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ballilatte

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I Missing My Dad

I missing my dad because he is death last year. After my dad death, life grow into harder. Sometimes I deploring because he can't returning toward we side. But I expecting to meeting with dad in heaven.

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I Missing My Dad

I miss my Dad

I missing my dDad because he is deathdied last year.

After my dadhis death, life grow intoew harder.

Sometimes I deploringam sad because he can'twon’t be returning toward we side us.

But I am expecting to meeting with dad him in heaven.

I am missing my dad because he is deathdied last year.

"passed away" is a more gentle way to say "died" and I would probably use it here, "died" is also correct.

After my dad's death, life grow intoew harder.

Sometimes I deploringspair because he can't returning toward we to our side.

I'm not certain what you meant by "I'm deploring" so I guessed at despair because it makes sense to me. I'm sorry if it's not exactly what you were going for.

But I expecting to meeting with dad in heaven.

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I'm very sorry for your loss 😔 I know you'll see your father again and you're doing a great job expressing yourself in English!

I Missing My Dad

I'm missing my dad because he is deathdied last year.

I'm sorry for your loss. May he rest in peace.

After my dad's death, life grow intohas gotten much harder.

Sometimes I am deploring because he can't returning toward we to our side.

But I am expecting to meeting with my dad in heaven.

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ballilatte

yesterday

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thank you for the correction and your beatiful wish

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marblemenow

yesterday

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You're welcome.

I Missing My Dad


I Missing My Dad

I Missing My Dad

I miss my Dad

I missing my dad because he is death last year.


I'm missing my dad because he is deathdied last year.

I'm sorry for your loss. May he rest in peace.

I am missing my dad because he is deathdied last year.

"passed away" is a more gentle way to say "died" and I would probably use it here, "died" is also correct.

I missing my dDad because he is deathdied last year.

After my dad death, life grow into harder.


After my dad's death, life grow intohas gotten much harder.

After my dad's death, life grow intoew harder.

After my dadhis death, life grow intoew harder.

Sometimes I deploring because he can't returning toward we side.


Sometimes I am deploring because he can't returning toward we to our side.

Sometimes I deploringspair because he can't returning toward we to our side.

I'm not certain what you meant by "I'm deploring" so I guessed at despair because it makes sense to me. I'm sorry if it's not exactly what you were going for.

Sometimes I deploringam sad because he can'twon’t be returning toward we side us.

But I expecting to meeting with dad in heaven.


But I am expecting to meeting with my dad in heaven.

But I expecting to meeting with dad in heaven.

But I am expecting to meeting with dad him in heaven.

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