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santiago_sandoval2908

July 25, 2025

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I´m a father now!

Hey guys, I just want to share a special moment in my life with all of you, my beautifull daughter Avril was born five days ago. I don´t now if you are parents but that feeling is amazing and it´s hard to describe. I never gonna forget that date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.

Every day we are learning more things about our girl but we do everything with love. Avril: if you read this in the future: You are the love of my life and I´ll try my best for you!

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I´m a father now!

Hey guys, I just want to share a special moment in my life with all of you, my beautifull daughter Avril was born five days ago.

beautiful is only one L

I’m never gonna forget that date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.

You could say ‘I’m never gonna’ or ‘I’ll never’ but you need one of those.

Every day we are learning more things about our girl but we do everything with love.

Avril: if you read this in the future: You are the love of my life and I´ll try my best for you!

I´'m a fFather nNow!

Hey guys,everyone. I just want to share a special moment in my life with all of you, m. My beautifull daughter Avril was born five days ago.

I replaced guys with everyone to make the greeting more gender-inclusive. I also broke up your sentence into shorter sentences. Congratulations on your baby, by the way!

I don´'t know if you are parents, but that feeling is amazing, and it´'s hard to describe.

I'm not personally a parent, but that feeling sounds amazing.

I am never gonnaing to forget thatis date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.

I wrote this in a more formal context. If you want to state more casually, you can say, “I am never gonna forget this date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.”

Every day, we are learning more things about our girl but. Even then, we do everything with love.

Avril:, if you read this in the future: Y, you are the love of my life, and I´'ll try my best for you!

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Congratulations on your baby and hope she'll be healthy and well. :D

I´m a father now!


I´'m a fFather nNow!

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Hey guys, I just want to share a special moment in my life with all of you, my beautifull daughter Avril was born five days ago.


Hey guys,everyone. I just want to share a special moment in my life with all of you, m. My beautifull daughter Avril was born five days ago.

I replaced guys with everyone to make the greeting more gender-inclusive. I also broke up your sentence into shorter sentences. Congratulations on your baby, by the way!

Hey guys, I just want to share a special moment in my life with all of you, my beautifull daughter Avril was born five days ago.

beautiful is only one L

I don´t now if you are parents but that feeling is amazing and it´s hard to describe.


I don´'t know if you are parents, but that feeling is amazing, and it´'s hard to describe.

I'm not personally a parent, but that feeling sounds amazing.

I never gonna forget that date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.


I am never gonnaing to forget thatis date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.

I wrote this in a more formal context. If you want to state more casually, you can say, “I am never gonna forget this date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.”

I’m never gonna forget that date and time: July 19 at 11:55 am.

You could say ‘I’m never gonna’ or ‘I’ll never’ but you need one of those.

Every day we are learning more things about our girl but we do everything with love.


Every day, we are learning more things about our girl but. Even then, we do everything with love.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Avril: if you read this in the future: You are the love of my life and I´ll try my best for you!


Avril:, if you read this in the future: Y, you are the love of my life, and I´'ll try my best for you!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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