May 10, 2024
I got my hair cut and went shopping yesterday.
Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut. I got bangs and I absolutely loved how it turned out. The hairdresser was so nice and pleasant that I chatted with her almost the whole time. After that, I explored a newly opened mall nearby. It was a bit more crowded for a weekday than I expected. I bought a lipstick, some pairs of socks and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings. I hadn’t intended to get the earrings. It was a complete impulse buy. Anyway, I had a fun day and felt refreshed!
I got my hair cut and went shopping yesterday.
Just a quick note, titles don't usually end with periods
Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut.
I got bangs and I absolutely loved how it turned out.
I think because it's so recent, you can say "love" instead of "loved"
The hairdresser was so nice and pleasant that I chatted with her almost the whole time.
After that, I explored a newly opened mall nearby.
IFor a weekday, it was a bit more crowded for a weekday than I expected.
Your sentence is 100% correct! I'm suggesting a small way to make it sound more natural
I bought a lipstick, somea few pairs of socks, and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings.
I hadn’t intended to get the earrings.
It was a complete impulse buy.
Another way to say it: "It was an absolute impulse buy."
Anyway, I had a fun day and felt refreshed!
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I'm glad you had a fun day! I'm also glad you love your new haircut :)
I got my hair cut and went shopping yesterday.
Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut.
I got bangs and I absolutely loved how it turned out.
The hairdresser was so nice and pleasant that I chatted with her almost the whole time.
After that, I explored a newly opened mall nearby.
It was a bit more crowded for a weekday than I expected for a weekday.
I bought a lipstick, some pairs of socks and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings.
I hadn’t intended to get the earrings.
It was a complete impulse buy.
Anyway, I had a fun day and felt refreshed!
I got my hair cut and went shopping yesterday.
Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut.
I got bangs and I absolutely loved how it turned out.
The hairdresser was so nice and pleasant that I chatted with her almost the whole time.
After that, I explored a newly opened mall nearby.
It was a bit more crowded for a weekday than I expected.
I bought a lipstick, some pairs of socks and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings.
I hadn’t intended to get the earrings.
It was a complete impulse buy.
Anyway, I had a fun day and felt refreshed!
I got my hair cut and went shopping yesterday.
Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut./Yesterday, I took a day off, so I went to the salon to get my haircut.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, but I offered a suggestion to use a more active voice at the beginning of a sentence and to make it more concise.
I got bangs and I absolutely loved how it turned out.
The hairdresser was so nice/kind and pleasant that I chatted with her for almost the wholentire time/most of the appointment.
You can use synonyms of nice like kind and pleasant. I offered some suggestions to rephrase the end of a sentencd
After that, I explored a newly opened mall nearby.
It was a bit more crowded for a weekday than I expected.
I bought a lipstick, some pairs of socks(,) and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings.
You can use the Oxford comma, which I put in parentheses. This is generally used when you're listing multiple things. But you don't have to use this type of comma at all situations and your sentence is right.
I hadn’t/didn't intended to get the earrings.
It was a complete impulse buyn impulsive buy./I impulsively bought the earrings.
I gave two suggestions to help your sentence sound more natural.
Anyway, I had a fun day and felt refreshed!
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Glad you got what you wanted even if it's an impulsive buy. Also, I'm glad that you got your haircut.
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Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut. Yesterday was my day off, so I went to the salon and had my hair cut./Yesterday, I took a day off, so I went to the salon to get my haircut. Your sentence is grammatically correct, but I offered a suggestion to use a more active voice at the beginning of a sentence and to make it more concise. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I got bangs and I absolutely loved how it turned out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I got bangs and I absolutely love I think because it's so recent, you can say "love" instead of "loved" |
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It was a bit more crowded for a weekday than I expected. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! It was a bit more crowded
Your sentence is 100% correct! I'm suggesting a small way to make it sound more natural |
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I bought a lipstick, some pairs of socks and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings. I bought a lipstick, some pairs of socks(,) and a pair of handcrafted flower earrings. You can use the Oxford comma, which I put in parentheses. This is generally used when you're listing multiple things. But you don't have to use this type of comma at all situations and your sentence is right. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I bought I bought a lipstick, |
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I hadn’t intended to get the earrings. I hadn’t/didn't intended to get the earrings. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a complete impulse buy. It was a I gave two suggestions to help your sentence sound more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! It was a complete impulse buy. Another way to say it: "It was an absolute impulse buy." |
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