Jan. 2, 2025
I have a cold now
I found that I had a cold and I must to come back tomorrow. I felt a little uncomfortable in my throat last night, but I thought it was just because I got angry.
Today, I found that my symptoms became better bad. Especially now, I will started to have a fever!
Fortunately, there are cold medicines in my bag. I always put some medicines in my bag when I travel. I'm feeling so uncomfortable now, so I need to go to sleeping early. I hope I'll feel better tomorrow.
我发现我感冒了，我明天必须提前回去。我昨晚就发现我喉咙有点不舒服，但是我以为我单纯是上火了。今天发现我的症状变得更加严重，尤其是现在，我开始发热！
十分庆幸的是我的背包里有感冒药，我每次旅行都会往包里塞点药。我现在很难受，所以我需要提前睡觉，希望明天身体会变得好起来。
I found that I had a cold and I must to comehave to go back tomorrow.
There's some missing context here, but I checked your previous journals. Since you're returning home tomorrow, you would use "go back" instead of come. "have to" sounds more natural than "must" here.
Today, I found that my symptoms became better badworse.
"better" is for improvement, so you want "worse" here
Especially now, I will started to have a fever!
"will" is for future events, so shouldn't be used with "started".
I'm feeling so uncomfortable now, so I need to go to sleeping early.
You "go to" nouns. Usually places, but sleep is one of the few actions where "go to <noun of action>" is natural.
Jan. 2, 2025
Thank you for your careful modification!I've learned a lot this time.
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I have a cold now |
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I found that I had a cold and I must to come back tomorrow. I found that I had a cold and I There's some missing context here, but I checked your previous journals. Since you're returning home tomorrow, you would use "go back" instead of come. "have to" sounds more natural than "must" here. |
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I felt a little uncomfortable in my throat last night, but I thought it was just because I got angry. |
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Today, I found that my symptoms became better bad. Today, I found that my symptoms became "better" is for improvement, so you want "worse" here |
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Especially now, I will started to have a fever! Especially now, I "will" is for future events, so shouldn't be used with "started". |
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Fortunately, there are cold medicines in my bag. |
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I always put some medicines in my bag when I travel. |
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I'm feeling so uncomfortable now, so I need to go to sleeping early. I'm feeling so uncomfortable now, so I need to go to sleep You "go to" nouns. Usually places, but sleep is one of the few actions where "go to <noun of action>" is natural. |
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I hope I'll feel better tomorrow. |
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