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Tammy

May 12, 2025

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I have two questions that need help

Thank you in advance!

1. Did I do something inappropriate in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I ask this question because someone disliked it this afternoon. I'm not unhappy. I'm just afraid that I might offend others unintentionally

2. I want to give my video channel on WeChat an English name. Is "Nature Whispers" okay? I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammar, but there is a word limit.

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I have two questions that need helpneed help with two questions.

"I need help with" is a more natural phrasing. The original sentence "I have two questions that need help" sounds awkward because questions themselves cannot need help. The phrase "I need help with" is used when you're asking for assistance.

Thank you in advance!

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Did I do something inappropriate in this video:? https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I
’m ask this questioning because someone disliked it this afternoon.

A question mark is more appropriate than a colon because you are asking a question, and the colon is typically used to introduce a list or an explanation. "I’m asking" is simpler and more natural than "I ask this question," which is a bit redundant. The change makes the sentence smoother and less formal, which suits this context.

I'm not unhappypset.

"I’m not upset" sounds more natural than "I’m not unhappy." "Unhappy" is a bit more passive and formal in this context. "Upset" is the more commonly used word when expressing this idea in casual communication.

I'm just afraiconcerned that I might offend othershave offended someone unintentionally

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"Concerned" is a better fit here than "afraid," as it sounds more thoughtful and less emotional. I changed "might offend others" to "might have offended someone" to make it more specific. "Someone" is better than "others" in this context because it refers to the person who disliked the video.

2. I want to give my WeChat video channel on WeChat an English name.

"WeChat video channel" sounds more natural than "video channel on WeChat." The change aligns with the typical phrasing in English where the platform (WeChat) comes first.

Is "Nature Whispers" okay?

I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammar, but there isthe grammar might be slightly off, but I have a word limit.

"Slightly off" sounds more natural and polished than "a little bit wrong in grammar." Also, "I know the grammar" flows better than "I know it," which helps clarify what you are talking about.

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Your message is clear, and I think the channel name "Nature Whispers" works great! It’s catchy and doesn’t have any major grammatical issues. As for your first question, it's understandable to be concerned, but don't worry too much about one dislike—it's normal to get mixed reactions sometimes. You're doing great!

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Tammy

May 13, 2025

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Thank you so much! I learned a lot from your feedback and corrections.

Have a nice day!

I have two questions that I need help with

Thank you in advance!

Did I do something inappropriate in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g I ask this question because someone disliked it this afternoon.

I'm not unhappy.

I'm just afraid that I might have offended others unintentionally


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Afraid that I might offend = worried that I might offend in the future

Afraid that I might have offended = worried that I might’ve already offended

I want to give my video channel on WeChat an English name.

Is "Nature Whispers" okay?

I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammar, but there is a word limit.

Feedback

I don’t see anything wrong with the video.

“Nature whispers” seems fine, although it bothers me a little because I’m not sure if “whispers” is meant to be a verb or a noun. I like the suggestion “whispers of nature” better because “whispers” is clearly a noun in this case.

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Tammy

May 13, 2025

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Thanks a lot!

Have a nice day!

Did I do something inappropriate in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I ask this question because someone disliked it this afternoon.

The video was fine. Brought back memories of a mulberry tree besides the house where I grew up.

Is "Nature Whispers" okay?

Name makes perfect sense in meaning Nature ("Mother Nature" is the English language personification of the force of Nature) is actively whispering things. I like it.

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Tammy

May 13, 2025

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Thanks a lot!

Have a nice day!

I have two questions that I need help with

Did I do something inappropriate in this video?: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I
am asking this question because someone disliked it this afternoon.

No, you didn't do anything inappropriate. I think the person just clicked the dislike button without thinking.

I'm just afraid that I might offend others unintentionally


2.

Don't worry, you didn't do anything wrong.

I want to give my video channel on WeChat an English name.

I don't think video channel makes sense here. You could just say channel.

Is "Nature Whispers" okay?

Yes, it sounds good. You could perhaps name it "Whispers of nature". If the word limit allows you to do so.

I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammartically, but there is a word limit.

Feedback

Keep it up!

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Tammy

May 12, 2025

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Thank you so much!

"Whispers of nature" is my original choice but it's too long😅

I'm just afraid that I might offend others unintentionally 2.


I'm just afraid that I might offend others unintentionally


2.

Don't worry, you didn't do anything wrong.

I'm just afraid that I might have offended others unintentionally


2.

Afraid that I might offend = worried that I might offend in the future Afraid that I might have offended = worried that I might’ve already offended

I'm just afraiconcerned that I might offend othershave offended someone unintentionally

2
.

"Concerned" is a better fit here than "afraid," as it sounds more thoughtful and less emotional. I changed "might offend others" to "might have offended someone" to make it more specific. "Someone" is better than "others" in this context because it refers to the person who disliked the video.

I want to give my video channel on WeChat an English name.


I want to give my video channel on WeChat an English name.

I don't think video channel makes sense here. You could just say channel.

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2. I want to give my WeChat video channel on WeChat an English name.

"WeChat video channel" sounds more natural than "video channel on WeChat." The change aligns with the typical phrasing in English where the platform (WeChat) comes first.

Is "Nature Whispers" okay?


Is "Nature Whispers" okay?

Yes, it sounds good. You could perhaps name it "Whispers of nature". If the word limit allows you to do so.

Is "Nature Whispers" okay?

Name makes perfect sense in meaning Nature ("Mother Nature" is the English language personification of the force of Nature) is actively whispering things. I like it.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammar, but there is a word limit.


I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammartically, but there is a word limit.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know it might be a little bit wrong in grammar, but there isthe grammar might be slightly off, but I have a word limit.

"Slightly off" sounds more natural and polished than "a little bit wrong in grammar." Also, "I know the grammar" flows better than "I know it," which helps clarify what you are talking about.

I have two questions that need help


I have two questions that I need help with

I have two questions that I need help with

I have two questions that need helpneed help with two questions.

"I need help with" is a more natural phrasing. The original sentence "I have two questions that need help" sounds awkward because questions themselves cannot need help. The phrase "I need help with" is used when you're asking for assistance.

Thank you in advance!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Did I do something inappropriate in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g I ask this question because someone disliked it this afternoon.


Did I do something inappropriate in this video?: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I
am asking this question because someone disliked it this afternoon.

No, you didn't do anything inappropriate. I think the person just clicked the dislike button without thinking.

Did I do something inappropriate in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I ask this question because someone disliked it this afternoon.

The video was fine. Brought back memories of a mulberry tree besides the house where I grew up.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Did I do something inappropriate in this video:? https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3-0RrRIMR8g
I
’m ask this questioning because someone disliked it this afternoon.

A question mark is more appropriate than a colon because you are asking a question, and the colon is typically used to introduce a list or an explanation. "I’m asking" is simpler and more natural than "I ask this question," which is a bit redundant. The change makes the sentence smoother and less formal, which suits this context.

I'm not unhappy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm not unhappypset.

"I’m not upset" sounds more natural than "I’m not unhappy." "Unhappy" is a bit more passive and formal in this context. "Upset" is the more commonly used word when expressing this idea in casual communication.

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