Sept. 10, 2024
In one of my previous entries, I talked about a cave on my last hike trail. ( You can find a video link here if you haven't seen it: https://langcorrect.com/journals/the-triple-happiness-of-hike/)
It's a wild cave, which means there's no dedicated team to take care of it.
When we got there, We found some trash on the ground, but we didn't have the tools to dispose of it, let alone carry it down the hill.
Luckily, that area belongs to a small village, so villagers will come to clean it in their spare time.
But I still feel it's wrong. It's unfair to leave those pieces of trash in the cave and let the villagers do extra work.
In the meantime, I have to admit that some guys in the hike team are shameless. Maybe It's only about 5% of the population, but still, we can't put an end to littering.
So I decided to help the villagers build a garbage collection program as a game project.
The project plan hasn't been finished yet.
If you have any advice or suggestions, feel free to tell me!
And if you have seen some successful solutions to related problems, please share them with me. I have never hiked to any wild area outside China, so it's totally unknown to me.
之前的一篇文里,我谈到了上次徒步旅行路线上的一个洞穴。(如果你没看过,可以在这里找到视频链接:https://langcorrect.com/journals/the-triple-happiness-of-hike/)
它是一个野生洞穴,这意味着没有专门的团队来照顾它。
当我们到达那里时,我们在地上发现了一些垃圾,但我们没有处理工具,更不用说把垃圾带下山了。
幸运的是,那个区域属于一个小村庄,所以村民们会在业余时间来打扫它。
但我仍然觉得这是不对的。把那些垃圾留在洞里,让村民们做额外的工作,这是不公平的。
与此同时,我不得不承认,一些徒步的人是恬不知耻的。也许这只占人口的5%,但我们仍然不能杜绝乱扔垃圾的行为。
所以我决定帮助村民建立一个垃圾收集机制,像游戏项目一样。
项目计划还没有完成。
如果你有任何意见或建议,请告诉我!
如果你看到了一些成功的解决相关问题的方法,请与我分享。我从来没有去过中国以外的野生地区,所以这对我来说完全陌生。
In one of my previous entries, I talked about a cave on my last hike trail.
( You can find athe video link here if you haven't seen it: https://langcorrect.com/journals/the-triple-happiness-of-hike/)
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It's a wild cave, which means there's no dedicated team to take care of it.
When we got there, Wwe found some trash on the ground, but we didn't have the tools to dispose of it, let alone carry it down the hill.
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Luckily, that area belongs to a small village, so villagers will come to clean it in their spare time.
But I still feel it's wrong.
It's unfair to leave those pieces of trash in the cave and let the villagers do extra work.
Maybe Iit's only about 5% of the population, but still, we can't put an end to littering.
Only proper nouns like the name of countries, continents, person, days of the week, months and so on can the first letter be written in capital letter. Proper nouns are specific names and not generalized names like dog, shoe, street.
It is not after a full stop, so it's first letter can't be in capital letter.
So I decided to help the villagers build a garbage collection program as a game project.
The project plan hasn't been finished yet.
If you have any advice or suggestions, feel free to tell me!
And if you have seen some successful solutions to related problems, please share them with me.
I have never hiked to any wild area outside China, so it's totally unknown to me.
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It's a problem here too. You can try educating them on the dangers of littering the environment. I had a classmate who always told us not to throw trash anywhere on the road, that we're making the environment dirty, instead we should keep the trash until we find somewhere to throw it away. Recently, another classmate of mine referred to this and said her education then made him stop throwing trash anywhere.
I hope you don't mind the long story 😅😬
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( You can find a video link here if you haven't seen it: https://langcorrect.com/journals/the-triple-happiness-of-hike/)
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The project plan hasn't been finished yet.
If you have any advice or suggestions, feel free to tell me!
And if you have seen some successful solutions to related problems, please share them with me.
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In one of my previous entries, I talked about a cave I found on my last hike trail.
This sentence is something a native might say, however it looks a little unnatural when written down. It suggests that cave was *on* the trail which I don't think is what you meant, especially since your post said it's a "wild cave".
An alternative:
"I talked about a cave just off the trail on my last hike"
( You can find a video link here if you haven't seen it: https://langcorrect.com/journals/the-triple-happiness-of-hike/)
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It's a wild cave, which means there's no dedicated team to take care of it.
I'm not sure if "wild cave" is the right term. I tried searching online but couldn't find a suitable alternative.
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"I have to admit that some people in the hiking community are shameless"
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This was great work. I was able to understand everything you wanted to communicate. I was also able to understand your "emotion" through your word choices (e.g. "shameless", "unfair").
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