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LeahLeah

Jan. 7, 2026

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I love Coke🤗

I love eating rice crackers while drinking cola.

The rice cracker is called “おせんべい” in Japan.

It’s made from a sticky rice, its traditional Japanese snack.

“おせんべい” have various flavors, like a soy sauce, black sesame, shrimp flavor…etc. And then I especially like a soy sauces flavor.

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I love Coke🤗

I love eating rice crackers while drinking cola.

The rice cracker is called “おせんべい” in Japan.

It’s made from a sticky rice, itsand it's a traditional Japanese snack.

1) Since sticky rice is considered uncountable (even though you can probably still count them if you try ;) ), so we don't put "a" in front of it.
2) Separating two complete sentences with just a comma is considered as a run-on sentence and is grammatically incorrect. You can either separate them into separate sentences with a "." or add a conjunction like "and" after the comma.
3) its = something that belongs to "it" e.g. A toy that belongs to a dog = its toy
it's = it is

“おせんべい” haves various flavors, like a soy sauce, black sesame, shrimp, flavor…etc.

1) “おせんべい” is considered as a single name even you are probably thinking about them as multiple items.
2) soy sauce is uncountable
3) Since you didn't add the word "flavor" to soy sauce and black sesame, it should not be added to shrimp only.

And then I especially like athe soy sauces flavor.

Since you mentioned soy sauce before, "the" is used to let readers know you are talking about what you have introduced before.

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I like “おせんべい” too! Even though I haven't had them for a long time.

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Lionel

yesterday

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And your English is already very understandable, these kind of "mistakes" are relatively minor and often misused by even native speakers too.

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LeahLeah

yesterday

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Thank you so much 😊
I've studied for 10 years, but my English isn't improving and I can’t speak English, but I'll keep doing my best.

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LeahLeah

yesterday

4

I forgot a comma between two sentences.😭

I've studied for 10 years, but my English isn't improving, and I can’t speak English, but I'll keep doing my best.

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Lionel

yesterday

40

Oh, actually you can omit that comma. In fact it actually makes more sense here since "my English isn't improving and I can’t speak English" can be considered as a single unit for the contrast, i.e. [(+) but (-)] where (-) = "my English isn't improving and I can’t speak English". Both versions are correct. You just cannot remove the "and" since both are complete sentences.

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LeahLeah

yesterday

4

Thank you for explaining😊
I think that I make a lot of mistakes from now on, but I'll keep doing my best.

I love Coke🤗

I love eating rice crackers while drinking cola.

The rice cracker is called “おせんべい” in Japan.

It’s made from a sticky rice, itsand it's a traditional Japanese snack.

If the phrases on both sides of a comma have a subject and a predicate, there must be a conjunction after the comma.
To show the contraction of "it is," an apostrophe is written (it's). The word "its" signifies possession.
"snack" is singular and countable, so it needs an article.

“おせんべい” have various flavors, like a soy sauce, black sesame, shrimp flavor…etc.

And then I especially like athe soy sauces flavor.

"And then" is only used to connect sentences in chronological order.
"The" is used instead of "a" because you are talking about the flavor of a specific object, おせんべい.

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This is well-constructed. English articles ("a" and "the") can be difficult, so I would suggest some extra practice, but otherwise this is very impressive English.

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LeahLeah

Jan. 7, 2026

4

Thank you so much 😊
The more I think about how to use English articles ("a" and "the") the more I don't know😭
I'll keep doing my best.

I love Coke🤗


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I love eating rice crackers while drinking cola.


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It’s made from a sticky rice, its traditional Japanese snack.


It’s made from a sticky rice, itsand it's a traditional Japanese snack.

If the phrases on both sides of a comma have a subject and a predicate, there must be a conjunction after the comma. To show the contraction of "it is," an apostrophe is written (it's). The word "its" signifies possession. "snack" is singular and countable, so it needs an article.

It’s made from a sticky rice, itsand it's a traditional Japanese snack.

1) Since sticky rice is considered uncountable (even though you can probably still count them if you try ;) ), so we don't put "a" in front of it. 2) Separating two complete sentences with just a comma is considered as a run-on sentence and is grammatically incorrect. You can either separate them into separate sentences with a "." or add a conjunction like "and" after the comma. 3) its = something that belongs to "it" e.g. A toy that belongs to a dog = its toy it's = it is

“おせんべい” have various flavors, like a soy sauce, black sesame, shrimp flavor…etc.


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“おせんべい” haves various flavors, like a soy sauce, black sesame, shrimp, flavor…etc.

1) “おせんべい” is considered as a single name even you are probably thinking about them as multiple items. 2) soy sauce is uncountable 3) Since you didn't add the word "flavor" to soy sauce and black sesame, it should not be added to shrimp only.

And then I especially like a soy sauces flavor.


And then I especially like athe soy sauces flavor.

"And then" is only used to connect sentences in chronological order. "The" is used instead of "a" because you are talking about the flavor of a specific object, おせんべい.

And then I especially like athe soy sauces flavor.

Since you mentioned soy sauce before, "the" is used to let readers know you are talking about what you have introduced before.

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