Dec. 16, 2025
I Have Had a Few Opportunities to Travel Abroad
I have had the opportunity to travel to a few different countries. Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled twice before. As a child, I traveled with my father to Brazil, but I don't remember anything about that trip because I was very young. Later, in college, I had the opportunity to travel to Panama. It was because I registered for a conference about Classrooms at Hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children. Later, I had the opportunity to travel with my husband, and we visited the Dominican Republic and Mexico together. We will probably visit the United States in the future.
Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled alone twice before.
Better to emphasize what made those two other trips different.
It was because I had registered for a conference about Classrooms at Hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children.
"had registered" because the story is already in the past, and you're referencing something *even* further back! :)
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Great writing! And what interesting trips! :)
yesterday
Hello! Thank you for your time and feedback. I'll take into account your recommendations :)
Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled twice before. without him.
As a child, I traveled with my father to Brazil, but I don't remember anything about that trip because I was very young.
Later, iIn college, I had the opportunity to travel to Panama.
It was because I registered for a conference about Cclassrooms at Hin hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children.
Later, I had the opportunity to travel with my husband, and we visited the Dominican Republic and Mexico together.
We will probably visit the United States in the future.
yesterday
Hello! Thank you for your time. I'll take into account your recommendations :)
I Have Had a Few Opportunities to Travel Abroad
I have had the opportunity to travel to a few different countries.
Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled twice before.
As a child, I traveled with my father to Brazil, but I don't remember anything about that trip because I was very young.
Later, in college, I had the opportunity to travel to Panama.
It was because I registered for a conference about Classrooms at Hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children.
Later, I had the opportunity to travel with my husband, and we visited the Dominican Republic and Mexico together.
We will probably visit the United States in the future.
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Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled twice before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled twice before Many of these trips were with my husband, but I had traveled alone twice before. Better to emphasize what made those two other trips different. |
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As a child, I traveled with my father to Brazil, but I don't remember anything about that trip because I was very young. This sentence has been marked as perfect! As a child, I traveled with my father to Brazil, but I don't remember anything about that trip because I was very young. |
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Later, in college, I had the opportunity to travel to Panama. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Later, I had the opportunity to travel with my husband, and we visited the Dominican Republic and Mexico together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Later, I had the opportunity to travel with my husband |
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It was because I registered for a conference about Classrooms at Hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
It was because I had registered for a conference about Classrooms at Hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children. "had registered" because the story is already in the past, and you're referencing something *even* further back! :) |
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We will probably visit the United States in the future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We will probably visit the United States in the future. |
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It was because I registered for a conference about Classrooms at the Hospitals, and I presented a proposal about a flexible curriculum for hospitalized children. |
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Later, I had the opportunity to travel with my husband, and we visited Dominican Republic and Mexico together. |
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