Oct. 5, 2020
I love science fiction
One of my hobbies is reading. I read any categories of books but especially I like science fiction. My first SF book was "The War of the Worlds" written by H. G. Wells. I read it when I was an elementary school student and I was impressed.
Since then, I was absorbed in Shinichi Hoshi, who is a Japanese writer and famous for short stories. These stories are easy to read but very interesting. It is like concentrating the key idea that can be a long novel into a couple of pages.
Another of my favorite authors is Philip K. Dick. His masterpiece is "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?". It was very intriguing and I read his long novels more. These days, I realized he also wrote short novels, and these are a little different from long ones but also good.
Next time, I will introduce "The Three-Body Problem" which is the best book I have read in these three years.
I lLove sScience fFiction
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One of my hobbies is reading.
I read any categoriesy of books but especially I like science fiction.
My first SF book was "The War of the Worlds" written by H. G. Wells.
I read it when I was an elementary school student and I was impressed.
Since then, I was absorbed indevoured the works of Shinichi Hoshi, who is a Japanese writer and famous for short stories.
When enjoying an author, we usually say "the works of..." or "the books by...". "absorbed" is not quite right, it is sort of passive. "devoured" is more what I think you are going for, they are so delicious and fun that you 'ate them all up'.
These stories are easy to read but very interesting.
It is like concentrating thea key idea that caould have been be a long novel into a couple of pages.
Another of my favorite authors is Philip K. Dick.
His masterpiece is "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?".
It was very intriguing and I read his other long novels moretoo.
I am not sure what you wanted to say. However "read his long novels more" feels unfinished and does not make sense.
These days, I realized he also wrote short novels, and; these are a little different from the long ones but also good.
You can join two short sentences with a semicolon. It adds variety to your writing. There is nothing wrong with using ", and" but sometimes using a semicolon adds variety and style.
Next time, I will introduce "The Three-Body Problem" which is the best book I have read in these last three years.
"these three years" sounds a little unusual. More often people would say "in the last three years".
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Very well done!
Oct. 6, 2020
Thank you so much!
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I read any categories of books but especially I like science fiction. I read any categor |
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My first SF book was "The War of the Worlds" written by H. G. Wells. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I read it when I was an elementary school student and I was impressed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since then, I was absorbed in Shinichi Hoshi, who is a Japanese writer and famous for short stories. Since then, I When enjoying an author, we usually say "the works of..." or "the books by...". "absorbed" is not quite right, it is sort of passive. "devoured" is more what I think you are going for, they are so delicious and fun that you 'ate them all up'. |
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These stories are easy to read but very interesting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is like concentrating the key idea that can be a long novel into a couple of pages. It is like concentrating |
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Another of my favorite authors is Philip K. Dick. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His masterpiece is "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was very intriguing and I read his long novels more. It was very intriguing and I read his other long novels I am not sure what you wanted to say. However "read his long novels more" feels unfinished and does not make sense. |
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These days, I realized he also wrote short novels, and these are a little different from long ones but also good. These days, I realize You can join two short sentences with a semicolon. It adds variety to your writing. There is nothing wrong with using ", and" but sometimes using a semicolon adds variety and style. |
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Next time, I will introduce "The Three-Body Problem" which is the best book I have read in these three years. Next time, I will introduce "The Three-Body Problem" which is the best book I have read in the "these three years" sounds a little unusual. More often people would say "in the last three years". |
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