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I Just Want to Write Something

Thursday, October 28, 2021 
I do not know what to do sometimes, I like to do things quickly and I do not know what should I choose. I tried to learn Italian, then stopped, I did the same with French. The unique language I did not stop learning is English. I'm so glad about it because if I had given up, I would not be able to write this. I must improve many yet, but the good thing is, I think I can communicate with people if I had to travel to America or another country where English is spoken. I am making several mistakes, I know, but it is how we learn, we need to make mistakes to improve. Well, my vocabulary is improving each day. 
Well, as I said, I gave up learning Italian one time, French as well. Now I am studying Russian, but sometimes I think I should study French because is easier. Russian is so difficult. I prefer to do things quickly, so French takes less time.  Well, I am a Portuguese speaker, so it is faster to learn French than Russian. I would like to be not like a person who changes her choices every time, but that is how I am. I cannot change it. 
I want a job, however, I do not know how to get it. I'll try to get one because I want to have my own money. 
Sometimes it is difficult for me to say things, even When I am writing something that is only for me. I hate writing, but I do it because I need to improve my writing skills. I am going to give a chance in my native language, too. Maybe I'll have fun with it. 
I also always hated reading, but now I changed my mind. It is cool. Hating reading is a big problem because reading is very important, we need to read to know about different subjects. Reading can improve your vocabulary in your target language, even in your native language. I've been reading a lot in the last few months. I have improved very much. Reading is the secret to discovering the world. 
I do not have anyone to talk to to practice my speaking. 
That is it for now. See you.


<span> </span>Quinta-feira, 28 de outubro de 2021 N&atilde;o sei o que fazer &agrave;s vezes, gosto de fazer as coisas rapidamente e n&atilde;o sei o que devo escolher. Tentei aprender italiano, depois parei, fiz o mesmo com o franc&ecirc;s. A &uacute;nica l&iacute;ngua que n&atilde;o parei de aprender &eacute; o ingl&ecirc;s. Estou muito feliz com isso, porque se eu tivesse desistido, n&atilde;o seria capaz de escrever isso. Ainda preciso melhorar muito, mas o bom &eacute; que acho que posso me comunicar com as pessoas se tiver que viajar para os EUA ou outro pa&iacute;s onde se fale ingl&ecirc;s. Estou cometendo v&aacute;rios erros, eu sei, mas &eacute; assim que aprendemos, precisamos errar para melhorar. Bem, meu vocabul&aacute;rio est&aacute; melhorando a cada dia. Bem, como eu disse, uma vez desisti de aprender italiano, franc&ecirc;s tamb&eacute;m. Agora estou estudando russo, mas &agrave;s vezes acho que deveria estudar franc&ecirc;s porque &eacute; mais f&aacute;cil. Russo &eacute; t&atilde;o dif&iacute;cil. Eu prefiro fazer as coisas rapidamente, ent&atilde;o o franc&ecirc;s leva menos tempo. Bem, eu falo portugu&ecirc;s, ent&atilde;o &eacute; mais r&aacute;pido aprender franc&ecirc;s do que russo. Eu gostaria de n&atilde;o ser uma pessoa que muda suas escolhas todas as vezes, mas &eacute; assim que eu sou. Eu n&atilde;o consigo mudar isso. Quero um emprego, por&eacute;m n&atilde;o sei como consegui-lo. Vou tentar conseguir um porque quero ter meu pr&oacute;prio dinheiro. &Agrave;s vezes &eacute; dif&iacute;cil para mim dizer coisas, mesmo quando estou escrevendo algo que &eacute; s&oacute; para mim. Odeio escrever, mas fa&ccedil;o isso porque preciso melhorar minhas habilidades de escrita. Vou dar uma chance na minha l&iacute;ngua nativa tamb&eacute;m. Talvez eu me divirta com isso. Eu tamb&eacute;m sempre odiei ler, mas agora mudei de ideia. &Eacute; legal. Odiar a leitura &eacute; um grande problema porque ler &eacute; muito importante, precisamos ler para saber sobre diferentes assuntos. A leitura pode melhorar o seu vocabul&aacute;rio na sua l&iacute;ngua-alvo, mesmo na sua l&iacute;ngua nativa. Tenho lido muito nos &uacute;ltimos meses. Eu melhorei muito. Ler &eacute; o segredo para descobrir o mundo. N&atilde;o tenho com quem conversar para praticar minha fala. Por enquanto &eacute; isso. At&eacute; mais.

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I Just Want to Write Something

Thursday, October 28, 2021&nbsp;

I do not know what to do sometimes, I like to do things quickly and I do not always know what I should I choose.

I tried to learn Italian, then stopped,; I did the same with French.

The uniqueonly language I did not stop learning is English.

I'm so glad about ithat because, if I had given up, I would not be able to write this.

