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Hahakaka

Feb. 15, 2025

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I just want to talk until the end:

I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my talking
I'm tired of letting the worlds inside me
I know it's not evry time
I know that there is times when I fineshed it
I know that there's someones that appreciate me
I know that there's someones don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
Sometimes I start thinking
About if they are appreciating me like I do
About if they don't want to talk with me
About if they love me or not
About if I'm the wrong here
About if I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal I know
But I feel it's like that thing getting me sick
But I feel that am hiding something
But i feel myself is a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person
Because I'm the one
When I start talking I have to finish it
When I start talking I have to continue
How matter what
Even if a day pass
Even if a one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right

Corrections

I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my
talking dialogue
I'm tired of letting the wor
lds stay inside me
I know it's not
evry time always like that
I know that there is times when I fin
eished it
I know that there's someone
s that who appreciate me
I know that there's someone
s don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me

Sometimes I start thinking

About
ifwhether they are appreciating me like I do
About
ifwhether they don't want to talk with me
About
ifwhether they love me or not
About
ifwhether I'm the wrong here
About
ifwhether I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal
, I know
But I feel
it'things like that thingare getting me sick
But

I feel that I am hiding something
But
iI feel myself is a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong
person e
Because I'm the on
ly one talking here
When I start
ed talking, I have to finish it
When I start
ed talking, I have to continue
How

No
matter what
Even if a day
has pass ed
Even if
a one hour has passed
Even if we talked
ion so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person

I don't know if I'm right

I just want to talk until the end:

I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue
my talking
I'm tired of letting the wor
lds inside me
I know it's not ev
ery time
I know that there
isare times when I fineished it
I know that there's someone
s that appreciates me
I know that there's
someonespeople that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
?
Sometimes I start thinking

About if they
are appreciatinge me like I do of them
About if they don't want to talk with me

About if they love me or not

About if I'm
in the wrong here
About if I'm doing the same with them

I know it's not a big deal
, I know
But I feel it's like
that thingit's getting me sick
But I feel that
I am hiding something
But i feel
myself islike I am a mess
Actually I can say that I'm
in the wrong person
Because
I'm the one ¶
W
when I start talking, I have to finish it
When I start talking I have to continue

How

No
matter what
Even if a day pass
es
Even if
ait's one hour
Even if we talked
in soabout many other topics
I don't know if I'm
in the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right

Feedback

I had a little bit of trouble understanding what you meant for some sentences. Overall, I left punctuation and structure alone since this cascading waterfall poetry style was so prevalent in your post. I focused on correcting the meaning and message you were trying to convey.

I just want to talk until the end:

I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue
my talking
I'm tired of
not letting out the worlds inside me
I know it's not ev
ery time
I know that there is times when I fin
eished it
I know that there
's someones that appreciate me
I know that there's some
ones that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me

Sometimes I start thinking

About
if they are appreciating me like I do
About i

I
f they don't want to talk with me
About i

I
f they love me or not
About i

I
f I'm the wrong here
About i

I
f I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal I know

But I feel it's
like that thing getting me sick
But I feel that am hiding something

But i feel
myself isI’m a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person

Because I'm the one

When I start talking I have to finish it

When I start talking I have to continue

How matter what

Even if a day pass

Even if
a one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics

I don't know if I'm the wrong person

I don't know if I'm right

I just want to talk until the end:


I just want to talk until the end:

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I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking I'm tired that I can't continue my talking I'm tired of letting the worlds inside me I know it's not evry time I know that there is times when I fineshed it I know that there's someones that appreciate me I know that there's someones don't love talking I know all that stuff, but what about me Sometimes I start thinking About if they are appreciating me like I do About if they don't want to talk with me About if they love me or not About if I'm the wrong here About if I'm doing the same with them I know it's not a big deal I know But I feel it's like that thing getting me sick But I feel that am hiding something But i feel myself is a mess Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person Because I'm the one When I start talking I have to finish it When I start talking I have to continue How matter what Even if a day pass Even if a one hour Even if we talked in so many other topics I don't know if I'm the wrong person I don't know if I'm right


I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue
my talking
I'm tired of
not letting out the worlds inside me
I know it's not ev
ery time
I know that there is times when I fin
eished it
I know that there
's someones that appreciate me
I know that there's some
ones that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me

Sometimes I start thinking

About
if they are appreciating me like I do
About i

I
f they don't want to talk with me
About i

I
f they love me or not
About i

I
f I'm the wrong here
About i

I
f I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal I know

But I feel it's
like that thing getting me sick
But I feel that am hiding something

But i feel
myself isI’m a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person

Because I'm the one

When I start talking I have to finish it

When I start talking I have to continue

How matter what

Even if a day pass

Even if
a one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics

I don't know if I'm the wrong person

I don't know if I'm right

I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue
my talking
I'm tired of letting the wor
lds inside me
I know it's not ev
ery time
I know that there
isare times when I fineished it
I know that there's someone
s that appreciates me
I know that there's
someonespeople that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
?
Sometimes I start thinking

About if they
are appreciatinge me like I do of them
About if they don't want to talk with me

About if they love me or not

About if I'm
in the wrong here
About if I'm doing the same with them

I know it's not a big deal
, I know
But I feel it's like
that thingit's getting me sick
But I feel that
I am hiding something
But i feel
myself islike I am a mess
Actually I can say that I'm
in the wrong person
Because
I'm the one ¶
W
when I start talking, I have to finish it
When I start talking I have to continue

How

No
matter what
Even if a day pass
es
Even if
ait's one hour
Even if we talked
in soabout many other topics
I don't know if I'm
in the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right

I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my
talking dialogue
I'm tired of letting the wor
lds stay inside me
I know it's not
evry time always like that
I know that there is times when I fin
eished it
I know that there's someone
s that who appreciate me
I know that there's someone
s don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me

Sometimes I start thinking

About
ifwhether they are appreciating me like I do
About
ifwhether they don't want to talk with me
About
ifwhether they love me or not
About
ifwhether I'm the wrong here
About
ifwhether I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal
, I know
But I feel
it'things like that thingare getting me sick
But

I feel that I am hiding something
But
iI feel myself is a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong
person e
Because I'm the on
ly one talking here
When I start
ed talking, I have to finish it
When I start
ed talking, I have to continue
How

No
matter what
Even if a day
has pass ed
Even if
a one hour has passed
Even if we talked
ion so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person

I don't know if I'm right

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