Jan. 9, 2021
I have read great journal.
I have read the article "A vaccine is joyful news - but am I really ready to go back to the world?" written by Emma Brockes. I am very impressed with it. She said exactly what I'd like to say! See following phrase in the article.
“I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant.
I mean we were over-connected each other. There was no time to stop and think about ourself. We had to do something or meet someone endlessly without any time to look back. We believed that busy life was an indicator of success. Corona-19 is obviously bad news, but it gives us chances to look back.
I have read a great journalarticle.
"Article" (or "opinion piece") is a better choice of word than "journal" here. "Journal" usually refers to a book, within which we have multiple "entries".
I have read the article "A vaccine is joyful news - but am I really ready to go back to the world?"
written by Emma Brockes.
I am very impressed with it.
She said exactly what I'd like to say!
SeI quote the following phrase infrom the article.
“I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant.
This quote would ordinarily be denoted in some way, such as by indentation.
I mean we were over-connected to each other.
Starting a sentence with "I mean" is informal. In this case, it doesn't tie in well with the quote.
There was no time to stop and think about ourneself.
We had to do something or meet someone endlesslywere endlessly meeting people, without any time to look backreflect.
We believed that a busy life was an indicator of success.
CoronaOVID-19 is obviously bad news, but it gives us chances to look back.
Jan. 10, 2021
I have read a great journalarticle.
First, it should be "I have read [a] great article". Beyond this, using title case or sentence case in titles is a matter of preference and style. See https://news.google.com for many examples of news articles using sentence case in titles.
Jan. 10, 2021
It's worth noting the article uses sentence case in the title. https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/nov/27/vaccine-news-world-year-normal-life "A vaccine is joyful news – but am I really ready to go back to the world?"
Jan. 10, 2021
We had to do something or meet someone endlesslywere endlessly meeting people, without any time to look backreflect.
Thanks! It's exactly what I intend.
I hHave rRead ga Great journal.Article
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjectives, etc. is capitalized in a title.
“I have” is often written/said as “I’ve”.
For some reason, I feel like this would sound more natural if it said, “I’ve Just Read a Really Great Article”, but what you have is still correct.
I have read the article "A vVaccine iIs jJoyful nNews - bBut aAm I rReally rReady to gGo bBack into the wWorld?"
“I have” is often written/said as “I’ve”.
,written by Emma Brockes.
This would normally be part of the sentence above, but I think that the program split it.
I am very impressed with it.
“I am” is often written/said as “I’m”.
She said exactly what I'd like to say!
SeThe following phrase in the articexcerpt from the article, is a great example.
‘“I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant.”
Quotes are generally surround by quotation marks (“ “) to show where the quote begins and ends.
I mean, we were over-connected to each other.
There was no time to stop and think about ourselfves.
We had to do something or meet someone endlessly without any time to look backall the time, without any breaks where we could self-reflect.
We believed that a busy life was an indicator of success.
Coronavid-19 is obviously bad news, but it gives us a chances to look backreflect on ourselves.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Jan. 9, 2021
I mean, we were over-connected to each other.
I mean, we were over-connected to each other.
Jan. 9, 2021
I hHave rRead ga Great journal.Article
I Have Read a Great Article.
The word "journal" is okay, too.
In English, the first letter of a word is capitalized when it is the name of something or someone (for example "Aiden" or the store "Olive Young"), or when the words are used in a title (for example "The Lion King" or "I Have Read a Great Journal") because a title is just like a name.
Words are not always capitalized, though. Nouns (people, places, or things) are capitalized the most. Verbs, adverbs, adjectives, etc. are not capitalized unless they are in a title or name.
Jan. 9, 2021
I Have Read a Great Article. The word "journal" is okay, too. In English, the first letter of a word is capitalized when it is the name of something or someone (for example "Aiden" or the store "Olive Young"), or when the words are used in a title (for example "The Lion King" or "I Have Read a Great Journal") because a title is just like a name. Words are not always capitalized, though. Nouns (people, places, or things) are capitalized the most. Verbs, adverbs, adjectives, etc. are not capitalized unless they are in a title or name.
Thank you for pointing out my error! I normally write "in a title", I must have just forgotten this time. I just fixed it!
Jan. 10, 2021
Thank you for pointing out my error! I normally write "in a title", I must have just forgotten this time. I just fixed it!
Thanks guys!! Good Sunday morning!
Jan. 10, 2021
We had to do something or meet someone endlessly without any time to look backall the time, without any breaks where we could self-reflect.
Wow, now I know when I use "breaks". And learned a new word "self-reflect". Thanks!
Jan. 10, 2021
I hHave rRead ga Great journal.Article
First, it should be "I have read [a] great article". Beyond this, using title case or sentence case in titles is a matter of preference and style. See https://news.google.com for many examples of news articles using sentence case in titles.
Jan. 10, 2021
I have read the article "A vVaccine iIs jJoyful nNews - bBut aAm I rReally rReady to gGo bBack into the wWorld?"
It's worth noting the article uses sentence case in the title. https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/nov/27/vaccine-news-world-year-normal-life "A vaccine is joyful news – but am I really ready to go back to the world?"
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I have read great journal. I In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjectives, etc. is capitalized in a title. “I have” is often written/said as “I’ve”. For some reason, I feel like this would sound more natural if it said, “I’ve Just Read a Really Great Article”, but what you have is still correct. I have read a great "Article" (or "opinion piece") is a better choice of word than "journal" here. "Journal" usually refers to a book, within which we have multiple "entries". |
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I have read the article "A vaccine is joyful news - but am I really ready to go back to the world?" I have read the article "A “I have” is often written/said as “I’ve”. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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written by Emma Brockes. ,written by Emma Brockes. This would normally be part of the sentence above, but I think that the program split it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am very impressed with it. I am very impressed with it. “I am” is often written/said as “I’m”. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She said exactly what I'd like to say! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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See following phrase in the article.
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“I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant. ‘“I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant.” Quotes are generally surround by quotation marks (“ “) to show where the quote begins and ends. “I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant. This quote would ordinarily be denoted in some way, such as by indentation. |
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I mean we were over-connected each other. I mean, we I mean we Starting a sentence with "I mean" is informal. In this case, it doesn't tie in well with the quote. |
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We believed that busy life was an indicator of success. We believed that a busy life was an indicator of success. We believed that a busy life was an indicator of success. |
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