Sept. 19, 2021
I live in the south China, where is so warm. The change of four seasons aren't obvious, most of the time, winter doesn't exist, especially the climate is becoming more and more extreme.
Today is the first day of the Mid-autumn Festival vacation. I went to my brother's home yeaterday. I stayed up late but woke up early. In the morning, the breeze was so soft, and it was cool. It was very comfortable and pleasant. I wanted to feel more about the world.
Unfortunately, it became so hot in the afternoon. It made me very upset. I wanted to nothing. I hated this.
The sun sets earlier and earlier, it does really be autumn. Before it became completely dark, the sky was so blue. The light went through the leaves, they looked yellower in the blue. The breeze showed up again and told you that: you can like the world a little more.
The summer swimming pool will close when September ends. It seems like time flies and we always don't notice. But there is a ruler of time, which is reminding us that: Time flies and never go back.
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Nice! Glad you're getting a break. 中秋节快乐!希望你的假期很轻松。
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