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Well... Is my first time here, I meet ts web 'cause I ask to chatgpt and I dont know what are my fails. If someone read ts, please, tell me what is wrong here. To conclude, I wanna know if someone wanna talk about music (hip-hop if u can), football (soccer) or dinosaours. Good nigth :)

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I don't know

Well...

It is my first time here, I meet ts web 'cause I ask to chatgptam here because I asked ChatGPT and I dont know what are my failsults are.

If someone reads this, please, tell me what is wrong here.

To conclude, I wannat know if someone wannats to talk about music (hip-hop if u canyou like), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

Good nigth :)

I don't know

Well...

IThis is my first time here,. I meet ts web 'came to this website because I ask to ced Chatgpt and I don't know what are my failsures/mistakes are.

Hey!
So, first off you used some abbreviations ('short forms') for a few words. 'Ts' is usually not used for 'this'. You can use 'cause' for because in a casual setting.
'Meet' is used for people, not non-living things! You can use, 'I came to this website'.
Web is the same as the internet, whereas this (langcorrect) is a website! (Like a page in a book! :))
Ask is used for present tense or in situations that happen regularly, when you are talking about yourself! (I ask him, "Do you like dinosaurs?"/ I always ask Chatgpt when I need help).
Fails is not a noun, it is a verb (action word!) so you can say, 'Chatgpt always fails to tell me what my mistakes are'. Chatgpt is doing something, which here is failing!
(Fails is for present tense, that is the object is failing right now as you are speaking).
A correct word instead would be failures or mistakes, though here I would suggest 'mistakes'! (Failures is a stronger term used for bigger mistakes that are usually irreversible!)
'I don't know what are my mistakes' feels very forced and robotic! 'What are my mistakes' is a question. However, you are saying this as a statement! Saying, 'I don't know what my mistakes are' is better! (It is not a question but something you are talking about/describing in a sentence).

If someone reads this, please, tell me what is wrong here.

'Ts' replaced by 'this'.
Read is used in two situations! One is when you talk about yourself in the simple present tense/doing something regularly, so 'I read this book everyday' or 'I read this book when I am sad'. Hear you pronounce it as 'read'. The second case is when in simple past tense! As in 'I read this book yesterday'. Though it is written as 'read', it is prounounced as 'red'.
Here it is 'someone' that is, it is in third person (first person- I/we, second person- you, third person- she/he/they). So we use 'reads'. (present tense).
Since you already put a comma before 'please', there is no need to put one after it as well. (It is not grammatically wrong, however writing it this way feels more natural!)

To conclude, I wanna/want to know if someanyone wannats to talk about music (hip-hop if you can), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

Wanna is informal but you can use it after 'I', just not grammartically correct (it is a slang). → I want to know is grammatically correct.
This is a very subtle grammar point but using 'Someone' means it's a specific or unknown person and is used in positive statements. (Someone left their bag here).
'Anyone' refers to any person at all and can be used in questions. (Does anyone want coffee?)
You are asking if there is any person who fits the condition, without assuming they exist. 'Someone' usually means it's a specific person or a person who fits a certain criteria, like someone who is strong, or someone who left their bag with you.
This is very subtle and you will slowly learn the 'correctness' of it all with time and lots of reading!
Dinosaours→Dinosaurs (spelling error).

Good nigtht :)

Spelling error! (However, good night to you too! :D)

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Your English overall, is pretty good! It makes sense and I can understand what you are trying to say. I would advise that you study a bit more grammar (especially 'tenses'). For now, refrain from using slangs/abbreviations while writing! Once you can write proper english, slangs/informal speech will automatically be easy for you. Also, READ!! Nothing helps learning a language than reading. :)) Your knowledge of English is pretty good! Right now, all you need to do is read books (to sound more natural) and revise/learn grammar topics like tenses, articles and prepositions. Cheers and wishing you all the best!! :D

It is my first time here,. I meet ts web 'because I ask toed chatgpt and I dont know what are my fails.ults are.

