July 7, 2021
I Love Swimming
I learned swimming in 2014. Since then, I go swimming every summer.
I still remember the feeling when I was swimming last year. I went swimming in the morning a few times. The sun shone the water. The water flew like diamonds. It was so quiet and pure under the water. When I swam into the water, I felt like I swam into another world which only belonged to me. I thoungt a lot of things, nobody disturbed me. When I raised up my head out of the water for taking a breath, I heard so many noise. I knew that I was back to the reality world. But I swam into the water soon. I entered my own world again. In and out, again and again.
I Love Swimming
I learned how to swimming in 2014.
Since then, I go swimming every summer.
I still remember the feeling when I was swimming last year.
I went swimming in the morning a few times.
The sun shone on the water.
The water flewglistened(?) like diamonds.
It was so quiet and pure under the water.
When I swam into the water, I felt like I swam into another world which only belonged to me.
I thounght a lot of things,and nobody disturbed me.
When I raised up my head out of the water forto takinge a breath, I heard so manyuch noise.
I knew that I was back to the reality world.
But I swam back into the water soon.
I entered my own world again.
In and out, again and again.
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Overall really nicely written!
July 7, 2021
The water flewglistened(?) like diamonds.
Yes, the water glistened like diamonds. Actually, it was more than that, but I can't describe it properly right now because of my poor lexis.
It is so wonderful that I wish you would enjoy it oneday.
Thanks for correcting.
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I learned swimming in 2014. I learned how to swim |
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I still remember the feeling when I was swimming last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went swimming in the morning a few times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The sun shone the water. The sun shone on the water. |
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The water flew like diamonds. The water |
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It was so quiet and pure under the water. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I swam into the water, I felt like I swam into another world which only belonged to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thoungt a lot of things, nobody disturbed me. I thou |
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When I raised up my head out of the water for taking a breath, I heard so many noise. When I raised |
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I knew that I was back to the reality world. I knew that I was back to the real |
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But I swam into the water soon. But I swam back into the water |
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I entered my own world again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In and out, again and again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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