I must improve many yeta lot still, but, the good thing is, I think I canould communicate with people if I had to travel to America or to another country where English is spoken.

I am making several mistakes, I know, but it is how we learn, we need to make mistakes to improve.

WellIndeed, my vocabulary is improving eachvery day.&nbsp;

WellThen again, as I said, I gave up learning Italian one timbefore, French as well.

Now I am studying Russian, but sometimes I think I should study French, because it's easier.

Russian is so difficult.

I prefer to do things quickly, soand French takes less time.&nbsp; Well, I am a Portuguese speaker, so it is faster to learn French than Russian.

I would like to be not like abe the person who changes her choices everymind all the time, but that is how I am.

I cannot change it.&nbsp;

I want a job, however, I do not know how to get itone.

I'll try to get one, because I want to have my own money.&nbsp;

Sometimes it is difficult for me to sayexpress things, even Wwhen I am writing something that is only for me.

I hate writing, but I do it because I need to improve my writing skills.

I am going to give it a chance in my native language, too.

Maybe I'll have fun with it.&nbsp;

I also always hated reading, but now II've changed my mind.

It is cool.

Hating reading is a big problem because reading is very important, we need to read to knowlearn about different subjects.

Reading can improve your vocabulary in your target language, and even in your native language.

I've been reading a lot inover the lpast few months.

I have improved very much.

Reading is the secret to discovering the world.&nbsp;

I do not have anyone to talk to to practice my speaking.&nbsp; skills.

That is itall for now.

See you.

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Rael

Nov. 9, 2021

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Thank you so much

I cannot change it.&nbsp;


I cannot change it.&nbsp;

I Just Want to Write Something


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Thursday, October 28, 2021&nbsp;


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I do not know what to do sometimes, I like to do things quickly and I do not know what should I choose.


I do not know what to do sometimes, I like to do things quickly and I do not always know what I should I choose.

I tried to learn Italian, then stopped, I did the same with French.


I tried to learn Italian, then stopped,; I did the same with French.

The unique language I did not stop learning is English.


The uniqueonly language I did not stop learning is English.

I'm so glad about it because if I had given up, I would not be able to write this.


I'm so glad about ithat because, if I had given up, I would not be able to write this.

I must improve many yet, but the good thing is, I think I can communicate with people if I had to travel to America or another country where English is spoken.


I must improve many yeta lot still, but, the good thing is, I think I canould communicate with people if I had to travel to America or to another country where English is spoken.

I am making several mistakes, I know, but it is how we learn, we need to make mistakes to improve.


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Well, my vocabulary is improving each day.&nbsp;


WellIndeed, my vocabulary is improving eachvery day.&nbsp;

Well, as I said, I gave up learning Italian one time, French as well.


WellThen again, as I said, I gave up learning Italian one timbefore, French as well.

Now I am studying Russian, but sometimes I think I should study French because is easier.


Now I am studying Russian, but sometimes I think I should study French, because it's easier.

Russian is so difficult.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I prefer to do things quickly, so French takes less time.&nbsp; Well, I am a Portuguese speaker, so it is faster to learn French than Russian.


I prefer to do things quickly, soand French takes less time.&nbsp; Well, I am a Portuguese speaker, so it is faster to learn French than Russian.

I would like to be not like a person who changes her choices every time, but that is how I am.


I would like to be not like abe the person who changes her choices everymind all the time, but that is how I am.

I want a job, however, I do not know how to get it.


I want a job, however, I do not know how to get itone.

I'll try to get one because I want to have my own money.&nbsp;


I'll try to get one, because I want to have my own money.&nbsp;

Sometimes it is difficult for me to say things, even When I am writing something that is only for me.


Sometimes it is difficult for me to sayexpress things, even Wwhen I am writing something that is only for me.

I hate writing, but I do it because I need to improve my writing skills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am going to give a chance in my native language, too.


I am going to give it a chance in my native language, too.

Maybe I'll have fun with it.&nbsp;


Maybe I'll have fun with it.&nbsp;

I also always hated reading, but now I changed my mind.


I also always hated reading, but now II've changed my mind.

It is cool.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hating reading is a big problem because reading is very important, we need to read to know about different subjects.


Hating reading is a big problem because reading is very important, we need to read to knowlearn about different subjects.

Reading can improve your vocabulary in your target language, even in your native language.


Reading can improve your vocabulary in your target language, and even in your native language.

I've been reading a lot in the last few months.


I've been reading a lot inover the lpast few months.

I have improved very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Reading is the secret to discovering the world.&nbsp;


Reading is the secret to discovering the world.&nbsp;

I do not have anyone to talk to to practice my speaking.&nbsp;


I do not have anyone to talk to to practice my speaking.&nbsp; skills.

That is it for now.


That is itall for now.

See you.


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