May 14, 2020
I just wanted to check if these sentences make sense
If I travel abroad and see the world with my own eyes, I will learn a lot of things and it also give a good chance to look at my country from a new angle.
Nothing annoys me more than to be asked what my hobbies are. At such times, i have to say in a low voice "well, I don't have any hobbies." I wonder why people like hobbies and leisure activities so much.
I just wanted to check if these sentences make sense
If I travel abroad and see the world with my own eyes, I will learn a lot of things and it will also give me a good chance to look at my country from a new angle.
You're introducing a new subject with "it," so you need to introduce "will" again.
Nothing annoys me more than to be asked what my hobbies are.
At such times, iI have to say in a low voice, "wWell, I don't have any hobbies."
I wonder why people like having hobbies and leisure activities so much.
Or "care about hobbies." This is grammatical by itself, but it reads better this way.
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This was pretty accurate, grammatically speaking. Keep it up!
May 14, 2020
Thank you!
I just wanted to check if these sentences make sense.
If I travel abroad and see the world with my own eyes, I will learn a lot of things and it will also give me a good chance to look at my own country from a new angle.
Nothing annoys me more than to be asked what my hobbies are.
At such times, iI have to say in a low voice, "wWell, I don't have any hobbies."
I wonder why people like hobbies and leisure activities so much.
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Very nice! I made only very minor corrections.
May 14, 2020
Thank you so much!
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I just wanted to check if these sentences make sense I just wanted to check if these sentences make sense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I travel abroad and see the world with my own eyes, I will learn a lot of things and it also give a good chance to look at my country from a new angle. If I travel abroad and see the world with my own eyes, I will learn a lot of things and it will also give me a good chance to look at my own country from a new angle. If I travel abroad and see the world with my own eyes, I will learn a lot of things and it will also give me a good chance to look at my country from a new angle. You're introducing a new subject with "it," so you need to introduce "will" again. |
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Nothing annoys me more than to be asked what my hobbies are. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At such times, i have to say in a low voice "well, I don't have any hobbies." At such times, At such times, |
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I wonder why people like hobbies and leisure activities so much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I wonder why people like having hobbies and leisure activities so much. Or "care about hobbies." This is grammatical by itself, but it reads better this way. |
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