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galoarellano1987

March 24, 2025

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I Have Returned

After almost 3 months, I write again in this platform. It seem lie but the action to write everyday is very important in the learning process.
On the lasts 3 months, I spend my time listening podcast and practicing speaking with some apps.
However, even so I improve my listening, I think my vocabulary hasnt improve.

Overall, I think my confident is better, but I am aware I need to write for more time.
Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .

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I Have Returned

After almost 3 months, I'm writing here again in this platform.

This sounds more natural

I used the present progressive because your version made it sound like it was habitual

It may seem a lie but the action to writeing everyday is very important in thefor learning process.

You can typically use the -ing form of a verb in stead of saying "the act of." This is called a gerund

Onver the lasts 3 months, I have spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with some apps.

"I spend," is the present tense

However, even so Ithough I have improved my listening, I think my vocabulary hasn't improved.

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I am aware that I need to write for more time.more

"Confident," is an adjective

Thanks for reading mey post, and God bless you .

"Reading me," would mean that I was looking at you and guessing what you are thinking !

Feedback

Good job ! Keep practising and you'll get a lot better

I Have Returned

After almost 3 months, I'm writeing again ion this platform.

not wrong but "on" instead of "in" is more natural in this context"

It seem lis simple but the action tof writeing everyday is very important in the learning process.

Not sure why "lie" was used so I changed it to something that fit the context.

Onver the lasts 3 months, I spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicinged speaking with some apps.

However, even so I improve my listening, I think my vocabulary hasn't improve.

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I am aware I need to write for more timmore.

Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .

I Have Returned

After almost 3 months, I'm write again iing on this platform again.

It seems like but the action tof writeing every day is very important in the learning process.

OIn the lasts 3 months, I've spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with some apps.

However, even so Ithough I've improved my listening, I don't think my vocabulary hasnt improved.

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I a'm aware I need to write forspend more time writing.

Can also say: "Overall, I think my confidence has improved..."

Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .

Feedback

Welcome back. Reading has helped me a lot with vocabulary. =)

I Have Returned

After almost 3three months, I write again ion this platform.

When you write like this, numbers should be written as their full word forms. Typically, we say “on” a platform, not “in.”

It may seem like a lie, but the action to of writeing every day is very important in the learning process.

“Seem lie” was changed to “seem like a lie” because the former is not grammatically correct. The verb seem requires a phrase like “seem like” because it is introducing a comparison. “Action” is also not the best word choice here; “act” is more appropriate, and “every day” is two words when you’re referring to the frequency of something.

OIn the lasts 3 months, I spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with some apps.

We use “in” when referring to a period of time, and “lasts” is grammatically incorrect. Because listening is followed by what exactly you were listening to, you have to include the word “to” and it should be ”podcasts” with an s at the end because podcasts is plural. “I spend” should be “I spent” because it’s past tense.

However, even so Ithough I‘ve improved my listening, I thinkfeel my vocabulary hasnt improve.d.

“Even so” is changed to “even though” because though is a better conjunction for contrast. “I improve” was changed to “I’ve improved” because "I’ve" is the contraction of "I have," and the present perfect tense is needed to express something that has happened over a period of time. "Improve" was corrected to "improved" to maintain consistency in past tense.

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I am aware that I need to write for more timeregularly.

“Confident” was changed to "confidence", as "confident" is an adjective, while "confidence" is a noun. "I need to write for more time" was changed to "I need to write more regularly", because the original phrasing is slightly awkward. "More regularly" sounds more natural and conveys the idea of consistent practice.

Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .

"Thanks for reading" is the natural way to express gratitude for someone reading your writing.

I Have Returned


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After almost 3 months, I write again in this platform.


After almost 3three months, I write again ion this platform.

When you write like this, numbers should be written as their full word forms. Typically, we say “on” a platform, not “in.”

After almost 3 months, I'm writeing again ion this platform.

not wrong but "on" instead of "in" is more natural in this context"

After almost 3 months, I'm write again iing on this platform again.

After almost 3 months, I'm writing here again in this platform.

This sounds more natural I used the present progressive because your version made it sound like it was habitual

It seem lie but the action to write everyday is very important in the learning process.


It may seem like a lie, but the action to of writeing every day is very important in the learning process.

“Seem lie” was changed to “seem like a lie” because the former is not grammatically correct. The verb seem requires a phrase like “seem like” because it is introducing a comparison. “Action” is also not the best word choice here; “act” is more appropriate, and “every day” is two words when you’re referring to the frequency of something.

It seem lis simple but the action tof writeing everyday is very important in the learning process.

Not sure why "lie" was used so I changed it to something that fit the context.

It seems like but the action tof writeing every day is very important in the learning process.

It may seem a lie but the action to writeing everyday is very important in thefor learning process.

You can typically use the -ing form of a verb in stead of saying "the act of." This is called a gerund

On the lasts 3 months, I spend my time listening podcast and practicing speaking with some apps.


OIn the lasts 3 months, I spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with some apps.

We use “in” when referring to a period of time, and “lasts” is grammatically incorrect. Because listening is followed by what exactly you were listening to, you have to include the word “to” and it should be ”podcasts” with an s at the end because podcasts is plural. “I spend” should be “I spent” because it’s past tense.

Onver the lasts 3 months, I spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicinged speaking with some apps.

OIn the lasts 3 months, I've spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with some apps.

Onver the lasts 3 months, I have spendt my time listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with some apps.

"I spend," is the present tense

However, even so I improve my listening, I think my vocabulary hasnt improve.


However, even so Ithough I‘ve improved my listening, I thinkfeel my vocabulary hasnt improve.d.

“Even so” is changed to “even though” because though is a better conjunction for contrast. “I improve” was changed to “I’ve improved” because "I’ve" is the contraction of "I have," and the present perfect tense is needed to express something that has happened over a period of time. "Improve" was corrected to "improved" to maintain consistency in past tense.

However, even so I improve my listening, I think my vocabulary hasn't improve.

However, even so Ithough I've improved my listening, I don't think my vocabulary hasnt improved.

However, even so Ithough I have improved my listening, I think my vocabulary hasn't improved.

Overall, I think my confident is better, but I am aware I need to write for more time.


Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I am aware I need to write for more timmore.

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I am aware that I need to write for more timeregularly.

“Confident” was changed to "confidence", as "confident" is an adjective, while "confidence" is a noun. "I need to write for more time" was changed to "I need to write more regularly", because the original phrasing is slightly awkward. "More regularly" sounds more natural and conveys the idea of consistent practice.

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I a'm aware I need to write forspend more time writing.

Can also say: "Overall, I think my confidence has improved..."

Overall, I think my confidentce is better, but I am aware that I need to write for more time.more

"Confident," is an adjective

Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .


Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .

"Thanks for reading" is the natural way to express gratitude for someone reading your writing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for reading me, and God bless you .

Thanks for reading mey post, and God bless you .

"Reading me," would mean that I was looking at you and guessing what you are thinking !

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