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alexwong2164

Sept. 7, 2021

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I don’t know why, before is not ok, now is ok

Few years ago, I promise myself to post a diary each day.

If I fail to that I will feel sad and guilty.

Because I was lazy.

On the other hand, I will always look at how diaries I post each month.

If I can post up to 90%, I will be happy.

Few months ago, I start an intensive physical training.

Because of that I almost stop posting any diary.

But this time I didn’t feel any unhappy at all.

In fact, I feel happy that “posting diary” is not the only thing I can do.

I changed!

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I don’t know why, before is nowasn't ok, nowbut not it is ok

FA few years ago, I promised myself to post a diary each day.

If I fail to do that I will feel sad and guilty. because I was lazy.

Because I was lazy.

On the other hand, I will always look at how many diaries I post each month.

If I can post up to 90%, I will be happy.

FA few months ago, I started an intensive physical training.

Because of that I almost stopped posting any diary. entries.

But this time I didn’t feel any unhappy at all.

In fact, I feel happy that “posting a daily diary” is not the only thing I can do.

I changed!

I don’t know why, before is not ok, now is ok


I don’t know why, before is nowasn't ok, nowbut not it is ok

Few years ago, I promise myself to post a diary each day.


FA few years ago, I promised myself to post a diary each day.

If I fail to that I will feel sad and guilty.


If I fail to do that I will feel sad and guilty. because I was lazy.

Because I was lazy.


Because I was lazy.

On the other hand, I will always look at how diaries I post each month.


On the other hand, I will always look at how many diaries I post each month.

If I can post up to 90%, I will be happy.


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Few months ago, I start an intensive physical training.


FA few months ago, I started an intensive physical training.

Because of that I almost stop posting any diary.


Because of that I almost stopped posting any diary. entries.

But this time I didn’t feel any unhappy at all.


But this time I didn’t feel any unhappy at all.

In fact, I feel happy that “posting diary” is not the only thing I can do.


In fact, I feel happy that “posting a daily diary” is not the only thing I can do.

I changed!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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