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666coolboy

April 18, 2022

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I have feelings for someone but I'm in a relationship.

This is a common situation that usually happens around us. We often feel a little bit heartbeat when we meet someone who is our type. We have a lot of times of heartbeats in our life, but we don’t need to get with those nice people together. Do you drop off flowers every time when you think they are pretty? Do you swim on seas every time when you think they are beautiful? Also, do you get with people together when you think they are nice?

We can’t give up our real treasure for pursuing something new. We can’t break up with our partners who truly love us because we find someone new. You will feel boring even if you get into a new relationship someday because every relationship is like that. Don’t follow the feelings, follow the heart. The truly love usually happens after passion and lust. Please cherish those people who accompany you no matter who they are.

The above is my honest words but I know it usually doesn’t work for a person who wants to get into the world of immoral and taboo. Please tell your partner the truth that you are starting to fall in love with the other person if you can’t stop thinking that you want to get into a new relationship. At least you should keep honest with your partner who has been hurt.

The above are my suggestions. I hope they can help you and your partner is doing well.

Thank you for reading.

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I have feelings for someone but I'm in a relationship.

This is a common situation that usually happens all around us.

We often feel a little bit heartour heart skip a beat when we meet someone who is our type.

"heart skip a beat" is an idiom we say when you see someone you love, or you are excited. Equally we can use it when we are scared, but it is most commonly used to mean seeing someone you love.

We have a lot of times of heartbeats in our lifemay expereince this a lot, but we don’ not need to get with those nice people together.

Instead of repeating heartbeats, use this to show you are talking about "heart skipping a beat" which you talked about in the above sentence.

Do you drop offgive flowers too every time whenone you think they areis pretty?

We give flowers to people. If you said drop off it makes it sound like you give the flowers to someone and then leave straight away. For example: I will drop the flowers at your house before we go to the party. Let me know if you want me to explain this any more.

DoWould you swim on seas every time whenacross the ocean for everyone you think they areis beautiful?

This does not make perfect sense. I think it may be an idiom in your native language you have tranlsated to English, but the meaning is unclear. I have changed it to an English idiom: to say you would swim across the ocean for someone is a way to show you are dedicated to them.

Also, dDo you get with people together wheneveryone you think they areis nice?

The wording I have used matches the rest of your writing better.

We can’t give up our real treasure forn our important relationships too pursuinge something new.

We can’t break up with ourthe partners whoe truly love us because we find someone new.

This sentence means that only your partner loves you. For the argument you are making to be strong, you should change it to show you love your partner.

You will feel boring even if you get into a new relationship someday because every relationship is like that.Eventually your new relationship will feel boring, that is how all relationships work.

This wording is more natural

Don’t follow thefleeting feelings, follow theyour heart.

fleeting feelings lets the reader know these feelings will change.

The trulyrue love usually happens after passion and lust has faded.

This feels more natural

Please cherish those people who accompany youthem no matter who they areat.

This means a slightly different thing to what you said, but it feels more natural.

The above isare my honest words but I know it usually doesn’t work for a person who wants to get into the world of immoral and taboofeelings, though I know if you have your heart set on leaving your partner you will still do this.

What you have written could be interpreted as rude, so I have changed the wording to seem less rude.
To have your heart set means that you have decided on something based on the feelings in your heart.

Please tell your partner the truth, that you are starting to fall in love with the another person, if you can’t stop thinking that you want to get intoenter a new relationship.

At least you should keepbe honest with your partner who hasmay been hurt.

I have said "may be" instead of "has been", since the partner will only be hurt if they decide to leave them.

The above are my suggestions.

I hope they can help you and that your partner is doing well.

Thank you for reading.

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Great work. Your writing is improving and you are expressing some complex ideas. I have written some common English idioms in my comments, hopefully they will help you and you can use them in the future. Keep up the great work, it will be worth it in the end!

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666coolboy

April 19, 2022

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Do you drop offgive flowers too every time whenone you think they areis pretty?

Does "give the flower to people" mean that we continue to spend time with others after we give them flowers?
I wanted to express “ we don‘t need to pluck the flowers if we think they are pretty." at that time hahaha, my bad.

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666coolboy

April 19, 2022

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Thank you for always encouraging me and have a lovely day all the time!

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harinezumi

April 19, 2022

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Does "give the flower to people" mean that we continue to spend time with others after we give them flowers? I wanted to express “ we don‘t need to pluck the flowers if we think they are pretty." at that time hahaha, my bad.

