Nov. 30, 2021
I Had a Cold
I didn't expect that the cold I had this time would last for so long. It was about at night on the tenth of this month. I felt that my throat was a little itchy but I was not aware that I would catch a cold back then. The next few days, all the symbols of the cold came out. Running nose, sneezing and fearing cold. I still didn't want to take some medicine because I just wanted to defeat it with my body's immune system. A few days later, it still didn't get well and I didn't think I could overcome it only by my immune powers, so I took some medicine but it turned out that those medicines didn't work. The next few days, I coughed, my throat hurt and my running nose became thicker. I continued to take some Chinese medicine, but they still only had a little effect. Anyway, so far I think the cold is no longer getting worse and I feel much better now. I hope I can completely recover soon.
I Had a Cold
I didn't expect that the cold I had this time would last for so long.
It was about at night on the tenth of this month.
I felt that my throat was a little itchy but I was not aware that I would catch a cold back then.
The next few days, all the symbolptoms of the cold came out.
Running nose, sneezing and fearing coldshivering.
Maybe you want to say 'feeling cold'?
I still didn't want to take some medicine because I just wanted to defeatget rid of it with my body's immune system.
It's rare to say defeat a cold. 'Get rid of' would sound more natural.
A few days later, it still didhaven't getot/gotten well and I didn't think I could overcome it only by my immune powerssystem, so I took some medicine but it turned out that thosthe medicines didn't work.
The next few days, I coughed, my throat hurts and my running nose became thickermore serious.
Your running nose cannot become thicker, it can only get more serious.
I continued to take some Chinese medicine, but they still only had a little effect.
Anyway, so far I think the cold is no longer getting worse and I feel much better now.
I hope I can completely recover soon.
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I didn't expect that the cold I had this time would last for so long. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was about at night on the tenth of this month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt that my throat was a little itchy but I was not aware that I would catch a cold back then. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The next few days, all the symbols of the cold came out. The next few days, all the sym |
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Running nose, sneezing and fearing cold. Running nose, sneezing and Maybe you want to say 'feeling cold'? |
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I still didn't want to take some medicine because I just wanted to defeat it with my body's immune system. I It's rare to say defeat a cold. 'Get rid of' would sound more natural. |
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A few days later, it still didn't get well and I didn't think I could overcome it only by my immune powers, so I took some medicine but it turned out that those medicines didn't work. A few days later, it still |
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The next few days, I coughed, my throat hurt and my running nose became thicker. The next few days, I coughed, my throat hurts and my running nose became Your running nose cannot become thicker, it can only get more serious. |
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I continued to take some Chinese medicine, but they still only had a little effect. I continued to take some Chinese medicine, but they |
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Anyway, so far I think the cold is no longer getting worse and I feel much better now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope I can completely recover soon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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