March 25, 2024
I Ate a Baconator
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for my first time I ate Wendy’s Baconator, which I had been interested in for a while.
I was delicious, however I had a little complain.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.
土曜日に神戸に行ったので、以前から気になっていた、ウェンディーズのベーコネーターを初めて食べた。
美味しかったけど、少し不満がある。
メニュー写真ではベーコンがバンズからはみ出すほど沢山入っていたのに、実際の商品はバンズの中に収まっていて、明らかに少なかった。
店員に「これであっている？」と聞いてしまった。
商品写真は魅力的に見せるために、実物と違うことは理解しているけど、ちょっと違いすぎるのではと思った。
I Ate a Baconator
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for my first time I ate a Wendy’s Baconator, which I had been interested in trying for a while.
It was delicious, however I had a little complain.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.
I Ate a Baconator
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for my first time I ate Wendy’s Baconator for the first time, which I had been interested in for a while.
It was delicious, however, I had ave some little complaints.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.
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Haha, yes, American advertising look extremely different to the real product. That's why, over here, Japan's food pictures have a reputation of looking just like the real thing!
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for my first time I ate Wendy’s Baconator for the first time, which I had been interested in for a while.
It was delicious, however I had a little complaint.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?".
March 29, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
I Ate a Baconator
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for mythe first time, I ate Wendy’s Baconator, which I had been interested incurious about for a while.
It was delicious,; however, I had a little complaint.
In the menu photo found in the menu, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacoin reality, there was clearly less of it since it was contained within the bun.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.
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Great job!!
March 29, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
I Ate a Baconator
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for mythe first time I ate Wendy’sa Baconator from Wendy's, which I had been interested in (trying) for a while.
It was delicious, however I had aone little complain.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of/from the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real onething in order to look attractive, but I thought it waslooked too different.
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Yeah, that's the big issue with fast food, isn't it? I feel like the one thing you can get that looks like the pictures is maybe pizza or something.
March 29, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
I wanted to eat a hamburger like the one in the photo.
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The correct expression is "for the first time"
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In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real oneproduct in order to look attractivemake it look more appealing, but I thought it was too different.
March 29, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for mythe first time I ate Wendy’sa Baconator from Wendy's, which I had been interested in for a while.
"Wendy's Baconator" is understandable but "a baconator from Wendy's" is a little bit more clear.
It was delicious, however I had a little complaint.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but in reality the bactual product wason was completely contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I understand that product photos are different from the real onething in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.
This was understandable but "the real thing" sounds a bit more natural.
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Great job! I could understand everything easily but I made a few corrections to help you sound a bit more natural and add clarity.
March 29, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.
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