June 14, 2021
I Am With My Son Today
Yesterday it was really hot and it rained at night. I would have slept with the window open. I also woke up by the hot weather at midnight that I had to turn on the air conditioner. It was rainning again this morning. The weather was still wet and hot. I had to keep the air conditioner on that I could feel a bit better. I take care of my kid myself because his mother went to work today. She would have been day off today due to Dragon Boat festval. Currently my son is drawing and enjoying himself. I plan to cook him some meals for lunch. I am not pretty good at cooking. But his Mom have prepared the raw materials for my cooking. I just need to deal with the food easily.
昨天真是太热了，晚上下雨了，我本来想开着窗户睡觉的。到半夜我又被热醒了，我只能把空调打开。今天早晨又开始下雨，
天气还是很闷热，必须要开着空调才舒服一些。我独自在家照看孩子，因为她的妈妈今天上班去了，今天是端午节，本来应该休息的。现在我的儿子正在画画，他乐在其中。中午我再给他做点饭吃，我不太会做饭，他的妈妈把食材准备好了，我稍微的再加工一下就行。
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Yesterday it was really hot and it rained atduring the night.
The sentence was correct but reads a little better like this.
I would have slept with the window open.
past tense. I slept
I alsowas woken up by the hot weather at midnight that Iand had to turn on the air conditioner.
It was rainning again this morning.
The weather was still wet and hot.
I had to keep the air conditioner on so that I could feel a bit better.
I takeook care of my kid myself because his mother went to work today.
past tense correction
She would have beenhad a day off today due to Dragon Boat festival.
past tense correction
Currently my son is drawing and enjoying himself.
I plan to cook him somea meals for lunch.
meal is singular in the context of one lunch
I am not pretty good at cooking.
You can say "I am pretty good" but not in the sense that you are not good at something.
But hHis Mom haved prepared the raw materials for my cooking.
past tense correction
I just need to deal witht will help me manage the food more easily.
Not sure if I understand the context but have changed it to something
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Good work. Most mistakes were using conditional or present instead of the past tense but you will get there eventually :)
June 14, 2021
That's really help me a lot. It is so kind of you to correct my sentence carefully. Thank you so much.
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Yesterday it was really hot and it rained at night. Yesterday it was really hot and The sentence was correct but reads a little better like this. |
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I would have slept with the window open. I past tense. I slept |
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I also woke up by the hot weather at midnight that I had to turn on the air conditioner. I |
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It was rainning again this morning. It was rain |
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The weather was still wet and hot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had to keep the air conditioner on that I could feel a bit better. I had to keep the air conditioner on so that I could feel a bit better. |
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I take care of my kid myself because his mother went to work today. I t past tense correction |
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She would have been day off today due to Dragon Boat festval. She past tense correction |
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Currently my son is drawing and enjoying himself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I plan to cook him some meals for lunch. I plan to cook him meal is singular in the context of one lunch |
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I am not pretty good at cooking. I am not You can say "I am pretty good" but not in the sense that you are not good at something. |
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But his Mom have prepared the raw materials for my cooking.
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I just need to deal with the food easily. I Not sure if I understand the context but have changed it to something |
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