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I Ate a Baconator

I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for my first time I ate Wendy’s Baconator, which I had been interested in for a while.
I was delicious, however I had a little complain.
In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.
I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"
I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.


土曜日に神戸に行ったので、以前から気になっていた、ウェンディーズのベーコネーターを初めて食べた。
美味しかったけど、少し不満がある。
メニュー写真ではベーコンがバンズからはみ出すほど沢山入っていたのに、実際の商品はバンズの中に収まっていて、明らかに少なかった。
店員に「これであっている?」と聞いてしまった。
商品写真は魅力的に見せるために、実物と違うことは理解しているけど、ちょっと違いすぎるのではと思った。

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I Ate a Baconator

In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.

I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"

I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.

I Ate a Baconator

In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.

I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"

I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.

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I Ate a Baconator

I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"

I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.

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March 29, 2024

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I Ate a Baconator

I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"

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In the menu photo, there was so much bacon that it was sticking out of the bun, but the actual product was contained within the bun, and there was clearly less bacon.

I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"

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I was delicious, however I had a little complain.


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I went to Kobe on Saturday, and for my first time I ate Wendy’s Baconator, which I had been interested in for a while.


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I asked the store clerk, "Is this the right one?"


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I understand that product photos are different from the real one in order to look attractive, but I thought it was too different.


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