Dec. 16, 2019
I don't like Mondays.
Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?
I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible just work a little because I'm getting quite exhausted. I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, and the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts. But, anyway, I need a rest.
Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax. So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get your precious presents <3.
P. S. Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong. What a pity! This website and its amazing community helps me more.
I don't like Mondays.
Do days of the week exist just to measure their distance from Mondays?
I wish I didn't have to work on Mondays, or if that's imnot possible, just work a little, because I'm getting quite exhausted.
I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, andbut the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.
Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it soa little longer then I can finally relax.
So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get youeveryone can get their precious presents <3.
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Generally everything is pretty good, not too many grammatical errors! Keep on practising
Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance fromtime until Mondays?
Gramatically, yours was correct, but I think this portrays your context better.
"distance from" would be counting Tuesday is one day after Monday
"time until" is like, "ugh, only 2 days until Monday!"
I wish I didn't have to work on Mondays, or if that's impossible, I wish I could just work for a little bit because I'm getting quite exhausted.
I added "have to" just to imply that is an obligation.
"for a little" and "a little bit" are the same, I personally would just say "for a little bit" if I were expressing this to a friend or family member.
But, anyway, I need a rest.
Yours is also correct, just was showing you a different way! Since you are saying "but anyway" as a single introductory phrase, you can use only one comma if you want.
Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax.
So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get your precious presents <3.
P.
S.
Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong.
What a pity!
This website and its amazing community helps me more.
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You write very well!
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You can put in a phrase (such as but anyway, or an idiom like "it's raining cats and dogs", or just a singular word such as "community") and see it used in native text in context!
My assumption for grammarly's weak language is that you used the word "quite exhausted" similar to "very exhausted" and not a stronger synonym.
For example:
instead of "very tired" you could say "exhausted"
you added quite/very which means you are a stage more than exhausted, meaning you can use a stronger word.
Personally, I would say "I'm getting burned out." (Definition: Job burnout is a special type of work-related stress — a state of physical or emotional exhaustion) Meaning, I am more than physically tired of work. You don't need Mondays off because you need a nap, you need Mondays off because you mentally are tired.
I don't like Mondays.
Do the other days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?
I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible I could just work a little on those days, because I'm getting quite exhausted.
I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, andbut then the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.
But, aAnyway, I need a rest.
Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax.
So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well, and that you get your precious presents <3.
Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong.
What a pity!
This website and its amazing community helps me more (than Grammarly).
I don't like Mondays.
Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?
I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible, I wish I could just work a little because I'm getting quite exhausted.
When you say "Do X, or if [something], do Y", it sounds better to mimic the pattern you used with the verbs in the "Do X" portion. The second part in your original text sounds like "or if that's impossible I wish I just work", which is ungrammatical.
I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, andbut then the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.
"But" because you're showing contrast, "then" is optional but sounds better because it clearly shows the second part follows after the first.
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I'm not sure what Grammarly means by "weak language", the English you wrote was very good. I will be celebrating Christmas here in the United States soon as well, so Merry Christmas to you!
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But, anyway, I need a rest.
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