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NoraXie

Aug. 15, 2025

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I got an Interview invitation from TIKTOK

Last two weeks, I applied two different positions of TIKTOK in CDMX.
At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, and that's make me upset and frastrated.
But after that I'm thinking why not try again if they really need hire someone why I couldn't be the one, so I sent my resume to another position two days ago.
And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was one from TIKTOK say hello to me.
Just have no idea how happy I am right now.
It also make me believe that, everything you want just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

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I got an Interview invitation from TIKTOK

Last tTwo weeks ago, I applied to two different positions ofin TIKTOK in CDMX.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team rejected me, and that'swhich makde me upset and fraustrated.

But after that, I'm thinking why notought I'd try again i. If they really need to hire someone, why I couldn't be the one, s? So I sent my resume to another position two days ago.

And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was one from TIKTOK saying hello to me.

JustYou have no idea how happy I am right now.

It also makes me believe that, everything you wantif you want something, just keep trying and don't give up in the middle halfway.

I got an Interview invitation from TIKTOKikTyok

ok maybe im being too harsh. are u emphasising the tiktok part? if thats the case then its correct

Last tTwo weeks ago, I applied two different positions of TIKTOKikTok in CDMX.

whats cdmx

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, and that's makde me upset and frastrated.

remember to speak in past tense

But after that I'mI was thinking why notof trying again because if they really need to hire someone why I couldn't I be the one, s? So two days ago I sent my resume to another position two days ago.and applied for a different position.

AndUnexpectedly, something incredible justhad happened to me w. When I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was one from TIKTOKikTok and in it, they were saying hello to me.

JustYou guys have no idea how happy I am right now.

It also make me believereinforces my point that, everything you want is possible if you just keep trying and don'not give up in the middlehalf way.

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just some word choice, structural, and grammatical changes

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NoraXie

Aug. 16, 2025

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Really appreciate your corrections, they are helpful.

I got an Interview invitation from TIKTOK

Last two weeks, I applied two different positions of TIKTOK in CDMX.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, and that's makede me upset and fraustrated.

And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was oneemail from TIKTOK saying hello to me.

Just have no idea how happy I am right now.

It also make me believe that, everything you want just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

LIn the last two weeks, I applied to two different positions ofat TIKTOK in CDMX.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team rejected me, and that's makde me upset and fraustrated.

But , after that, I'm thinking why not try again if they really need to hire someone? why I couldn't be the one, s? So I sent my resume to another position two days ago.

And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was onean email from TIKTOK say ing "hello" to me.

No "just" since you said it was this morning. "Just" implies it happened only a few minutes ago. "This morning" implies a few hours.

JYou just have no idea how happy I am right now.!

It also make me believe that, you can get everything you want if you just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

Feedback

You mostly just need to improve on your wording. Your grammar isn't bad.

Last two weeks, I've applied two different positions of TIKTOK in CDMX.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team rejected me, and that's makde me upset and fraustrated.

But after that I'm started thinking why not try again if they really need to hire someone why I couldn't be the one, so I sent my resume to another position two days ago.

Just have no idea how happy I am I right now.

It also makde me believe that, everything you want just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

I got an Interview invitation from TIKTOK


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I got an Interview invitation from TIKTOKikTyok

ok maybe im being too harsh. are u emphasising the tiktok part? if thats the case then its correct

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Last two weeks, I applied two different positions of TIKTOK in CDMX.


Last two weeks, I've applied two different positions of TIKTOK in CDMX.

LIn the last two weeks, I applied to two different positions ofat TIKTOK in CDMX.

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Last tTwo weeks ago, I applied two different positions of TIKTOKikTok in CDMX.

whats cdmx

Last tTwo weeks ago, I applied to two different positions ofin TIKTOK in CDMX.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, at first that's make me upset and frastrated.


But after that I'm thinking why not try again if they really need hire someone why I couldn't be the one, so I sent my resume to another position two days ago.


But after that I'm started thinking why not try again if they really need to hire someone why I couldn't be the one, so I sent my resume to another position two days ago.

But , after that, I'm thinking why not try again if they really need to hire someone? why I couldn't be the one, s? So I sent my resume to another position two days ago.

But after that I'mI was thinking why notof trying again because if they really need to hire someone why I couldn't I be the one, s? So two days ago I sent my resume to another position two days ago.and applied for a different position.

But after that, I'm thinking why notought I'd try again i. If they really need to hire someone, why I couldn't be the one, s? So I sent my resume to another position two days ago.

And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was one from TIKTOK say hello to me.


And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was onean email from TIKTOK say ing "hello" to me.

No "just" since you said it was this morning. "Just" implies it happened only a few minutes ago. "This morning" implies a few hours.

And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was oneemail from TIKTOK saying hello to me.

AndUnexpectedly, something incredible justhad happened to me w. When I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was one from TIKTOKikTok and in it, they were saying hello to me.

And something incredible just happened to me when I was checking my mailbox this morning, there was one from TIKTOK saying hello to me.

Just have no idea how happy I am right now.


Just have no idea how happy I am I right now.

JYou just have no idea how happy I am right now.!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

JustYou guys have no idea how happy I am right now.

JustYou have no idea how happy I am right now.

It also make me believe that, everything you want just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.


It also makde me believe that, everything you want just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

It also make me believe that, you can get everything you want if you just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

It also make me believe that, everything you want just keep trying and don't give up in the middle way.

It also make me believereinforces my point that, everything you want is possible if you just keep trying and don'not give up in the middlehalf way.

It also makes me believe that, everything you wantif you want something, just keep trying and don't give up in the middle halfway.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, and that's make me upset and frastrated.


At first, their Talent Acquisition Team rejected me, and that's makde me upset and fraustrated.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team rejected me, and that's makde me upset and fraustrated.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, and that's makede me upset and fraustrated.

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team reject me, and that's makde me upset and frastrated.

remember to speak in past tense

At first, their Talent Acquisition Team rejected me, and that'swhich makde me upset and fraustrated.

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