July 12, 2024
I bought a little fish as a pet last month.
It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail. Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.
A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely. And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other until death.
So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online. When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.
Now I have a big glass bowl with a fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.
Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems like exercise with me.
上个月我买了一条小鱼当宠物。
这是一条长着漂亮尾巴的小斗鱼。它的身体是蓝色的,但尾巴的末端是红色的。
我买了它几天后,这个小家伙似乎有点孤单。人们告诉我,我不能再为它买一条鱼了,因为它们会互相争斗到死。
所以我在网上给它买了三片一叶莲。当一叶莲到达时,我发现容器不够大,所以我下单了一个更大的玻璃鱼缸。
现在我的瑜伽垫前面有一个大玻璃缸子,里面有一条鱼和三个一叶莲。
每次练瑜伽的时候,这条美丽的小鱼也似乎和我一起锻炼了。
I bought a little fish as a petpet fish last month.
It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.
Its body is blue, butand the end of its tail is red.
A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.
And peopleI was told methat I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.
When the snowflakes arrived, I founI realized the container nowasn't big enough when the snowflakes arrived, so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.
Your sentence is correct, my correction is a recommendation. ^^
Now I have a big glass bowl with a fishmy fish in a bigger bowl and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.
Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems to like to exercise with me.
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Awww how adorable! Enjoy making memories with your little fish! :D
I bought a little pet fish as a pet last month.
What you wrote is good and correct, but this is a little more compact and smooth.
When the snowflakesy arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.
Using pronouns can avoid repetition.
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Really good descriptions, made me really want to see that fish now 🤣
I have a little fish
I bought a little fish as a pet last month.
It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.
Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.
A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.
And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.
So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online.
When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container nowasn't big enough for them, so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.
I think people assume fishbowls are made of glass
Now I have a big glass bowl with a single, tiny fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.
Every time I practice yoga, theis beautiful little fish also seems liketo exercise with me.
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Aw, what's its name?
I have a little fish
I bought a little fish as a pet last month.
It's a small betta fish with a beautiful tail.
Its body is blue, but the end of its tail is red.
A few days after I bought it, the little one seemed a little lonely.
And people told me I couldn't buy another fish for it because they would fight with each other untilto the death.
until death is grammatically correct, but this is a more common expression for it
So I bought three pieces of water snowflakes for it online.
When the snowflakes arrived, I found the container not big enough so I ordered a bigger glass fish bowl.
Now I have a big glass bowl with a fish and three water snowflakes in front of my yoga mat.
Every time I practice yoga, the beautiful little fish also seems to like to exercise with me.
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So cute!
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