Although I feel happy to be here, baecause I've learnt a lot about cultures, I've improved my english, meet new people and have a job that I like, I'm still missing the warm hug of my mom and my dad, the delicious food that my mom used to cook for me every time that I was telling her that I was starving of her chicken rice or "Carne Sudada".

I would love to come back soon, I think that I deserve a fresh start, see my family, eat as much as aI can and come back to Canada strongest, with the hope to achieve all my goals.

I've been in Canada for 2 years and it feels anlike eternity.

Although I feel happy to be here, baecause I've learnt a lot aboubout different cultures, I've improved my english, meet new people and have a job that I like, I'm still missing the warm hug of my mom and my dad, the delicious food that my mom used to cook for me every time that I was telling her that I was star'm craving of her chicken rice or "Carne Sudada".

I think that, one of the reasons that makes me miss my home is the food, I miss the real food, to enjoy a fresh piece of fruit, our traditional "Lechona" on a Sunday morning and a fresh juice of passion fruit.

Also, the weather here doesn't help, feeling atthe temperature being -15 degrees makes this sadness worst, while in my city they are at 32 degrees.

I would love to come back soon, I think that I deserve a fresh start, see my family, eat as much as aI can and come back to Canada strongest, with the hope to achieve all my goals.

I miss Colombia, my home country.

my country also works but english speakers generally say home country refering to where they were born if they are somewhere else

I've been in Canada for 2 years and it feels an like eternity.

small error no rules just a phrase to remember

Although I feel happy to be here, baecause I've learnt a lot about culture/different cultures, I've improved my english, I meet/met new people and gotten/have a job that I like, but I'm still missing the warm hug ofrom my mom and my dad, the delicious food that my mom used to cook for me every time that I was tellingtold her that I was starving ofor her chicken rice or "Carne Sudada".

culture is the concept of culture we say "different cultures" when refering to other cultures. we also say " latin culture/european cultures" when reffering to a group but we don't generally say "cultures" by itself

met or "I meet new people" generally if you want to swap tenses to im no grammar expert but this just doesnt sound correct
gotten if you swap tense then "have" a job works but if not stay in the tense

but to make it flow better this i beleive is grammatically correct tho
generally its "hug from" you can say "embrace of" this is a flow thing and something that was just gutterally wrong

mom and dad flows better in american english

not continuos tense in this context you told her in the past its completed action then something happened if she was making you food as you were at the same time telling her about how you were starving it makes more sense but in this context its past

I think that, one of the reasons that makes meI miss my home is the food, I miss the real food, to enjoy a fresh piece of fruit, our traditional "Lechona" on a Sunday morning and a fresh juice of passion fruit.

"I" flows better than

honesty outside of that actually fantastic styling and listing and grammar jeez i wish i was as good as you at writing in a second language

Also, the weather here doesn't help, freelzing at -15 degrees makes this sadness worst/worsens my sadness, while in my city they are at 32 degrees.

small error

writing suggestion the original is fine

I would love to come back soon, I think that I deserve a fresh start, see my family, eat as much as a can and come back to Canada at my strongest/stronger, with the hope to achieve all my goals.

depending on what you want to say either at your strongest or stronger

I've been in Canada for 2 years and it feels like an eternity.

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I think that, one of the reasons that makes meI miss my home is the food,. I miss the real food, tolike enjoying a fresh piece of fruit, such as our traditional "Llechona," on a Sunday morning, and a fresh juice ofly squeezed passion fruit juice.

Also, the weather here doesn't help,; feeling at -15 degrees makes this sadness worste, while in my city they areis at 32 degrees.

I would love to comego back soon,. I think that I deserve a fresh start, seeing my family, eating as much as aI can, and comeing back to Canada strongestr, with the hope to achieve all my goals.