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alexwong2164

Dec. 21, 2021

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I can have my home back!

Finally, everyone in my house is gone just me left.

I can do whatever I want.

My house isn’t small but when everybody is here.

All I can do is stay inside my room.

Now I can do whatever I want.

I don’t need to go to library, gym…

I can do all that in this house and no one will in my way.

That is the best charismas present I get!

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I can have my home back!

Finally, everyone in my house is gone just m's gone from my house, and I'm the only one left.

I can do whatever I want.

My house isn’t small butexcept for when everybody is here.

All I can do is stay inside my room.

NBut now I can do whatever I want.

"but" contrasts with the previous sentence better.

I don’t need to go to the library, or the gym…

I can do all that in this house and no one will get in my way.

That is the best charismas present I could ever get!

"best present I could ever ask for" is another expression one can use here.

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Very nicely done :)

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alexwong2164

Dec. 23, 2021

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thanks

I can have my home backthe house to myself!

Finally, everyone in my house is gone jusbut me left.

Or you could say,

My family (or whoever is living with you) finally left, and I'm home alone.

My house isn’t small, but when everybody is hereome, all I can do is stay in my room.

It wasn't a complete sentence.

All I can do is stay inside my room.

I've added this to the other sentence to make it a complete sentence.

I don’t need to go to the library, gym…the gym, etc.

I can do all thatose things in this house, and no one will be in my way.

That is the best chaChristmas present I get've received!

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Nice job! Just made some changes to correct the grammar.

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alexwong2164

Dec. 23, 2021

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thanks

My house isn’t small but when everybody is here.


My house isn’t small, but when everybody is hereome, all I can do is stay in my room.

It wasn't a complete sentence.

My house isn’t small butexcept for when everybody is here.

All I can do is stay inside my room.


All I can do is stay inside my room.

I've added this to the other sentence to make it a complete sentence.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can have my home back!


I can have my home backthe house to myself!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, everyone in my house is gone just me left.


Finally, everyone in my house is gone jusbut me left.

Or you could say, My family (or whoever is living with you) finally left, and I'm home alone.

Finally, everyone in my house is gone just m's gone from my house, and I'm the only one left.

I can do whatever I want.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I can do whatever I want.


NBut now I can do whatever I want.

"but" contrasts with the previous sentence better.

I don’t need to go to library, gym…


I don’t need to go to the library, gym…the gym, etc.

I don’t need to go to the library, or the gym…

I can do all that in this house and no one will in my way.


I can do all thatose things in this house, and no one will be in my way.

I can do all that in this house and no one will get in my way.

That is the best charismas present I get!


That is the best chaChristmas present I get've received!

That is the best charismas present I could ever get!

"best present I could ever ask for" is another expression one can use here.

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