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I need to write a dialogue using an informal register.

Formal:
Context: Mark is introducing his colleague, James, to keynote speaker of the conference, Dr. Elena Vance, just before her presentation at a conference. James will be assisting her during the event.
· Mark: Dr. Vance, I’d like to take this opportunity to introduce you to my colleague, James Miller. James will be your assistant during the conference. James, this is Dr. Elena Vance, the main expert of our conference.
· James: It’s an honor to meet you, Dr. Vance. I’ve read your latest publication.
· Dr. Vance: The pleasure is mine. Your director has spoken very highly of you.
· James: It’s a pleasure for me to finally connect you in person. Your work is very impressive.
· Dr. Vance: Thank you. Would it be acceptable if I addressed you as James?
· James: Please, feel free to call me James.
· Dr. Vance: Please excuse me, I need to review my notes before my presentation. But I would be very interested in continuing our conversation later.
· James: Of course. It was a genuine pleasure to meet you. If you have any questions or difficulties, please don’t hesitate to contact me. I am at your disposal. I hope you will feel comfortable throughout the conference.
· Dr. Vance: Thank you, that is very kind of you. The pleasure was all mine. I look forward to meeting you soon.

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I need to write a dialogue using an informal register.

Mark is introducing his colleague, James, to keynote speaker of the conference, Dr. Elena Vance, just before her presentation at a conference.

James will be assisting her during the event.

Dr. Vance, I’d like to take this opportunity to introduce you to my colleague, James Miller.

James will be your assistant during the conference.

James, this is Dr. Elena Vance, the main expert of our conference.

It’s an honor to meet you, Dr. Vance.

I’ve read your latest publication.

The pleasure is mine.

Your director has spoken very highly of you.

It’s a pleasure for me to finally connect with you in person.

Your work is very impressive.

Thank you.

Would it be acceptable if I addressed you as James?

This phrasing is understandable but no one talks like that even in a formal setting. You could say "may I call you James?"

Please, feel free to call me James.

Nothing wrong with this but most people will leave off the end and just say "please, feel free to" or "please, feel free"

Please excuse me, I need to review my notes before my presentation.

But I would be very interested in continuing our conversation later.

Of course.

It was a genuine pleasure to meet you.

If you have any questions or difficulties, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

I am at your disposal.

I hope you will feel comfortable throughout the conference.

Thank you, that is very kind of you.

The pleasure was all mine.

I look forward to meeting you soon.

I need to write a dialogue using an informal register.


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Formal:


Context:


Mark is introducing his colleague, James, to keynote speaker of the conference, Dr. Elena Vance, just before her presentation at a conference.


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James will be assisting her during the event.


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· Mark:


Dr. Vance, I’d like to take this opportunity to introduce you to my colleague, James Miller.


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James will be your assistant during the conference.


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· James:


· Dr. Vance:


· James:


· Dr. Vance:


Thank you.


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Would it be acceptable if I addressed you as James?


Would it be acceptable if I addressed you as James?

This phrasing is understandable but no one talks like that even in a formal setting. You could say "may I call you James?"

· James:


Please, feel free to call me James.


Please, feel free to call me James.

Nothing wrong with this but most people will leave off the end and just say "please, feel free to" or "please, feel free"

· Dr. Vance:


Please excuse me, I need to review my notes before my presentation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I would be very interested in continuing our conversation later.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

· James:


Of course.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a genuine pleasure to meet you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you have any questions or difficulties, please don’t hesitate to contact me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am at your disposal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope you will feel comfortable throughout the conference.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

· Dr. Vance:


Thank you, that is very kind of you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The pleasure was all mine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I look forward to meeting you soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

James, this is Dr. Elena Vance, the main expert of our conference.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s an honor to meet you, Dr. Vance.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ve read your latest publication.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The pleasure is mine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your director has spoken very highly of you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s a pleasure for me to finally connect you in person.


It’s a pleasure for me to finally connect with you in person.

Your work is very impressive.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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