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The names of languages are capitalized in English.
Many people will still understand if you say oral English, but it is more casual to say spoken English.

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There are several different words that could be used in place of arouse, depending on your intention. Your original wording made sense but might sound strange to a native speaker outside of a formal context.

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Journalist is the person who writes articles. Journal is the noun.

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I am trying to make some foreign friends online because I want to practice my oral english in this wayspeaking.

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They are friendly, I am very appreciativegrateful for their kindness.I hope my english was improved by this manner and besides,I also want to know more bigger world instead of ignorance for the world.

If you want to use appreciate, saying 'I appreciate their kindness very much' or 'I appreciate their kindness a lot' sounds more natural

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I am trying to make some foreign friends online because I want to practice my oral eEnglish in this way.

Languages should all start with a capital letter. 'In this way' is already implied so you don't need it.

In daily life, I am a shy grilirl, so I'm afraid to chat with enmy English teacher in eEnglish.

Actually, I dare to speak eEnglish in front of strangers, and I think it is a little strange to do so with cChinese.

It's a little unclear what you mean by 'I think it is a little strange to do so with Chinese.' Do you mean you think it's strange to talk to strangers in Chinese?

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When 'a' is before a word that starts with a vowel, it turns into 'an'.

In order to arouse my interest in eEnglish, I choose to add foreigners ,or follow their account.

You would only use the word 'choose' if there are multiple options to choose from.

Yes, we talk through this app.

Make sure you always put a space after punctuation marks.

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A journalist is a person who writes news.

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The word "English" is usually capitalised when talking about the language or nationality.

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Do you mean that you feel more comfortable speaking English with strangers rather than in Chinese? or do you mean that you don't dare to speak English in front of strangers?

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Usually "although" and "but" aren't used in the same sentence because they mean the same thing.

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Thank you for your reading!