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Tsuki

Dec. 29, 2024

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I feel happy

I don't eat breakfast today,because theday is too cold,I like sit down in my bed,take somemovie or website in my phone.
In the afternoon,I am sweep and tidy up my house,throw away my clothes,I have many clothes but is so obsolete.
And I buy a pants l like it,it's suit me,I feel very happy.


今早起不来没吃早餐,天气太冷了习惯在被窝呆着,刷刷小视频或者看看其他网站。
下午的时候打扫卫生,扔了点衣服,太旧了。
买了条新裤子还挺适合我的,感觉不错。

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I doidn't eat breakfast today, because itheday is too cold,I like sit down in my bed,take somemovie or and watch a movie or look at a website ion my phone.

In the afternoon,I amwill? sweep and tidy up my house,throw away my clothes,. I have many clothes but is so obsoletethey are out of fashion.

obsolete is used more for words, technology, concepts, etc.

And Idditionally, I will? buy a pants l like it,it's. They suit me, so I feel very happy.

Tsuki's avatar
Tsuki

Dec. 29, 2024

20

Many vocabulary is I find with English app,I can't start study difficult vocabulary.I learned tenses today,but I don't know how to use it.Grammar is toodifficult.

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dante1321

Dec. 29, 2024

14

It'll come with practice!

153

I feel happy

I doidn't eat breakfast today, because theday iit was too cold,. I like to sit down in my bed,take watch some movie or go on a website ion my phone.

In the afternoon, I am sweept and tidyied up my house,throw and put away my clothes,. I have many clothes but isthey're so obsolete.

Obsolete sounds a bit unnatural here, so you can say "they haven't been worn in a long time"

And I buy aought a pair of pants. l like it,it'sthem, they suits me,. I feel very happy.

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Good work!

Tsuki's avatar
Tsuki

Dec. 29, 2024

20

The word“Obsolete”is found by translation app,I will hardly study grammar now,but I feel it's difficult to understand,I study tenses today,but I don't know why is past tense,what is present senses.

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judar

Dec. 29, 2024

153

我懂,英语语法多难!如果你认真学习,你会进步很快 :) 希望你能理解我。

Tsuki's avatar
Tsuki

Dec. 29, 2024

20

是的!我看你的英文我能看懂,但是我自己写不出来,有很大的问题我自己看不见,正如你写的中文有些问题我也能修正。不过你的中文水平比我的英语水平好,不过我会继续努力的,我们一起相互努力,肯定都会变得更好!

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judar

Dec. 29, 2024

153

Exactly! <3

I feel happy

I dwon't eat breakfast today, because the day is too cold,. I like to sit down in my bed,take watch some movie or check some websites in my phone.

In the afternoon, I amwill sweep and, tidy up my house, and throw away my clothes,. I have many clothes but isthey are so obsolete.

And I buy a pants. l like it,it'sthem. They suit me, I feel very happy.

Feedback

Good job :-)

Tsuki's avatar
Tsuki

Dec. 29, 2024

20

I study senses with chatgpt today,but I can't remember why to use past tense,how to used present senses,l feel is too difficult,I understand.I need some help.

I feel happy


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I don't eat breakfast today,because theday is too cold,I like sit down in my bed,take somemovie or website in my phone.


I dwon't eat breakfast today, because the day is too cold,. I like to sit down in my bed,take watch some movie or check some websites in my phone.

I doidn't eat breakfast today, because theday iit was too cold,. I like to sit down in my bed,take watch some movie or go on a website ion my phone.

I doidn't eat breakfast today, because itheday is too cold,I like sit down in my bed,take somemovie or and watch a movie or look at a website ion my phone.

In the afternoon,I am sweep and tidy up my house,throw away my clothes,I have many clothes but is so obsolete.


In the afternoon, I amwill sweep and, tidy up my house, and throw away my clothes,. I have many clothes but isthey are so obsolete.

In the afternoon, I am sweept and tidyied up my house,throw and put away my clothes,. I have many clothes but isthey're so obsolete.

Obsolete sounds a bit unnatural here, so you can say "they haven't been worn in a long time"

In the afternoon,I amwill? sweep and tidy up my house,throw away my clothes,. I have many clothes but is so obsoletethey are out of fashion.

obsolete is used more for words, technology, concepts, etc.

I feel sick


And I buy a pants l like it,it's suit me,I feel very happy.


And I buy a pants. l like it,it'sthem. They suit me, I feel very happy.

And I buy aought a pair of pants. l like it,it'sthem, they suits me,. I feel very happy.

And Idditionally, I will? buy a pants l like it,it's. They suit me, so I feel very happy.

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