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mensuresma

Sept. 14, 2025

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I have a question

I have a question on everybody. Why cant we stay in peace? Why would we always in war? When I say war I'm not just talking about guns or bombs or something else. We just thinking about everyone is an enemy. But no. This world is so peaceful, beautiful and gorgeous. Please keep it up.


herkese bir sorum var. neden barış içerisinde kalamıyoruz? neden her zaman savaş içerisindeyiz? savaş derken sadece silahlardan ve bombalardan ya da başka bir şeyden bahsetmiyorum. biz herkesin düşman olduğunu düşünüyoruz. ama hayır. bu dünya huzurlu, güzel ve göz alıcı. lütfen bunu devam ettirelim

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Why can't we stay in peaceful?

Why wouldare we always inat war?

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This world is so peaceful, beautiful and gorgeous.

Please keep it upLet's keep seeing it that way.

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Fantastic writing :)

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Why wouldare we always in war?

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But no.

Combine with the next sentence as one.

TNo, this world is so peaceful, beautiful, and gorgeous.

Please keep it uptake care of it.

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Good job and keep going!

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Why cant we stay inat peace?

Why wouldare we always in warconflict?

When I say warconflict I'm not just talking about guns or bombs or something else.

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Why wouldare we always inat war?

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But no.

This world is so peaceful, beautiful and gorgeous.

Please keep it up.

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I hHave a qQuestion

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I hHave a qA Question

I have a question on everybody.


I have a question onfor everybody.

I have a question onfor everybody.

I have a question onfor everybodyone.

I have a question onfor everybody.

Why cant we stay in peace?


Why can't we stay injust be peaceful?

Why cant we stay inat peace?

Why can't we stay inhave peace?

can't = can not. It's a contraction and therefore requires an apostrophe.

Why can't we stay in peaceful?

Why would we always in war?


Why wouldare we always inat war?

Why wouldare we always in warconflict?

Why wouldare we always in war?

Why wouldare we always inat war?

When I say war I'm not just talking about guns or bombs or something else.


When I say war I'm not just talking about guns orand bombs or something elseimilar things.

When I say warconflict I'm not just talking about guns or bombs or something else.

War is very much associated with specifically military conflict, "conflict" is a more general term that works better for this broader definition you're using

When I say war, I'm not just talking about guns or, bombs, or something elses like that.

When I say war, I'm not just talking about guns or bombs or something elseother things.

We just thinking about everyone is an enemy.


We just thinking abou that everyone is an enemy.

We just thinking abouthat everyone is an enemy.

We just thinking aboutsee everyone ias anthe enemy.

We just keep thinking aboutof everyone ias an enemy.

But no.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But no.

Combine with the next sentence as one.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This world is so peaceful, beautiful and gorgeous.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

TNo, this world is so peaceful, beautiful, and gorgeous.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please keep it up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please keep it uptake care of it.

Please keep it upLet's keep seeing it that way.

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