Dec. 14, 2021
I can’t find his book
I am a simple person.
Or, I am an easily fooling person.
Few days ago I read a book which introduce an author and some of his books.
Next book I almost go to book store and buy his book!
Fortunately, at last minute I suddenly remember I can use library.
Borrow books for free!
So, I go to the nearest library and check out the books from this author.
In the computer shows that book is in the library.
But when I go to the bookshelf that not isn’t there.
I ask the staff help me but the book is just not in that library.
I need go to other library!
I can’t find his book
I am a simple person.
Or, I am an easily foolinged person.
FA few days ago I read a book which introduced an author and some of his books.
Next book I almost go toI almost went to the book store and buy hisought his next book!
(I think, I'm quite sure if this is what you meant)
Fortunately, at the last minute I suddenly remembered I can use the library.
BI can borrow books for free!
So, I gowent to the nearest library and checked out the books from this author.
In tThe computer showsed that the book is in the library.
But when I gowent to the bookshelf that not isn’it was not there.
I asked the staff to help me but the book iwas just not in that library.
I need to go to another library!
Feedback
Nice work! Most of my corrections were about tense. When you write about something that happened to you, you should use past tense.
I hope you can find the book you were looking for!
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I can’t find his book This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am a simple person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Or, I am an easily fooling person. Or, I am an easily fool |
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Few days ago I read a book which introduce an author and some of his books.
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Next book I almost go to book store and buy his book!
(I think, I'm quite sure if this is what you meant) |
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Fortunately, at last minute I suddenly remember I can use library. Fortunately, at the last minute I suddenly remembered I can use the library. |
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Borrow books for free!
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So, I go to the nearest library and check out the books from this author. So, I |
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In the computer shows that book is in the library.
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But when I go to the bookshelf that not isn’t there. But when I |
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I ask the staff help me but the book is just not in that library. I asked the staff to help me but the book |
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I need go to other library! I need to go to another library! |
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