Feb. 4, 2023
I Like Relaxed People
I like relaxed people. Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that? Well, because unlike many of my friends, I’m not a chill person at all.
Are you interested in getting a healthy dose of adrenaline? Well, imagine yourself being me. I’m the one who always fusses around, thinking that the world will end exactly today. If you come with me to a meeting, I also would be the one who asks a security questions about safety and checks all fire escapes (just in case). Inasmuch as I’m an expert on anxiety, many of my friends are the complete opposite of me. They would be those who nonchalantly watching the Titanic crash, still being the passengers, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of the cliff.
I don’t know what it takes to attain this level of tranquility and which techniques you guys use. I always knew that self-relaxation is a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed to-the-fullest mind has interested me for years. Yet, over time I had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Thinking of the benefits of calmness for my future, I’ve tried different techniques for going into a serene state of mind: meditation, yoga, deep breathing exercises, mindfulness, and physical exercise. As a result of these practices, I’ve only learned to appear relaxed, while inside of me was a whole whirlwind of emotions.
Honestly, I envy you, my friends — you who can remain calm in the middle of tornado. To my way of thinking, you’re true superheroes. As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and everyday problems, you calmly drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all. If I had been you, I would have accomplished much more in life, effortlessly overcoming every barrier. If I had been you, I wouldn’t have thought about all the possible bad things that might happen.
Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me told me I’m a calm person. Shocked, I choked on the coffee and spat it out. Being calm is one of the things I’d been longing for many years, but it was awkward to explain it to him. On the ocean’s surface, everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano.
Still, I like calm people.When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company. Listening attentively to my complaints, they always manage to settle me down. Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot? Or they understand everything about life and don’t carethat much? Maybe I also will learn to no not care one day. Probably when I'll die.
I like relaxed people. Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say, “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that? Well, because unlike many of my friends, I’m not a relaxed person at all.
Are you interested in getting a healthy dose of adrenaline? Well, imagine yourself being me. I’m the one who always fusses around, as if the world will end today. If you came with me to a meeting, I would also be the one who asks questions about security and checks all the fire escapes (just in case). Inasmuch as I’m an expert on anxiety, many of my friends are the complete opposite of me. They would be those who nonchalantly watch the Titanic crash, while still on board, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of a cliff.
I don’t know what it takes to attain this level of tranquility and which techniques you guys use. I've always known that self-relaxation was a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed "life life to-the-fullest" mindset has interested me for years. Yet, over time, I've had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Thinking of the benefits of calmness for my future, I’ve tried different techniques for going into a serene state of mind: meditation, yoga, deep breathing exercises, mindfulness, and physical exercise. As a result of these practices, I’ve only learned to appear relaxed, while inside of me was a whole whirlwind of emotions.
Honestly, I envy you, my friends — you who can remain calm in the middle of a storm. from my perspective, To my mind, you’re the true superheroes. As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and everyday problems, you calmly drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all. If I had been you, I would have accomplished much more in life, effortlessly overcoming every barrier. If I had been you, I wouldn’t have thought about all the possible bad things that might happen.
Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me told me I’m a calm person. Shocked, I choked on my coffee and spit it out. Being calm is one of the things I’d been longing for many years, but it was awkward to explain it to him. On the ocean’s surface, everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano.
Still, I like calm people.When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company. Listening attentively to my complaints, they always manage to settle me down. Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot. Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? Maybe I will also learn not to care one day. Probably when I die.
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I Like Relaxed People
I like relaxed people.
Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that?
Well, because unlike many of my friends, I’m not a chill person at all.
Are you interested in getting a healthy dose of adrenaline?
Well, imagine yourself being me.
I’m the one who always fusses around, thinking that (today is the day that the world will end / the world will end exactly today).
I’m the one who always fusses around, thinking that (today is the day that the world will end / the world will end today).
Maybe personal preference here, but "exactly" doesn't seem like a perfect fit. If you still want some emphasis on "today", you can move "today" to the front in the form of "today is the day that."
If you coame with me to a meeting, I also would also be the one who asks a(how security e it is/how safe it is/about the safety of it/questions about safeecurity) and checks all the fire escapes (just in case).
If you came with me to a meeting, I would also be the one who asks (how secure it is/how safe it is/about the safety of it/questions about security) and checks all the fire escapes (just in case).
"security questions about safety" feels redundant since "security questions" is already related to "safety"
Just saying "security questions" makes it sound to me like you're interrogating an attendee at the meeting (as if you were a security guard). "secure" and "safety" have different nuances; "secure" can mean safety, but can also refer to whether (confidential) information in the meeting will get leaked or not, and "safety" refers to how much physical danger you're in, so I put in a few different phrases here for you to choose from just in case. "questions about the security" can work if you want to know if there are security guards, alarms, etc.