If someone reads this, please, tell me what isI did wrong here.

ToIn concludesion, I wannat to know if someone wannats to talk about music (hip-hop if u can), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

Good nigtht :)

I don't know

Well...

Is my first time here, I meet ts web 'cause I ask to chatgpt and I dont know what are my fails.

If someone read ts, please, tell me what is wrong here.

To conclude, I wanna know if someone wanna talk about music (hip-hop if u can), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

Good nigth :)

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Is my first time here, I meet ts web 'cause I ask to chatgpt and I dont know what are my fails.


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IThis is my first time here,. I meet ts web 'came to this website because I ask to ced Chatgpt and I don't know what are my failsures/mistakes are.

Hey! So, first off you used some abbreviations ('short forms') for a few words. 'Ts' is usually not used for 'this'. You can use 'cause' for because in a casual setting. 'Meet' is used for people, not non-living things! You can use, 'I came to this website'. Web is the same as the internet, whereas this (langcorrect) is a website! (Like a page in a book! :)) Ask is used for present tense or in situations that happen regularly, when you are talking about yourself! (I ask him, "Do you like dinosaurs?"/ I always ask Chatgpt when I need help). Fails is not a noun, it is a verb (action word!) so you can say, 'Chatgpt always fails to tell me what my mistakes are'. Chatgpt is doing something, which here is failing! (Fails is for present tense, that is the object is failing right now as you are speaking). A correct word instead would be failures or mistakes, though here I would suggest 'mistakes'! (Failures is a stronger term used for bigger mistakes that are usually irreversible!) 'I don't know what are my mistakes' feels very forced and robotic! 'What are my mistakes' is a question. However, you are saying this as a statement! Saying, 'I don't know what my mistakes are' is better! (It is not a question but something you are talking about/describing in a sentence).

It is my first time here,. I meet ts web 'because I ask toed chatgpt and I dont know what are my fails.ults are.

It is my first time here, I meet ts web 'cause I ask to chatgptam here because I asked ChatGPT and I dont know what are my failsults are.

If someone read ts, please, tell me what is wrong here.


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If someone reads this, please, tell me what isI did wrong here.

If someone reads this, please, tell me what is wrong here.

'Ts' replaced by 'this'. Read is used in two situations! One is when you talk about yourself in the simple present tense/doing something regularly, so 'I read this book everyday' or 'I read this book when I am sad'. Hear you pronounce it as 'read'. The second case is when in simple past tense! As in 'I read this book yesterday'. Though it is written as 'read', it is prounounced as 'red'. Here it is 'someone' that is, it is in third person (first person- I/we, second person- you, third person- she/he/they). So we use 'reads'. (present tense). Since you already put a comma before 'please', there is no need to put one after it as well. (It is not grammatically wrong, however writing it this way feels more natural!)

If someone reads this, please, tell me what is wrong here.

To conclude, I wanna know if someone wanna talk about music (hip-hop if u can), football (soccer) or dinosaours.


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ToIn concludesion, I wannat to know if someone wannats to talk about music (hip-hop if u can), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

To conclude, I wanna/want to know if someanyone wannats to talk about music (hip-hop if you can), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

Wanna is informal but you can use it after 'I', just not grammartically correct (it is a slang). → I want to know is grammatically correct. This is a very subtle grammar point but using 'Someone' means it's a specific or unknown person and is used in positive statements. (Someone left their bag here). 'Anyone' refers to any person at all and can be used in questions. (Does anyone want coffee?) You are asking if there is any person who fits the condition, without assuming they exist. 'Someone' usually means it's a specific person or a person who fits a certain criteria, like someone who is strong, or someone who left their bag with you. This is very subtle and you will slowly learn the 'correctness' of it all with time and lots of reading! Dinosaours→Dinosaurs (spelling error).

To conclude, I wannat know if someone wannats to talk about music (hip-hop if u canyou like), football (soccer) or dinosaours.

Good nigth :)


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Good nigtht :)

Good nigtht :)

Spelling error! (However, good night to you too! :D)

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