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Tammy

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I need some advice for video topics

I learned a lot from the feedback you guys provided on my videos.

I've never gotten that small and vividly detailed feedback from any other place, so I really want to continue this way.

However, after uploading today's video, I found a problem.

I had thought the topic of this video was too boring, and it might be a burden for you to correct my English speaking. Thus, I couldn't finish the video as well as before. I can even hear my hesitation in the video.

I'm seriously seeking your advice on my video topics.

Suggestions on any topic can be considered, except for political and personal matters. As long as I can make it and it won't disturb others.

P.S.
This is the video I thought was too boring: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Hka7vdGI6qQ

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I need some advice for video topics

I learnedt a lot from the feedback you guys provided on my videos.

😃

I've never gotten that small and vividly detailed feedback from any other place, so I really want to continue this way.

Place/platform

I had thought the topic of this video was too boring, and it might be a burden for you to correct my English speaking.

I can even hear my hesitation in the video.

I'm seriously seeking your advice on my video topics.

Suggestions on any topic can be considered, except for political and personal matters.

As long as I can make it and it won't disturb others.

If it's disturbing others, they can just skip the video.

This is the video I thought was too boring: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Hka7vdGI6qQ

Feedback

Since you're posting to practice English, I think you can post anything you like, e.g. your hobbies [which is what you're doing], which include gardening and hiking. You can show us an unboxing of the plant, how you planted it, and the pests/parasites disturbing the plant. For hiking, you can show us the local fruits and plants in the area, and if there's a special way of eating the fruits, you can share it too.

It wasn't a boring video. The horse phone cover was pretty. Happy Chinese New Year of the Horse in advance.

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Toluwani

today

137

is* pretty.

I need some advice for video topics

I learned a lot from the feedback you guys provided on my videos.

I've never gotten that small and vividly detailed feedback from any other place, so I really want to continue this way.

However, after uploading today's video, I found a problem.

I had thought the topic of this video was too boring, and it might be a burden for you to correct my English speaking.

Thus, I couldn't finish the video as well as before.

I can even hear my hesitation in the video.

I'm seriously seeking your advice on my video topics.

Suggestions on any topic can be considered, except for political and personal matters.

As long as I can make it and it won't disturb others.

P.S.

This is the video I thought was too boring: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Hka7vdGI6qQ

I need some advice for video topics


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I learned a lot from the feedback you guys provided on my videos.


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I learnedt a lot from the feedback you guys provided on my videos.

😃

I've never gotten that small and vividly detailed feedback from any other place, so I really want to continue this way.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've never gotten that small and vividly detailed feedback from any other place, so I really want to continue this way.

Place/platform

However, after uploading today's video, I found a problem.


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I had thought the topic of this video was too boring, and it might be a burden for you to correct my English speaking.


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I had thought the topic of this video was too boring, and it might be a burden for you to correct my English speaking.

Thus, I couldn't finish the video as well as before.


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I can even hear my hesitation in the video.


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I'm seriously seeking your advice on my video topics.


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Suggestions on any topic can be considered, except for political and personal matters.


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As long as I can make it and it won't disturb others.


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As long as I can make it and it won't disturb others.

If it's disturbing others, they can just skip the video.

P.S.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is the video I thought was too boring: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Hka7vdGI6qQ


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