Inasmuch as I’m an expert on anxiety, many of my friends are the complete opposite of me.
They would be those who nonchalantly watching the Titanic crash, stsink whille being the passengers, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of the cliff.
They would be those who nonchalantly watch the Titanic sink while being passengers, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of the cliff.
I don’t know what it takes to attain this level of tranquility and which techniques you guys use.
I always knew that self-relaxation iwas a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed "live life to- the- fullest" mindset has interested me for years.
I always knew that self-relaxation was a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed "live life to the fullest" mindset has interested me for years.
Yet, over time I've had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time I've had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself.
Thinking of the benefits of calmness for my future, I’ve tried different techniques for going into a serene state of mind: meditation, yoga, deep breathing exercises, mindfulness, and physical exercise.
As a result of these practices, I’ve only learned to appear relaxed, while inside of me was a whole whirlwind of emotions.
Honestly, I envy you, my friends — you who can remain calm in the middle of a tornado/storm. Honestly, I envy you, my friends — you who can remain calm in the middle of a tornado/storm.
"storm" sounds more idiomatic to me, probably because of the idiom "calm in the eye of the storm"
To my way of thinkinge/From my perspective, you’re the true superheroes.
To me/From my perspective, you’re the true superheroes.
As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and everyday problems, you calmly drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all.
If I had been you, I would have accomplished much more in life, effortlessly overcoming every barrier.
If I had been you, I wouldn’t have thought about all the possible bad things that might happen.
Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me told me I’m a calm person.
Shocked, I choked on themy coffee and spait it out.
Shocked, I choked on my coffee and spit it out.
So, this is a US-dialect thing, but we say "spit" for past tense here for some reason. Yeah, it makes no sense. https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/spit_out#:~:text=spitting%20it%20out.-,Usage%20notes,while%20spat%20is%20common%20everywhere.
Being calm is one of the things I’d been longing for many years, but it was awkward to explain it to him.
On the ocean’s surface, everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano.
Still, I like calm people.When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company.
Listening attentively to my complaints, they always manage to settle me down.
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot?
Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much?
Maybe I also will learn to no not care one day.
Maybe I also will learn to not care one day.
Probably when I'll die.
Probably when I die.
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I totally understand how you feel. Excellent English, by the way!
Feb. 5, 2023
To my way of thinkinge/From my perspective, you’re the true superheroes.
what's wrong with "To my way of thinking" ?
Feb. 5, 2023
Thank you for your help and feedback 😊🙏
Feb. 5, 2023
what's wrong with "To my way of thinking" ?
Hmm, actually maybe it’s fine. I had just never heard this expression used before as a conjunction, but when I Googled it, it was in the dictionary.
I’ve heard “According to my way of thinking,” before, but this was the first time I had heard it without “according” at the beginning of the phrase.
Feb. 5, 2023
Hmm, actually maybe it’s fine. I had just never heard this expression used before as a conjunction, but when I Googled it, it was in the dictionary. I’ve heard “According to my way of thinking,” before, but this was the first time I had heard it without “according” at the beginning of the phrase.
I saw this expression in 2 articles so I think I can use it 😊
Feb. 5, 2023
I saw this expression in 2 articles so I think I can use it 😊
Yeah, it seems like it’s a real phrase, but it sounds very odd to me. And the other natives here also think it’s unnatural. Maybe it’s just very rare.
I Like Relaxed People
I like relaxed people.
Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that?
Well, because unlike many of my friends, I’m not a chill person at all. Well, because unlike many of my friends, I’m not a chill person at all.
This is not wrong, but "chill" is quite an informal word. "relaxed" is probably a bit more appropriate here.
Are you interested in getting a healthy dose of adrenaline?
Well, imagine yourself being me.
I’m the one who always fusses around, thinking thatas if the world will end exactly today.
I’m the one who always fusses around, as if the world will end today.
In this case "as if" sounds a bit more natural, since you probably don't literally think the world will end. We tend not to use "exactly" with "today".
If you coame with me to a meeting, I also would be the one who asks a securityed questions about safety and checksed all the fire escapes (just in case).
If you came with me to a meeting, I would be the one who asked questions about safety and checked all the fire escapes (just in case).
"also" should go after "would", but here it is not necessary. Usually "all" is followed by "the". Also, the tenses need to agree.
Inasmuch as I’m an expert on anxiety, many of my friends are the complete opposite of me.
