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But, like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listen to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest.

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Today I started watching a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the investigation of the murders of 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation.

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Today I started a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the investigation of the murders of 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation.

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I liked the first episodes because it goesthey went back in time andto shows us the rap scene of the 90s.

But there's alsoThere was a ton of conflict: white people vs. black people, cops vs. gangsters and East cCoast vs. West cCoast.

"But" needs something to contrast, e.g. "It was a wild and romantic era, but there was also a ton of conflict."

I will most likely watch the rest of the season 1 because I feel I can learn a lot about history, music, and how the society was back then.

Maybe I can even learn some slang and finally understand what they rapped about in the rap songs of my teenage years.