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milkyway

Jan. 13, 2024

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I Cooked

In my previous post, I wrote that I want to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka rice vermicelli.
After that, I found a YouTube video which cooking bifun looked delicious, so I really cooked it myself.
I could cook quite delicious.
I’d like to cook it again.


昨日の投稿で台湾に行ってビーフンが食べたいと書いた。
その後で、YouTubeで美味しそうなビーフンのクッキング動画を見つけたので、実際に作ってみた。
なかなか美味しくできた。
また作ろうと思う。

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I Cooked

In my previous post, I wrote that I want to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka rice vermicelli.

After that, I found a YouTube video whichthat taught you how to cooking bifun, and it looked delicious, so I really cooktried it myself.

I could cookt was quite delicious.

Or you can say, "I could cook quite well."

I’d like to cook it again.

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

In my previous post, I wrote that I wanted to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka AKA rice vermicelli.

After that, I found a YouTube video which made cooking bifun looked delicious, so I reactually cooked it myself.

I could cook quitean make food that's incredibly delicious. / I can cook well. / The bifun I made turned out delicious.

I am unsure of your exact intentions here, but I am assuming it's either about the bifun itself turning out delicious or your cooking skills being excellent in general.

I’d like to cookmake it again.

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments.
Your comment made me why it wasn't make sense.

In my previous post, I wrote that I wanted to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka rice vermicelli.

After writing that, I found a YouTube video which cooking bifun looked delicious, so I reallyof someone cooking delicious looking bifun, so I decided to cooked it myself.

I could cookmade it, and it was quite delicious.

I’d like to cookmake it again.

Using 'make' instead of cook can make sentences sound natural

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Some nice writing, good job!

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.

After that, I found a YouTube video whichere cooking bifun looked delicious, so I really cooked it myself.

I could cookwas able to make it quite delicious.

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

After that, I found a YouTube video which made cooking bifun looked delicious, so I really cooked itmade it for myself.

It sounds more natural.

I couldmanaged to cook quite a delicious meal.

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Glad it was tasty!

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

I Cooked

In my previous post, I wrote that I wanted to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka rice vermicelli.

After that, I found a YouTube video in which cooking bifun looked delicious, so I reactually tried cookeding it myself.

I could cookwas able to make it quite delicious.

I’d like to cook it again.

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Nice!

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

I Cooked

In my previous post, I wrote that I want to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka rice vermicelli.

After that, I found a YouTube video whichon cooking bifun looked deliciousdelicious-looking bifun, so I reactually tried cookeding it myself.

I could cookmanaged to make it quite delicious.

I’d like to cook it again.

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Good job (writing and cooking)!

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

In my previous post, I wrote that I wanted to go to Taiwan and eat authentic bifun, aka rice vermicelli.

After that, I found a YouTube cooking video in which cooking bifun looked delicious, so I really cooked it myself.

I could cookThe food I cooked was quite delicious.

I’d like to cook it again.

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milkyway

Jan. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

I Cooked


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After that, I found a YouTube video which cooking bifun looked delicious, so I really cooked it myself.


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It sounds more natural.

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I am unsure of your exact intentions here, but I am assuming it's either about the bifun itself turning out delicious or your cooking skills being excellent in general.

I could cookt was quite delicious.

Or you can say, "I could cook quite well."

I’d like to cook it again.


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