They would be those who nonchalantly watching the Titanic crash, still being the passengerswhile still on board, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of thea cliff.
They would be those who nonchalantly watch the Titanic crash, while still on board, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of a cliff.
"on board" is used to express the idea of being on a ship (or train, plane, etc.) as opposed to getting off.
I don’t know what it takes to attain this level of tranquility and which techniques you guys use.
I always knew that self-relaxation iwas a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed to-the-fullest mind has interested me for years.
I always knew that self-relaxation was a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed to-the-fullest mind has interested me for years.
With verbs like "knew" in the past tense, you should use "was" not "is".
Yet, over time I have had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time I have had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself.
Thinking of the benefits of calmness for my future, I’ve tried different techniques for going into a serene state of mind: meditation, yoga, deep breathing exercises, mindfulness, and physical exercise.
As a result of these practices, I’ve only learned to appear relaxed, while inside of me was a whole whirlwind of emotions.
Honestly, I envy you, my friends — you who can remain calm in the middle of tornado.
To my way of thinking, you’re true superheroes. To my way of thinking, you’re true superheroes.
Not wrong, but "from my perspective" or "to my mind" might sound a bit more natural.
As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and everyday problems, you calmly drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all.
If I had been you, I would have accomplished much more in life, effortlessly overcoming every barrier.
If I had been you, I wouldn’t have thought about all the possible bad things that might happen.
Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me told me I’m a calm person.
Shocked, I choked on the coffee and spat it out.
Being calm is one of the things I’d been longing for many years, but it was awkward to explain it to him.
On the ocean’s surface, everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano.
Still, I like calm people.When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company.
Listening attentively to my complaints, they always manage to settle me down.
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot?!
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot!
This is not a question, so using a question mark is very informal. It would be okay in a text message to a friend, but in an essay it seems out of place.
Or they understand everything about life and don’t carethat much?
Maybe I also will learn to no notwill also learn not to care one day.
Maybe I will also learn not to care one day.
"also" comes after "will", and normally "not" goes before "to [verb]"
Probably when I'll die.
Probably when I die.
"when" is generally used with the present tense, even if the meaning is in the future. E.g. "When I go to Paris next week, I will eat a croissant"
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This was very good, with only minor mistakes. Well done.
Feb. 4, 2023
If you coame with me to a meeting, I also would be the one who asks a securityed questions about safety and checksed all the fire escapes (just in case).
"also" should go after "would", but here it is not necessary. Usually "all" is followed by "the". Also, the tenses need to agree.
2 conditional— If + past simple, would/could/might + infinitive — If I had more time, I would learn a new language. "If you came...., I would be the one who ask.."
Am I wrong?
Feb. 4, 2023
thank you so much for your explanations and feedback 🙏
Feb. 4, 2023
2 conditional— If + past simple, would/could/might + infinitive — If I had more time, I would learn a new language. "If you came...., I would be the one who ask.." Am I wrong?
These combinations both work:
"come" + "will be the one who asks/will ask"
"came" + "would be the one who asked/would ask"
But in my opinion, "would be the one who asks" sounds a little bit unnatural (although not very).
I Like Relaxed People
I like relaxed people.
Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say, “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that? Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say, “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that?
Well, because unlike many of my friends, I’m not a chill person at all.
Are you interested in getting a healthy dose of adrenaline?
Well, imagine yourself being me.
I’m the one who always fusses around, thinking that the world will end exactly today.
If you come with me to a meeting, I also would be the one who asks a security questions about safety and checks all fire escapes (just in case).
If you come with me to a meeting, I also would be the one who asks security questions about safety and checks all fire escapes (just in case).
Inasmuch as I’m an expert on anxiety, many of my friends are the complete opposite of me.
They would be those who nonchalantly watching the Titanic crash, still being thare passengers, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of the cliff.
They would be those who nonchalantly watch the Titanic crash, are passengers, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of the cliff.
I've always knewown that self-relaxation is a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed to-the-fullest mind has interested me for years.
I've always known that self-relaxation is a worthwhile skill and the idea of enjoying life with a relaxed to-the-fullest mind has interested me for years.
Yet, over time, I had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time, I had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself.
Thinking of the benefits of calmness for my future, I’ve tried different techniques for going into a serene state of mind: meditation, yoga, deep breathing exercises, mindfulness, and physical exercise.
As a result of these practices, I’ve only learned to appear relaxed, while inside of me was a whole whirlwind of emotions.
Honestly, I envy you, my friends — you who can remain calm in the middle of tornado.