No "give the flower to people" does not mean that. I was trying to explain the difference between drop off and give, however, it was probably a little confusing sorry haha. If you drop something off it normally means you aren't going to spend time with the person afterwards. However, if you give them something you may or may not spend time with them afterwards. If you wanted to express "we don't need to pluck the flowers if we think they are pretty", I would say it like this:
You don't need to pick every pretty flower you see.

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harinezumi

April 19, 2022

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Thank you for always encouraging me and have a lovely day all the time!

You're welcome!

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666coolboy

April 20, 2022

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No "give the flower to people" does not mean that. I was trying to explain the difference between drop off and give, however, it was probably a little confusing sorry haha. If you drop something off it normally means you aren't going to spend time with the person afterwards. However, if you give them something you may or may not spend time with them afterwards. If you wanted to express "we don't need to pluck the flowers if we think they are pretty", I would say it like this: You don't need to pick every pretty flower you see.

Totally understand, nice teaching, you are a good mentor for me. 💕

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harinezumi

April 20, 2022

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Totally understand, nice teaching, you are a good mentor for me. 💕

I'm glad I could help!

I have feelings for someone but I'm in a relationship.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is a common situation that usually happens around us.


This is a common situation that usually happens all around us.

We often feel a little bit heartbeat when we meet someone who is our type.


We often feel a little bit heartour heart skip a beat when we meet someone who is our type.

"heart skip a beat" is an idiom we say when you see someone you love, or you are excited. Equally we can use it when we are scared, but it is most commonly used to mean seeing someone you love.

We have a lot of times of heartbeats in our life, but we don’t need to get with those nice people together.


We have a lot of times of heartbeats in our lifemay expereince this a lot, but we don’ not need to get with those nice people together.

Instead of repeating heartbeats, use this to show you are talking about "heart skipping a beat" which you talked about in the above sentence.

Do you drop off flowers every time when you think they are pretty?


Do you drop offgive flowers too every time whenone you think they areis pretty?

We give flowers to people. If you said drop off it makes it sound like you give the flowers to someone and then leave straight away. For example: I will drop the flowers at your house before we go to the party. Let me know if you want me to explain this any more.

Do you swim on seas every time when you think they are beautiful?


DoWould you swim on seas every time whenacross the ocean for everyone you think they areis beautiful?

This does not make perfect sense. I think it may be an idiom in your native language you have tranlsated to English, but the meaning is unclear. I have changed it to an English idiom: to say you would swim across the ocean for someone is a way to show you are dedicated to them.

Also, do you get with people together when you think they are nice?


Also, dDo you get with people together wheneveryone you think they areis nice?

The wording I have used matches the rest of your writing better.

We can’t give up our real treasure for pursuing something new.


We can’t give up our real treasure forn our important relationships too pursuinge something new.

We can’t break up with our partners who truly love us because we find someone new.


We can’t break up with ourthe partners whoe truly love us because we find someone new.

This sentence means that only your partner loves you. For the argument you are making to be strong, you should change it to show you love your partner.

You will feel boring even if you get into a new relationship someday because every relationship is like that.


You will feel boring even if you get into a new relationship someday because every relationship is like that.Eventually your new relationship will feel boring, that is how all relationships work.

This wording is more natural

Don’t follow the feelings, follow the heart.


Don’t follow thefleeting feelings, follow theyour heart.

fleeting feelings lets the reader know these feelings will change.

The truly love usually happens after passion and lust.


The trulyrue love usually happens after passion and lust has faded.

This feels more natural

Please cherish those people who accompany you no matter who they are.


Please cherish those people who accompany youthem no matter who they areat.

This means a slightly different thing to what you said, but it feels more natural.

The above is my honest words but I know it usually doesn’t work for a person who wants to get into the world of immoral and taboo.


The above isare my honest words but I know it usually doesn’t work for a person who wants to get into the world of immoral and taboofeelings, though I know if you have your heart set on leaving your partner you will still do this.

What you have written could be interpreted as rude, so I have changed the wording to seem less rude. To have your heart set means that you have decided on something based on the feelings in your heart.

Please tell your partner the truth that you are starting to fall in love with the other person if you can’t stop thinking that you want to get into a new relationship.


Please tell your partner the truth, that you are starting to fall in love with the another person, if you can’t stop thinking that you want to get intoenter a new relationship.

At least you should keep honest with your partner who has been hurt.


At least you should keepbe honest with your partner who hasmay been hurt.

I have said "may be" instead of "has been", since the partner will only be hurt if they decide to leave them.

The above are my suggestions.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope they can help you and your partner is doing well.


I hope they can help you and that your partner is doing well.

Thank you for reading.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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