Dec. 1, 2021
I changed!
We have a shopping mall just selling computer.
Is got more than 100 shops and you can buy everything related to computer.
In past I will usually go there to buy a specific model.
I even like to hang out in such place.
But nowadays everybody just shopping from internet or smartphone.
Go a store and looking at the real thing become not so common.
This morning I was thinking go this shopping mall again.
But in the afternoon, I already give up this idea.
Maybe I will go there someday.
I changed!
We have a shopping mall that just sellings computers.
An alternative: we have a shopping mall which has only computer shops
(since it's not actually just computers that are sold)
Is gott has more than 100 shops and you can buy everanything related to computer related.
In the past I will usuallyused to go there to buy a specific model.
I even liked to hang out in such placthere.
But nowadays everybody just shoppings from on the internet or from theircomputer or smartphone.
Going to a store and looking at the real things has become not soless common.
This morning I was thinking gof going to this shopping mall again.
But inby the afternoon, I galready give up on this idea.
Maybe I will go there someday.
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I changed! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We have a shopping mall just selling computer. We have a shopping mall that just sell An alternative: we have a shopping mall which has only computer shops (since it's not actually just computers that are sold) |
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Is got more than 100 shops and you can buy everything related to computer. I |
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In past I will usually go there to buy a specific model. In the past I |
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I even like to hang out in such place. I even liked to hang out |
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But nowadays everybody just shopping from internet or smartphone. But nowadays everybody just shop |
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Go a store and looking at the real thing become not so common. Going to a store and looking at |
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This morning I was thinking go this shopping mall again. This morning I was thinking |
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But in the afternoon, I already give up this idea. But |
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Maybe I will go there someday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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