet, probably because there are people with social problems too; I don't know. Perhaps I should speak to my husband about it. He asked me the other day what was happening with me. He could tell that I wasn't well. But I didn't say anything; I'm so emotional that I probably would have started crying. I hate making people worry about my problems. I don't know what to do in this new stage of my life to make myself happy.

I had shared this loneliness with him before and he told me that his friends would be my friends too, but I don't think they will be. They only know me as his wife. I'm not as important to them as he is.

Have a good day!!!! Thank you for reading me again! ❤️‍🩹

I Really Need a Friend

I've been trying to speak with people on the internet.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship and I only want a friend.

or "searching for a relationship, while I only want a friend."

I miss to speaking with someone!

I'm almost crying.

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can't talk to... but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can't speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

I think these corrections capture your intended meaning.

Today I visited my mom,; it was like speaking with a wall.

or

Today I visited my mom, and it was like speaking with a wall.

Nice use of a simile!

She only told me her problems.

I'm sorry if I share this here, but writing is the uniqueonly way I have to vent my feelings.

"unique" is more like "special" or "rare" but "only" is used to say that there are not other options

Have a good day!

I'llm going to my bed.

This is a more common way to say that you're going to go sleep or rest in bed.

Feedback

That sounds difficult! Like another user said, meeting friends based on shared interests seems to be the best, most natural way to broaden our social circles. If you like knitting scarves, for example, there are online and real-life ways to talk to fellow knitters. I don't have too much else to say, since I like to keep a very small circle, but your post is well-written and clearly conveys your feelings.

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adichira

yesterday

9

Hello, thank you very much for your time. Yes, I think that is the solution. I am discovering myself in this new stage of life. I have only been married for two years, and until now, the loneliness has hit me.

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yellowman

yesterday

2

It sounds like you are up for the challenge of discovering yourself, though--sometimes we can be scared about that. I know the hard self-work will pay off.

I Really Need a Friend

I've been trying to speak with people on the internet.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship, and I only want a friend.

I miss to speaking with someone!

I'm almost crying.

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can't talk to... but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can't speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

It sounds like you wrote this backwards (with "can" and "can't"). I understand your husband is the only person you have to talk to, and edited for that

Today I visited my mom, and it was like speaking withto a wall.

She only told me her problems.

I'm sorry if Ifor shareing this here, but writing is the uniqueonly way I have to vent my feelings.

Have a good day!

I'll go to my bed.

Feedback

I think you will have a tough time meeting a friend on applications or websites that are about meeting people, since they cater to and attract people who are looking for romance (like you have seen for yourself).

I recommend focusing on your hobbies and interests. For example, if you love books or gardening, find and join a group about that and you will naturally meet people with the same interests as you.

There are also options for real life, such as meeting people through work/volunteering/church/walking clubs, etc. Good luck. Don't feel bad about sharing here, I certainly don't mind

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adichira

yesterday

9

Thank you very much for your corrections and your words too. I need to discover hobbies, until now, it's to learn English, but I'm a shy person. Also, I've been only married for two years, I need to learn how live this new stage.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship andbut I only want a friend.

If you don’t include yourself in the second part of the sentence, it sounds like these people only want a relationship and also a friend, which is contradictory

I miss to speaking with someone!

A verb is the subject here, and while saying “to [verb]” can turn it into a subject, it sounds wrong here. You should use the “ing” ended instead here

My husband is the most unique person I can't talk...lie… but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can’t speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

I think you were trying to say the phrase “I can’t lie” here but I’m not too sure

Today I visited my mom, ithat felt like I was like speaking with a wall.

This sounds more natural

I'm sorry if I share thisoo much here, but writing is thea unique way I have to vent about my feelings.

Your original text was fine, but this sounds more natural. When using the word “vent”, we either just say “I vent” or “I vent about ___”.

I'llm going to my bed.

“I’ll go to my bed” implies that you’re literally walking to your bed. “I’m going to bed” is more used for saying you’re going to sleep

Feedback

Good text! I’m sorry about your issues with friends, I’m sure you’ll find someone eventually!

