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Nozomi

Oct. 9, 2024

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I begin the post here (it’s my first post )

I introduce myself!

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!
I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰I love it🐈

I want to be able to speak English well and fast 😂
But that needs to take time I guess 💭

I’m going to keep studying ✊✨

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I have a cat whose name is Marie and itshe's so cute🥰I love it🐈 ¶
her🐈¶

I want to be able to speak English well and fast 😂

But that
needs to takes time I guess 💭


I’m going to keep studying ✊✨

I recommend putting she/her/he/him instead of it/it's for your cat

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This was really good(˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)

I begin the post here (it’s mMy fFirst pPost )!

Or: "It Begins Here!"

ILet me introduce myself!

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!

I have a cat whose name is Marie and itshe's so cute🥰! 🥰 I love it🐈 ¶
her 🐈¶

I want to be able to speak English
wenaturally and fastwell 😂
But that
needs to takes time, I guess 💭


I’m going to keep studying
✊✨

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頑張ってね!

I begin the post here (it’s mMy first post )!

ILet me introduce myself!

In Japanese it's very common to say 初めまして in a situation like this, but it's not necessary in English 🙂 You can just start your introduction: "Hi! I'm an..."

I’m an English learner (who is) from Japan!

"who is" can be omitted (removed) and it is still OK

I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰I love it🐈


I want to be able to speak English well and fast
(to learn quickly?) 😂
But that
needs towill take time, I guess 💭


I’m going to keep studying ✊✨

To speak fast = say many words in a short amount of time (like 30 words in 2 seconds)
To quickly learn to speak = reach a level where you can talk, and to do it in a small amount of time

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Welcome to Langcorrect :)

I’ll begin theo post here (it’s my first post )

I’ll introduce myself!

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!

I shall begin the posting here (it’s my first post )

I will introduce myself!

Or:
"Let me introduce myself!"

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!

This is perfect grammar, good job!

In English, you can simplify this and simply say:
"I’m an English learner from Japan!"

I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰. 🥰 ¶

I love it🐈 ¶
him/her. 🐈¶

I want to be able to speak English well and fast
. 😂

But that
needs to takes time, I guess. 💭


I’m going to keep studying
. ✊✨

When talking about your pet, you can use him/her.

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Nozomiさん

Welcome to the site!

Great work on your first post. Please continue to keep posting and practicing your English. There are a handful of users here who are happy to help you and answer any questions you have about English. In return, please also help us with our Japanese!

頑張ってください!

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lummers

Oct. 9, 2024

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Oh, and this website breaks up individual sentences wherever there is a full-stop or period.

Try to add a full-stop after every sentence. That way, it will be easier for you to see the corrections. They don't tell you about that when you sign up to the website 😊

I begin the post here (it’s my first post )


I shall begin the posting here (it’s my first post )

I’ll begin theo post here (it’s my first post )

I begin the post here (it’s mMy first post )!

I begin the post here (it’s mMy fFirst pPost )!

Or: "It Begins Here!"

I introduce myself!


I will introduce myself!

Or: "Let me introduce myself!"

I’ll introduce myself!

ILet me introduce myself!

In Japanese it's very common to say 初めまして in a situation like this, but it's not necessary in English 🙂 You can just start your introduction: "Hi! I'm an..."

ILet me introduce myself!

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!


I’m an English learner who is from Japan!

This is perfect grammar, good job! In English, you can simplify this and simply say: "I’m an English learner from Japan!"

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!

I’m an English learner (who is) from Japan!

"who is" can be omitted (removed) and it is still OK

I’m an English learner who is from Japan!

I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰I love it🐈 I want to be able to speak English well and fast 😂 But that needs to take time I guess 💭 I’m going to keep saying ✊✨


I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰I love it🐈 I want to be able to speak English well and fast 😂 But that needs to take time I guess 💭 I’m going to keep studying ✊✨


I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰. 🥰 ¶

I love it🐈 ¶
him/her. 🐈¶

I want to be able to speak English well and fast
. 😂

But that
needs to takes time, I guess. 💭


I’m going to keep studying
. ✊✨

When talking about your pet, you can use him/her.

I have a cat whose name is Marie and it's so cute🥰I love it🐈


I want to be able to speak English well and fast
(to learn quickly?) 😂
But that
needs towill take time, I guess 💭


I’m going to keep studying ✊✨

To speak fast = say many words in a short amount of time (like 30 words in 2 seconds) To quickly learn to speak = reach a level where you can talk, and to do it in a small amount of time

I have a cat whose name is Marie and itshe's so cute🥰! 🥰 I love it🐈 ¶
her 🐈¶

I want to be able to speak English
wenaturally and fastwell 😂
But that
needs to takes time, I guess 💭


I’m going to keep studying
✊✨

I have a cat whose name is Marie and itshe's so cute🥰I love it🐈 ¶
her🐈¶

I want to be able to speak English well and fast 😂

But that
needs to takes time I guess 💭


I’m going to keep studying ✊✨

I recommend putting she/her/he/him instead of it/it's for your cat

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