Nov. 26, 2023
I don't to be a Chinese student.
Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even a middle school student has a feeling of disinterest in learning. As the vice class monitor in my class, I naturally face greater pressure. Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious.
I am only thirteen years old this year, and at this age, I need to study seven subjects. Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired.
What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours?
I don't want to be a Chinese student.
Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even a middle school student has a feeling ofs feel disinterested in learning.
As the vicea class monitor in my class, I naturally face even greater pressure.
Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful enough, the issue of good enough, (interpersonal communication / communication) makes me anxious.
Beautiful is for appearance.
I am only thirteen years old this year, and even at this age, I need to study seven subjects.
Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired.
What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, w. Why are their achievements higher than ours?
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As a teacher from America, and now a teacher in Japan, neither Asian nor Western countries are better than each other. Each is different and has its own strengths. But, as someone teaching in Japan, I know that the Asian school system is difficult for children. I'm sorry you feel so much pressure! I hope you can find time to balance studying and being a kid too.
I don't want to be a Chinese student.
The title needs a verb, I assume you meant "want"
Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful[satisfactory, accomplishment, achievement, etc.] enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious.
"Beautiful" could be used there, but sounds somewhat unnatural. Beautiful is used more for things like art, nature, poetry, music, physically attractive people, etc.
You can either use a noun like achievement or accomplishment here, or an adjective like satisfactory or outstanding. I personally would use a noun here.
What confuses me even more is that if the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours?
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Really well done! You use a lot of commas, which is neither good nor bad. I also use a lot of commas when I write. However, using a lot of commas can lead to accidentally writing run-on sentences or writing overly-complicated sentences.
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I don't to be a Chinese student. I don't want to be a Chinese student. The title needs a verb, I assume you meant "want" I don't want to be a Chinese student. |
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Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even a middle school student has a feeling of disinterest in learning. Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even |
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As the vice class monitor in my class, I naturally face greater pressure. As |
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Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious. Although I ranked first in the class, which is already "Beautiful" could be used there, but sounds somewhat unnatural. Beautiful is used more for things like art, nature, poetry, music, physically attractive people, etc. You can either use a noun like achievement or accomplishment here, or an adjective like satisfactory or outstanding. I personally would use a noun here. Although I ranked first in the class, which is already Beautiful is for appearance. |
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I am only thirteen years old this year, and at this age, I need to study seven subjects. I am only thirteen years old this year, and even at this age, I need to study seven subjects. |
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Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired. Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired. |
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What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours? What confuses me even more is that if the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours? What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China |
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