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Tammy

July 12, 2024

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I have a little fish

I bought a little fish as a pet last month.

It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail. Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.

A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely. And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other until death.

So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online. When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

Now I have a big glass bowl with a fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.

Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems like exercise with me.


上个月我买了一条小鱼当宠物。

这是一条长着漂亮尾巴的小斗鱼。它的身体是蓝色的,但尾巴的末端是红色的。

我买了它几天后,这个小家伙似乎有点孤单。人们告诉我,我不能再为它买一条鱼了,因为它们会互相争斗到死。

所以我在网上给它买了三片一叶莲。当一叶莲到达时,我发现容器不够大,所以我下单了一个更大的玻璃鱼缸。

现在我的瑜伽垫前面有一个大玻璃缸子,里面有一条鱼和三个一叶莲。

每次练瑜伽的时候,这条美丽的小鱼也似乎和我一起锻炼了。

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I bought a little fish as a petpet fish last month.

It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.

Its body is blue, butand the end of its tail is red.

A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.

And peopleI was told methat I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.

When the snowflakes arrived, I founI realized the container nowasn't big enough when the snowflakes arrived, so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

Your sentence is correct, my correction is a recommendation. ^^

Now I have a big glass bowl with a fishmy fish in a bigger bowl and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.

Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems to like to exercise with me.

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Awww how adorable! Enjoy making memories with your little fish! :D

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Tammy

Aug. 3, 2024

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Thank you so much! I learned a lot from your corrections and feedback.

I really love my little fish!

I bought a little pet fish as a pet last month.

What you wrote is good and correct, but this is a little more compact and smooth.

When the snowflakesy arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

Using pronouns can avoid repetition.

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Really good descriptions, made me really want to see that fish now 🤣

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Tammy

July 12, 2024

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Thank you!

It's a little late right now. I'll try to take a picture or a video tomorrow morning😄

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Tammy

July 13, 2024

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Dadada~ I took three pictures, but all the angles I can get are backlit.

Luckily, you can still see its colour and shape.

Please have a look at: https://x.com/myplain/status/1811949539395534928/photo/1 https://x.com/myplain/status/1811949539395534928/photo/2 https://x.com/myplain/status/1811949539395534928/photo/3

I have a little fish

I bought a little fish as a pet last month.

It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.

Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.

A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.

And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.

So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online.

When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container nowasn't big enough for them, so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

I think people assume fishbowls are made of glass

Now I have a big glass bowl with a single, tiny fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.

Every time I practice yoga, theis beautiful little fish also seems liketo exercise with me.

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Aw, what's its name?

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Tammy

July 12, 2024

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Thank you!

I call it 小彩 Xiao Cai -- literal translation is little colour.

I have a little fish

I bought a little fish as a pet last month.

It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.

Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.

A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.

And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.

until death is grammatically correct, but this is a more common expression for it

So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online.

When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

Now I have a big glass bowl with a fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.

Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems to like to exercise with me.

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So cute!

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Tammy

July 12, 2024

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Thanks a lot!

It’s really cute and beautiful.

I have a little fish


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I bought a little fish as a pet last month.


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I bought a little pet fish as a pet last month.

What you wrote is good and correct, but this is a little more compact and smooth.

I bought a little fish as a petpet fish last month.

It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.


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It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.

It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.

Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Its body is blue, butand the end of its tail is red.

A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.

And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other until death.


And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.

until death is grammatically correct, but this is a more common expression for it

And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.

And peopleI was told methat I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.

So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container nowasn't big enough for them, so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

I think people assume fishbowls are made of glass

When the snowflakesy arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

Using pronouns can avoid repetition.

When the snowflakes arrived, I founI realized the container nowasn't big enough when the snowflakes arrived, so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.

Your sentence is correct, my correction is a recommendation. ^^

Now I have a big glass bowl with a fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I have a big glass bowl with a single, tiny fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.

Now I have a big glass bowl with a fishmy fish in a bigger bowl and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.

Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems like exercise with me.


Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems to like to exercise with me.

Every time I practice yoga, theis beautiful little fish also seems liketo exercise with me.

Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems to like to exercise with me.

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