To my way of thinkingIn my opinion, you’re true superheroes.
In my opinion, you’re true superheroes.
This sounds a bit more natural.
As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and everyday problems, you calmly drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all.
If I had been you, I would have accomplished much more in life, effortlessly overcoming every barrier.
If I had been you, I wouldn’t have thought about all the possible bad things that might happen.
Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me, told me I’m a calm person. Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me, told me I’m a calm person.
Shocked, I choked on the coffee and spat it out.
Being calm is one of the things I’d been longing for many years, but it was awkward to explain it to him.
On the ocean’s surface, everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano.
Still, I like calm people.When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company.
Listening attentively to my complaints, they always manage to settle me down.
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot?.
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot.
Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much?
Maybe I also will learn to no not care one day.
Maybe I also will learn to not care one day.
Probably when I'll die.
Probably when I die.
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Great job! Only a couple minor mistakes. Most of it was advance English! :)
Feb. 4, 2023
Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me, told me I’m a calm person.
This is a restrictive clause (info after "who" is necessary for the meaning of a sentence). Why did you suggest a comma?
Feb. 4, 2023
thank you for your feedback! I have one question about a comma and will be grateful to know your opinion :)
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Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that? Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say, “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that? Every time I see someone at ease, I want to pat them on the back and say, “Keep it up, man, because you can.” Why do I want to do that? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m the one who always fusses around, thinking that the world will end exactly today. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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If you come with me to a meeting, I also would be the one who asks a security questions about safety and checks all fire escapes (just in case).
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They would be those who nonchalantly watching the Titanic crash, still being the passengers, and who don’t seem to worry even when they find themselves hanging on the edge of the cliff.
They would be those who nonchalantly watch
They would be those who nonchalantly watch "on board" is used to express the idea of being on a ship (or train, plane, etc.) as opposed to getting off.
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I always knew that self-relaxation is a worthwhile skill, and the idea of enjoying life with relaxed to-the-fullest mind has interested me for years. |
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Yet, over time I had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time, I had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time, I had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time I have had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time I have had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time I've had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. Yet, over time I've had to admit that I’ll probably never achieve tranquility for myself. |
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Thinking of the benefits of calmness for my future, I’ve tried different techniques of going into a serene state of mind: meditation, yoga, deep breathing exercises, mindfulness, and physical exercise. |
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As a result of these practices, I’ve only learnt to appear calm while inside of me was a whole whirlwind of emotions. |
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To my way of thinking, you’re true superheroes.
This sounds a bit more natural. To my way of thinking, you’re true superheroes. To my way of thinking, you’re true superheroes. Not wrong, but "from my perspective" or "to my mind" might sound a bit more natural.
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As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and every-day problems, you easily drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all. |
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No doubt, if I were you, I would have accomplish much more in life, effortlessly overcoming every barrier as if it were nothing. |
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Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me told me I’m a calm person. Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me, told me I’m a calm person. Recently, a friend of mine who spent a couple of weeks with me, told me I’m a calm person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Being calm is one of the things I’d been longing for many years, but it was awkward to explain it to him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the ocean’s surface everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano. |
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When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company. |
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Listening attentively to my complaints, they always find a way to settle me down. |
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Sometimes I think, maybe all the calm people in the world just smoke too much pot? |
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Maybe I also will learn to no not care one day.
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As I’m desperately trying to make my way through life, struggling with anxiety, inner conflicts and everyday problems, you calmly drift through the obstacles, spreading around your peaceful, shamanic energy and not getting nervous at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Shocked, I choked on the coffee and spat it out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Shocked, I choked on So, this is a US-dialect thing, but we say "spit" for past tense here for some reason. Yeah, it makes no sense. https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/spit_out#:~:text=spitting%20it%20out.-,Usage%20notes,while%20spat%20is%20common%20everywhere. |
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On the ocean’s surface, everything looks different than at a depth, and I might look relaxed, but in fact wait for the eruption of a volcano. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Still, I like calm people.When I am once again scared to death by an imaginable disaster, I can find peace and nuggets of wisdom in their company. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Listening attentively to my complaints, they always manage to settle me down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot?
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot
Sometimes I think that maybe all the calm people just smoke too much pot This is not a question, so using a question mark is very informal. It would be okay in a text message to a friend, but in an essay it seems out of place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Or they understand everything about life and don’t carethat much? Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? Or they understand everything about life and don’t care that much? |
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Probably when I'll die.
Probably when I
Probably when I "when" is generally used with the present tense, even if the meaning is in the future. E.g. "When I go to Paris next week, I will eat a croissant"
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