Feb. 15, 2025
I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
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I know that there's someones that appreciate me
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Even if a day pass
Even if a one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
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I had a little bit of trouble understanding what you meant for some sentences. Overall, I left punctuation and structure alone since this cascading waterfall poetry style was so prevalent in your post. I focused on correcting the meaning and message you were trying to convey.
I just want to talk until the end:
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I'm tired of not letting out the worlds inside me
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I know it's not every time
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I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking I'm tired that I can't continue my talking I'm tired of letting the worlds inside me I know it's not evry time I know that there is times when I fineshed it I know that there's someones that appreciate me I know that there's someones don't love talking I know all that stuff, but what about me Sometimes I start thinking About if they are appreciating me like I do About if they don't want to talk with me About if they love me or not About if I'm the wrong here About if I'm doing the same with them I know it's not a big deal I know But I feel it's like that thing getting me sick But I feel that am hiding something But i feel myself is a mess Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person Because I'm the one When I start talking I have to finish it When I start talking I have to continue How matter what Even if a day pass Even if a one hour Even if we talked in so many other topics I don't know if I'm the wrong person I don't know if I'm right I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking |
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