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adichira

yesterday

9

Hello! Thank you very much for your words and corrections too. I'll find someone, I promise. :D

I Really Need a Friend

I've been trying to speak with people on linternete.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationshippartner, and I only want a friend.

I miss to speaking with someone!

to speak isn't the verb, speaking is

I'm almost crying.

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can'tould talk with... bBut he's so busy, and even when he hasdoes have free time, I can't speak freely because we don't shave the samere a native language...

Today I visited my mom, it was like speaking with a wall.

She only told me her problems.

I'm sorry if I'm the same way shareing this here, but writing is the unique way I have to vent my feelings.

Have a good day!

I'll go to my bed.

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adichira

yesterday

9

Hello! Thank you very much for your corrections. :D

Have a good day!


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I'll go to my bed.


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I'llm going to my bed.

“I’ll go to my bed” implies that you’re literally walking to your bed. “I’m going to bed” is more used for saying you’re going to sleep

I'll go to my bed.

I'llm going to my bed.

This is a more common way to say that you're going to go sleep or rest in bed.

I'll go to my bed.

I Really Need a Friend


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I've been trying to speak with people on internet.


I've been trying to speak with people on linternete.

I've been trying to speak with people on the internet.

I've been trying to speak with people on the internet.

I've been trying to speak with people on the internet.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship and only want a friend.


It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationshippartner, and I only want a friend.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship andbut I only want a friend.

If you don’t include yourself in the second part of the sentence, it sounds like these people only want a relationship and also a friend, which is contradictory

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship, and I only want a friend.

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship and I only want a friend.

or "searching for a relationship, while I only want a friend."

It's hard because many of them are searching for a relationship and I only want a friend.

I miss to speak with someone!


I miss to speaking with someone!

to speak isn't the verb, speaking is

I miss to speaking with someone!

A verb is the subject here, and while saying “to [verb]” can turn it into a subject, it sounds wrong here. You should use the “ing” ended instead here

I miss to speaking with someone!

I miss to speaking with someone!

I miss having someone to speak with someone!

I'm almost crying.


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I'm almostfeel like crying.

Phrased it to be more natural.

My husband is the unique person I can't talk... but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can speak free because we don't have the same native language...


My husband is the uniqueonly person I can'tould talk with... bBut he's so busy, and even when he hasdoes have free time, I can't speak freely because we don't shave the samere a native language...

My husband is the most unique person I can't talk...lie… but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can’t speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

I think you were trying to say the phrase “I can’t lie” here but I’m not too sure

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can't talk to... but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can't speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

It sounds like you wrote this backwards (with "can" and "can't"). I understand your husband is the only person you have to talk to, and edited for that

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can't talk to... but he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can't speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

I think these corrections capture your intended meaning.

My husband is the uniqueonly person I can't talk.. to. bBut he's so busy, and when he has free time, I can't speak freely because we don't have the same native language...

In Spanish you say "unica" which can mean unique but it also means only, in this instance it would be lonely.

Today I visited my mom, it was like speaking with a wall.


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Today I visited my mom, ithat felt like I was like speaking with a wall.

This sounds more natural

Today I visited my mom, and it was like speaking withto a wall.

Today I visited my mom,; it was like speaking with a wall.

or Today I visited my mom, and it was like speaking with a wall. Nice use of a simile!

Today I visited my mom, and it was like speaking with a wall.

She only told me her problems.


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I'm sorry if I share this here, but writing is the unique way I have to vent my feelings.


I'm sorry if I'm the same way shareing this here, but writing is the unique way I have to vent my feelings.

I'm sorry if I share thisoo much here, but writing is thea unique way I have to vent about my feelings.

Your original text was fine, but this sounds more natural. When using the word “vent”, we either just say “I vent” or “I vent about ___”.

I'm sorry if Ifor shareing this here, but writing is the uniqueonly way I have to vent my feelings.

I'm sorry if I share this here, but writing is the uniqueonly way I have to vent my feelings.

"unique" is more like "special" or "rare" but "only" is used to say that there are not other options

I'm sorry if Ito share this here, but writing is the uniqueonly way I have to vent my feelings.

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