July 27, 2025
I don´t now
For my, the death is very similar to sleep, you only close your eyes, your breath become low and you didn´t now when you maind is gone. In my case is calming to think in that way and of cours I will be happy if when I pass, the people I love is there, waiting for my, and rest in peace.
Para mí, la muerte es similar a dormir, tu solo cierras los ojos, tu respiración se vuelve lenta y tu ni siquiera sabes cuando tu mente se ha ido. En mi caso eso me tranquiliza pensar de esa manera y por supuesto, sería muy feliz si cuando me muero, las personas que amo están ahí, esperando por mí y descansando en paz.
I dDon´'t Know
changed to English title case for capitalization of titles
For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, because you only close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know when your maind ihas gone.
In English, "the" is often dropped from nouns being discussed semi-distantly. Por ejemplo, "el arte" would just be written as "art."
"becomes" is correct because the subject "you" is singular
"didn't know" is in the past tense, but "close" and "becomes" are not, so I changed "didn't" to "don't"
In my case, it is calming to think in that way, and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love isare there, waiting for my,e and resting in peace.
people goes with love, like "person" would go with "loves"
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Nice job! Commas are tricky, maybe refer to a guide about using them in prepositional phrases and appositive or parenthetical phrases
I don´'t know
This was also in your other correction. The apostrophe character when you type should be ' not `
For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, you onlyjust close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know when you maind is gone.
In my case it's calming to think of death in that way and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love isare there, waiting for mye, and rest in peace.
I don´'t know
For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, you only. You just close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know when you maind is gone.
In my case, it's calming to think of it in that way and of course I will be happy if when I pass, the people I love isare there, waiting for my,e and I rest in peace.
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Good job! Keep writing :)
I don´t know
For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, y. You only close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know whenre your maind ihas gone.
In my case, it's calming to think in that way and of course I will be happy ifthat, when I pass away, the people I love isare there, waiting for my,e and resting in peace.
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I don´t now I don´t know I don I don This was also in your other correction. The apostrophe character when you type should be ' not ` I changed to English title case for capitalization of titles |
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For my, the death is very similar to sleep, you only close your eyes, your breath become low and you didn´t now when you maind is gone. For m For m For m For m In English, "the" is often dropped from nouns being discussed semi-distantly. Por ejemplo, "el arte" would just be written as "art." "becomes" is correct because the subject "you" is singular "didn't know" is in the past tense, but "close" and "becomes" are not, so I changed "didn't" to "don't" |
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In my case is calming to think in that way and of cours I will be happy if when I pass, the people I love is there, waiting for my, and rest in peace. In my case, it's calming to think in that way and of course I will be happy In my case, it's calming to think of it in that way and of course I will be happy if when I pass, the people I love In my case it's calming to think of death in that way and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love In my case, it is calming to think in that way, and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love people goes with love, like "person" would go with "loves" |
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